FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 15

Originally posted by: nisha150

It was pefect it wuld say it👍🏼 ayan and asad action scene super duper dilshad tld the truth to ayan was superb👏 i dnt even know that i should feel happy or sad for rashid's death...hopefully in the last minutes of his life he was with his family...atleast now he maybe in peace...!! but i really fell sooo sad for him😭 it was perfect dilshad beside him , his son catching his hand and his DIL beside his son for support and his daughter hugging him😊😊 and the stupid shrieen she is irratating candy...she is soo self centered😡 and that ayan he just ran away to dubai...he is so mean ...i thought he wuld help his bhai but he just ran away😡😡 in short it was a great updatee u r the best writer i wuld say👏 update nxt prt soon..😳

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

morning 🤗

Emotional updaitiya :'(

WITH BROMANCE -__________- 😆

Y rashid died? :'(

Aahhoo! Ayaan ran off to Dubai 🤣

Shirin? :O Now what will she do? will commit suicide? :O

Loved the scene at Hospital :'( teary teary me :'( poor poor Asad :'(

Originally posted by: aashiqua

i always wanted rashid to unite with asad..bt nw..k..ayaan sendng humaira and farhan to dubai? To razia? Hd doesnt knw dat she is d devil!?

Originally posted by: skavya

Ohhh !!!!! so emotional...i am speechless dear...

last death scene was heart touching...rashid was with his family at last moment...just like he was just waiting for them...

Asad & Ayaan's fighting scene was superb...but what about ayaan...he ran away like a coward...

does he know about razia...

u done a gr8 job...every turns of the story make me eager to know what more is coming...

just beautiful...

Originally posted by: dreamingeyes12

hey there.. you write amazing.. very detailed and thoughtful.. just a minor observation in the last update.. there was a line Asad hesitated but Zoya squeezed his clenched fist with both her palms, "please Mr. Khan."
Doesn't zoya have a cast on her right arm/hand? How can she clench Asad's fist with both her palms? :) Unless I am missing something...

I just tend to pay a lot of attention specially when the writing is incredible.. so just wanted to point it out.

Keep writing.. You are too good :)

Originally posted by: Enchantress

You know that was the first time I cried for Rashid. I know he isn't a bad person, he is good at heart. It was just the situations and circumstances that he had to take such wrong steps. But then he was punished at the end. The people for whom he had left the only loving family he had left him when he was in the death bed. Be it Shireen for whom he did a lot. He never loved her but then he accepted her as his wife when she needed someone to save her prestige. Ayaan, he wasn't his real son but then he gave him his name and the respect in the society. He gave everything to him that was Asad's and Najma's only right. At the end what did he get in return from these people- they left him Ayaan thought of his son and wife. Shireen said- "Mera dum gut ta hai yahan, mein bhi chalungi" wow.. I pity this man... But what I am happy about is in his last days he had Dilshad with him, he had got the chance to be with his son and daughter and his son called him Abbu... His wish was fulfilled and I guess he was a happy man when he took his last breath.

Ayaan, I pity him too. He is another coward. A liar. A selfish man who has always thought of only himself and his happiness. I pity him really,

I love the update. Emotional one and that really connects me to the story.

Continue soon.

Dee

Nice update plz continue soon 😊

Now I could comment for this ff after reading till the latest chapter... I don't know how to explain this experience of mine... I have read one of your stories 'Tumhari Amanat' all thanks to Vibha who introduced me to that ff... I absolutely adored that ff n is quite dear to me... n that's why your name ff here caught my eyes... I tried to read this like a month ago n I read about 8 chapters n then stopped... I got a lil lazy... but every time I saw the ff in the forum I had this burning desire to read... I tried to avoid it but finally yesterday morning I started reading n finished till the present chapter by today morning... almost 24 hours!!! I said this just to let you know how much I loved this story n I couldn't keep away even when I tried!! It's that much special... I know most probably this will end soon but still I would like to get a pm for this ff every time you update... in fact I would like to get a pm every time you write... :)
Now to the story... it's an amazing story... since I read it in one day I could really see those changes buy may be I weren't able to enjoy it as early readers but still I certainly had a flow while reading...
Ayaan is making a grave mistake... he is doing the same mistake Rashid did 22 years ago n it had cost him a lot... n it will cost Ayaan too but Humeira n Farhan will also be affected just like Dilshad, Najma n Asad suffered then...
What I really like about this story is the intense love story interwoven with a beautiful family story n a thriller one...
Asad's character really intrigued me from the beginning... he is one character who had gone through changes like drastic changes... his situation demanded that... but he changed for good...
I love Zoya for her strength of character n her determination to not let anyone dictate her life while at the same time she'll give her life for her loved ones... just like how Dilshad described her to Ayaan...
I would like to keep going on about the story but it's 3:30 in the morning... really had to go to bed... so bye for now... :)
Please don't forget to pm me when you update... :)

Originally posted by: mysticlover

Now I could comment for this ff after reading till the latest chapter... I don't know how to explain this experience of mine... I have read one of your stories 'Tumhari Amanat' all thanks to Vibha who introduced me to that ff... I absolutely adored that ff n is quite dear to me... n that's why your name ff here caught my eyes... I tried to read this like a month ago n I read about 8 chapters n then stopped... I got a lil lazy... but every time I saw the ff in the forum I had this burning desire to read... I tried to avoid it but finally yesterday morning I started reading n finished till the present chapter by today morning... almost 24 hours!!! I said this just to let you know how much I loved this story n I couldn't keep away even when I tried!! It's that much special... I know most probably this will end soon but still I would like to get a pm for this ff every time you update... in fact I would like to get a pm every time you write... :)
Now to the story... it's an amazing story... since I read it in one day I could really see those changes buy may be I weren't able to enjoy it as early readers but still I certainly had a flow while reading...
Ayaan is making a grave mistake... he is doing the same mistake Rashid did 22 years ago n it had cost him a lot... n it will cost Ayaan too but Humeira n Farhan will also be affected just like Dilshad, Najma n Asad suffered then...
What I really like about this story is the intense love story interwoven with a beautiful family story n a thriller one...
Asad's character really intrigued me from the beginning... he is one character who had gone through changes like drastic changes... his situation demanded that... but he changed for good...
I love Zoya for her strength of character n her determination to not let anyone dictate her life while at the same time she'll give her life for her loved ones... just like how Dilshad described her to Ayaan...
I would like to keep going on about the story but it's 3:30 in the morning... really had to go to bed... so bye for now... :)
Please don't forget to pm me when you update... :)

wooow all i can say i just adored this story thanx for you continue soon plz