FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

you can make people cry as well 😭

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fanraya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Beautiful update, I am speechless, Rashid meeting Asad was so beautiful, I could imagine the whole scene, simply superb. Amazing update, you are an awesome writer.. 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Awesome..loved it very much..felt bad though for Rashid but at the same time, asad called him abbu..and they all had the family reunion..

Update the next part soon.

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Vrinda Sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Awesome part Sangeeta... So the brother's finally met, but Ayaan has betrayed Asad once again... He couldn't stand for the truth and ran away like a coward... Rashid's death is sad but he was able to meet his family at the last minute of his life was good...

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SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: bheegi

Hey dear...I think I remember you from DMG days. Thanks for reading the whole ff (you have a lot of patience😃)

Let's see what happens next😉

Its not my patience but the story that kept me glued! =)
And lol you remember me from your regular posts of qh here. I joined when dmg was kinda over :P
But i have like read all your ffs from then i dont know how many times. I kinda lost count now! My all time fav has been 'Definitely maybe yes'! Looking forwatd to reading more ffs from you with Asya as the lead soon :D

And yayy you updated! Lemme go read =)

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SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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😲 I dont know if i should be sad that Rashid died or happy that he got his punishment for whatever wrong deeds he did!
And ayaan! I knew you cant trust him 😡 How could he after calling Asad his idol, still try to escape like that? And that to going to Dubai? I really hope Asad catches him on time! He needs to learn a lesson! And argghh Shireen, she has always irritated me in the show and she is no less here! Blaming Rashid for everything, itna hi blame karti ho toh why not just let him go back to his family? But aah its too late now :(

Brilliant update di! I wonder what is gonna happen next now! Excited :D

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anushreemishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I know i am late and very very late so a big sorry for that*holds my ears*.i know you don't want me to say sorry but i feel really bad for being so late but i was busy with the party at home and i wanted a good uninterruped hour to peacefully comment so here i am😃

I read the update just after waking up and yes it made my day but it was so emotional i was afraid i start crying on my dining table itselfbut what an update di👏this has to be one of the most emotional updates that you have written till now

Well we all knew it was ayaan at the door so no surprises😆but what a fight di saari bhadas nikaal di show ki yahan pe...chalo atleast aapko apna bro clash mila nahi to aapne khud hi apni story mein epic bro clash karwa diya😆what is better than the two trying to kill each other.

Good to see zoya trying to be a hero even with a cast on her hand.I remembered when zoya chased dilshad's shooter.

Ayaan pointed the gun at zoya😲could he have really killed her?How can he be so insensitive and jerk to the woman who has been a mother to his son for so long?Ayaan continues to disappoint me big time😕he called her a wh**e😡can i kill him?How can a man ever justify addressing a woman like that🤢

Oh so i see Mr.Khan finally turning into a sher when his woman was insulted.I want to hug for this di finally we see asad in action trying to protect his lady's honour😃

I knew it i knew it that dilshad would be the one to handle ayaan and take care of the situation and i was right😃I am so glad that he slapped ayaan and told him that he can never ever become like his bhaijaan,the guy needs to be told the truth.I loved Dilshad's sherni momaa wali dahaad and the speech after she slapped ayaan👏she made ayaan realize how much asad and zoya have done for him and all he ahs done in return is insult them😡

You didn't let Dilshad disappoint me here and i am so happy for this.And finally someone knocked some sense into the idiot ayaan,you must be so happy hai na di?

A tremulous Ayaan stood up and lowered his head, "I-I will do anything for you bhaijaan. You have always been my idol. Is se zyaada meri kya khush kismati ho sakti hai ki main aapke kaam aa paaun?"

