FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 13

Originally posted by: _vineeta_

Hi Sangeeta, loved it specially the end, Asad and Rashid part, with Dilshaad next to Rashid and Zoya next to Asad for support..

So Rashid is gone really, glad he found peace at last. Shireen is very self centered woman, felt bad for him. One mistake costed him big time.

Now coming to Ayaan and Asad fight, you bluffed me😆I thought that's it, Ayaan all goody goody so fast but then came your googly😉

Loved Asad set of priority specially for Zoya, and good she did tell him what hurt her instead of just ok.

So where did Ayaan go, to Razia? Does he know her? I thought Imran was double crossing Razia and Rasid, else no connection..

Originally posted by: AAK0007

OMG! What an update di. You nailed it. Amazing writing. Love it.
so ayan want to kill asya. He thinks that they betray them. Aur soch v kya sakta hain yeh selfish.He also shot a fire. I m disappointed with zoya why she dont give this ba****d a hard slap when he pointed gun towards her and asad. Also why she easily forgive him after sayin those bad words. Asad is like a lion roar in your story.Glad to see that he stands for his love zoya and directly threaten ayan for insulting zoya.And also ask him to seek apology from zoya. I m love this part. Dont know when we get back this lion in the show?
So ayan betray asad trust, zoya trust and escape for dubai. Hope asad men pointed and captured him. I want next time whe these brothers meet asad beat this bloody creature. Thank God one useless creature dead. Hope rashid also died in show. There is no use of this character in the show.
My asya r engaged. I m happy about this. Aab toh story main hi aisa hoga. Show main chance 0.01% hain asya reunion ki.
I think interesting things comes in our way. Now razia vs asya war. I m waiting for it. The story is getting more interesting now. I m addicted towards your story di.
Thanks for pm and update soon.

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.

😲 I dont know if i should be sad that Rashid died or happy that he got his punishment for whatever wrong deeds he did!
And ayaan! I knew you cant trust him 😡 How could he after calling Asad his idol, still try to escape like that? And that to going to Dubai? I really hope Asad catches him on time! He needs to learn a lesson! And argghh Shireen, she has always irritated me in the show and she is no less here! Blaming Rashid for everything, itna hi blame karti ho toh why not just let him go back to his family? But aah its too late now :(

Brilliant update di! I wonder what is gonna happen next now! Excited :D

Originally posted by: bheegi

I feel that was the best way for Rashid to go. He had committed enough crimes so I couldn't prove him non guilty and at the same time he needed a closure with his family- for him their forgiveness was bigger than any other forgiveness

Originally posted by: webuser7

Sangeeta, what an emotionally super packed and mind blowing update! Some thing expected, some thing not expected but not surprising and some thing very shocking.

Shukriya! Shukriya!

A standing ovation for a superlative update.

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Except for romance and humor (would have been out of place, so I am not complaining), it had a plethora of emotions: hate, anger, contempt, anxiety, fear, shock, grief, regret and helplessness to name a few!

yeah, romance would have been out of place but still added some touchy feely scenes😆

To start, yes, we expected to see Ayaan at the door yielding the gun! I expected to see him angry but not that out of control! Wow, he would have shot Asad if Zoya had not diverted the aim. Hot headed Ayaan spat at hot headed Asad and Asad punched him in the face. Show ki bromance ki poori bhadaas nikaal di aapne!! 😃 Holy crap! He grabbed Zoya by the neck and threatened to kill her and then verbally abused her. Asad ne uska haat kyon nahi toda? How could Ayaan do it to Zoya? Ehsaan faramosh! Dilshad saved the day and broke the fight and revealed Asad's identity. Was that a shock or what for Ayaan?! Dilshad's harsh but true words inflicted more pain than her slap! But Ayaan deserved it!! Asad was skeptical but gave in to brotherly feelings and gave a chance to Ayaan to redeem himself!

yes...what I can see, I shall imagine and write😆 That's what ffs are for

Although every bit was awesome, thanks to the current track, I loved:

"And another thing Ayaan!" Asad replied firmly, "I want you to apologize to Zoya. Mere khoon ke daman mein tho pehle se hi bahut daag hain, lekin agar koi meri mohabbat ke daman par daag lagaayega, tho main us insaan ko kabhie maaf nahin kar sakta, chaahe wo mera chota bhai hi kyun na ho!"

Zoya glanced at Asad with a tearful smile. Ayaan had humiliated her womanhood and her love for Asad; she was grateful to Asad for prioritizing her feelings over his brother's.

Sigh! Wish the Asad on the show would learn from his bromance mistake soon!!

I so want to see such a scene on QH

Ayaan's regret, guilt and confusion was palpable. Nice choice of song! Pity Ayaan decided to bolt with his wife and child! His sad childhood has really maligned his character. He does not even care for his Mom. But then she is selfish too. What a dysfunctional family! At least Ayaan cares for someone! She is heartless!

Ayaan obviously has trust issues. He watched Asad's graduation video. Nice touch!

Dilshad's secret is out. Asad, Zoya and Najma found out about Rashid being in the hospital. You explained Dilshad's love for Rashid so well. Sigh, true love. What a waste.😒 Glad Asad decided to see his Abbu.

Now the most shocking part of the update: Rashid's demise. Very very sad.

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The hospital scene brought tears to my eyes. What a waste. Kids who longed for their father, a woman who longed for her love, a man who longed for his true family. Very emotional and poignant scene. At least Rashid got to see his kids and love for the last time and his true family was with him in his last moments. I really can't say more. Too sad.

I felt that was the best end for Rashid. If he ahd survived, he would be imprisoned for life or a long time. Getting forgiveness from his family was probably the best way he could redeem himself

You are a truly talented and brilliant writer! I leave you with a song that reminds me a lot about Rashid's plight:

http://youtu.be/81v-RHKZbiw

will watch it later...thanks RK. Glad you liked the emotional update. I didn't want to make it too melodramatic