Wow these lines show how much he has been neglected as a child and how much he had carved for his father's love that all he wants is to be like asad.It is at times like these that i feel bad for the guy

"And another thing Ayaan!" Asad replied firmly, "I want you to apologize to Zoya. Mere khoon ke daman mein tho pehle se hi bahut daag hain, lekin agar koi meri mohabbat ke daman par daag lagaayega, tho main us insaan ko kabhie maaf nahin kar sakta, chaahe wo mera chota bhai hi kyun na ho!"

Zoya glanced at Asad with a tearful smile. Ayaan had humiliated her womanhood and her love for Asad; she was grateful to Asad for prioritizing her feelings over his brother's.

Can i just say that i love you for this.I can't really explain how much i love your asad for standing up for his lady's honor and respect and glad he made it clear that he won't put with anyone dishonouring zoya be it his younger brother.And i am so glad to see asad prioritizing zoya over ayaan.When the hell will see thsi in Qh?😡

I am glad that ayaan apologized and he agreed to help asad find the main culprits.

You showed asyaan hugging😲I thought you hated when they hugged😆

I love the song"awaarapan banjaarapan"😳

Ayaan can't trust anyone can he?The effect of not being loved by anyone throughout his life and being surrounded either by foolish,selfless people or criminals

Just when i thought ayaan was actually willing to make up for his mistakes he decided to run away like a coward.Like father like son😕well i guess you hate ayaan a little too much to just redeem him so quickly don't you?But i expected this you wouldn't just let ayaan off the hook so easily.

Shireen is such a selfish person,her husband is lying on the death bed and she wants to just run away😕I hate shireen here.In the show she atleast loves Rashid

good that asad is acting smartly and is getting ayaan followed.I guess we are heading for a bigger bro clash now when asad will catch ayaan betraying him.

"Baat panaah ki nahin hai ammi. You did the right thing but I wish you had discussed this with me. Not lied to me. Bachpan se ab tak yahi tho sunte aa rahe hain aapse ki aapko jhooth se kitni nafrat hai? Kya Rashid sahib ko dekhkar aap apne usoolon ko bhool gayi?"

👏Way to go asad.I am glad he made it clear to Dilshad that he wasn't hurt by the fact she abetted a criminal but because she lied to him.I just wish people would stop lying to each other and start communicatind,aadhi se zyada problems hi khatam ho jayengi but i guess love does makes you do all kinds of silly things.i loved the way zoya supported Dilshad😳I miss zoya dilshad bonding so much.

i am so happy that asad finally decided to meet Rashid and that too on his own.

At that moment, he was not a criminal, but a man who had made the wrong choices in life and instead of fighting against his failures, had surrendered to them in the name of destiny.

Beautiful lines di..I shiver just at the thought of having to see a dear one of yours like that...I couldn't imagine what asad and others would have gone through seeing rashid like thatRashid asad encouter was just so beautiful di...I loved how you showed asad's hesistance and then zoya helping him through that.

"Asad beta." Rashid's hand touched Asad's finger.

"Abbu." Asad couldn't hold his tears as he grabbed his father's hand and cried silently.

Najma ran over and hugged her father also.

Rashid placed his arm around his daughter, "meri choti si tamatar kitni badhi ho gayi hai."

I had tears in my eyes while reading these lines😭No matter how much your parent has hurt you or how he had abandoned you,you always crave for them and you always end up forgiving them all you need is one little gesture of love showing that he cares😃

He didn't want to place his son in a moral dilemma. Just then, he felt Rashid's hand go limp in his palms.

I guess Rashid gave asad the greatest gift that a father could have given to his son.He released him of the dilemma that asad would have had to face had rashid been alive.

Rashid had bid farewell to them forever. His soul had waited to reunite with his beloved family. They were all there; their eyes filled with tears, they had all forgiven him for is sins. Even though he felt he never deserved them, he held onto them till his last breath. For him deliverance was a loving glance from Dilshaad, a hug from his daughter and a tear in his son's eyes...

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Beautiful lines di so so beautiful.I feel so bad for rashid but i guess he left this world a content man.I never thought you will kill off Rashidi thought that since you love dilshad and Rashid so much that they would probably unite at the end of your story but I am happy(not that i am sadist) but i guess Rashid deserved this he paid for his mistakes but you didn't let him leave empty handed as you said he left a content man after finally having received a loving glance from Dilshaad, a hug from his daughter and a tear in his son's eyes...

I salute you di for giving us such a beautiful scene..

P.S.-I love you...

i know i have said this many times before too but you never fail to amaze me..You are a wonderful writer di and i love how fair and true you have been to your characters👏👏

Loads of hugs and kisses and sorry for being so late

Love you love you love you❤️

P.P.S.-Did i make up for being late with this extra long comment😳

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webuser7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Sangeeta, what an emotionally super packed and mind blowing update! Some thing expected, some thing not expected but not surprising and some thing very shocking.

A standing ovation for a superlative update.

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Except for romance and humor (would have been out of place, so I am not complaining), it had a plethora of emotions: hate, anger, contempt, anxiety, fear, shock, grief, regret and helplessness to name a few!

To start, yes, we expected to see Ayaan at the door yielding the gun! I expected to see him angry but not that out of control! Wow, he would have shot Asad if Zoya had not diverted the aim. Hot headed Ayaan spat at hot headed Asad and Asad punched him in the face. Show ki bromance ki poori bhadaas nikaal di aapne!! 😃 Holy crap! He grabbed Zoya by the neck and threatened to kill her and then verbally abused her. Asad ne uska haat kyon nahi toda? How could Ayaan do it to Zoya? Ehsaan faramosh! Dilshad saved the day and broke the fight and revealed Asad's identity. Was that a shock or what for Ayaan?! Dilshad's harsh but true words inflicted more pain than her slap! But Ayaan deserved it!! Asad was skeptical but gave in to brotherly feelings and gave a chance to Ayaan to redeem himself!

Although every bit was awesome, thanks to the current track, I loved:

Zoya glanced at Asad with a tearful smile. Ayaan had humiliated her womanhood and her love for Asad; she was grateful to Asad for prioritizing her feelings over his brother's.

Sigh! Wish the Asad on the show would learn from his bromance mistake soon!!

Ayaan's regret, guilt and confusion was palpable. Nice choice of song! Pity Ayaan decided to bolt with his wife and child! His sad childhood has really maligned his character. He does not even care for his Mom. But then she is selfish too. What a dysfunctional family! At least Ayaan cares for someone! She is heartless!

Ayaan obviously has trust issues. He watched Asad's graduation video. Nice touch!

Dilshad's secret is out. Asad, Zoya and Najma found out about Rashid being in the hospital. You explained Dilshad's love for Rashid so well. Sigh, true love. What a waste.😒 Glad Asad decided to see his Abbu.

Now the most shocking part of the update: Rashid's demise. Very very sad.

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The hospital scene brought tears to my eyes. What a waste. Kids who longed for their father, a woman who longed for her love, a man who longed for his true family. Very emotional and poignant scene. At least Rashid got to see his kids and love for the last time and his true family was with him in his last moments. I really can't say more. Too sad.

You are a truly talented and brilliant writer! I leave you with a song that reminds me a lot about Rashid's plight:

http://youtu.be/81v-RHKZbiw

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webuser7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: _vineeta_
Hi Sangeeta, loved it specially the end, Asad and Rashid part, with Dilshaad next to Rashid and Zoya next to Asad for support..

So Rashid is gone really, glad he found peace at last. Shireen is very self centered woman, felt bad for him. One mistake costed him big time.

Now coming to Ayaan and Asad fight, you bluffed me😆I thought that's it, Ayaan all goody goody so fast but then came your googly😉

Loved Asad set of priority specially for Zoya, and good she did tell him what hurt her instead of just ok.

So where did Ayaan go, to Razia? Does he know her? I thought Imran was double crossing Razia and Rasid, else no connection..