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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4:


You've been a...



WOW!!!!!





This chapter was sooo A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E! ❤️

Asad wrapped his arms around Zoya's waist.

Asad "My Zoya is fine with anyplace as long as I am with her."

Zoya (That is true totally but Asad is just acting.)



This was tooo cute! 😉 Asad is flirting full on! 😆

Nuzzhat "Zoya, you and Asad look just made for each other."

Asad "Thank you!"

Dave "So how long have you both been together?"

Asad "3 months..."

Zoya "1 month!"

Nuzzhat "What do you mean?"

Asad "I have been persuading her for 3 months but she accepted the proposal just a month back."

Dave "How did you guys meet?"

Asad "Well I had gone to the country side market to buy some antiques. And I had bumped into her."

Dave "Oh! The shop where Zoya sells stuff?"

Asad "Yah!"


Hahahahaha!!!!


Thoda planning ke saath jhoot bola karo! Warna pakde jaoge! 🤣

Then,

Asad "But with me its different she doesn't need to tell me stuff after all it's a heart to heart connection."

Nuzzhat "Oh so you people plan to get married soon?"

Zoya "No!"

Dave "You guys not marrying??"

Asad "Course we will... But Zoya doesn't want it soon though I am still trying to convince her for it."

Zoya (Marriage with Asad... That will be...)

Zoya (weird... nah)

Zoya (a dream come true)

Dave "Gosh Zoya you are blushing like anything."

Zoya (Why have I suddenly developed this new ability to blush?)


I'm really loving this! ❤️ They are pretense is NATURAL! 😉

Then,

Zoya "Huh! What happened?"

Asad "Incredibly foolish..."

Zoya "What am I doing on the floor? And why are you over me?"

Asad "A bullet just brushed past you."

Zoya "I am sorry! I should be more careful."




So sweet! 😳


Zoya "I want you to head to your home right away. I can't let you in trouble due to me."

Asad "And I can't leave you here. I won't even if I was not your bodyguard."

Zoya (Not my bodyguard? He would protect me then too!)

Asad pulls Zoya in a tight hug.

Asad "Let me tell you a secret..."

Asad "You are the first girl who has ever cried in my arms."

Asad "And it feels good to make you feel better."

Zoya "Really?"

Asad "Yah silly... Do you feel better?"

Zoya "A lot..."

Asad "You should be lucky that I am your bodyguard?"

Zoya "And why so?"

Asad "If I wasn't I'd probably try to take advantage of you right now."

Zoya (I wouldn't mind that though!)

Zoya "What do you mean?"

Asad "I was just kidding. You get embarrassed easily though."

Zoya "You say stuff like that."




Asad letting out his secret! 😳 Kya baat hai Asad miyan! 😉 Full-on flirting going on? 😉

Mathew "Zoya, let me help you settle in while Nikhat and Asad make dinner and argue about the stuff they want to. Zoya, you can also pick the room you want to stay in."

Zoya (Asad and I in different rooms! That will be... so not nice)

Zoya "Sure!"


Awww... Poor Zoya.. She is used to sleeping in Asad's arms now! 😳 Don't worry! He won't leave you alone in that room at night! 😳

After sometime Zoya and Matthew walk into the kitchen to see Asad and Nikhat talking seriously.

Matthew "You guys still fighting?"

Asad and Nikhat become quiet on hearing this.

Zoya (Something's fishy! They were certainly not only fighting! Maybe some important talk!)




Dekhte hain ab kya hoga! 😆

Asad "Zoya, before you head to your room I need to ask something."

Zoya "Sure!"

Asad "Are you in love with me?"

Zoya (How do I tell him I do?)

Zoya "Of course I don't like you!"

Asad "You hate me?"

Zoya "I meant I don't like you in the whole lovely dovey way."

Asad "Glad we sorted it out. Cause I had a feeling you do and just wanted to clear it not. After all you are my client and I am your bodyguard."

Zoya (I am heartbroken now.)

Zoya "Yah!"


Poor baby Zoya! Heartbroken!



Please tell her you love her Asad! ❤️



And give her a Gift! 😳

Zoya's turmoil and break down was beautifully written!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The Rain scene was cute! Loved the conversation! ❤️ OMG! The storm at the orphanage? 😲 He threw both the phones in the ocean? 😲

Hope they'll be safe and sound somewhere! 😊

Asad "Zoya, trust me. All will be fine."

Zoya "I lost my mom in a similar storm."

Asad wrapped his arms around Zoya's shoulders and pulled her close.

Zoya "We were coming from Duclan to here. The boat crashed due to the storm. No one survived except me. Your dad saved me. I still remember my mom's smile as she saw me safe and the sea engulfed her. I have always been afraid of travelling via sea ever since then."

Asad "I promise you that nothing will happen to you. Just close your eyes and keep your head on my shoulder."

Zoya did as instructed and Asad pulled her even closer.

Asad "I'll be there for you always with all my life!"


Totally loved this ^^ convo between Asad and Zoya! 😳 I'm sure he will be there for her and keep her safe with all his life!

He is Zoya's saviour! 😳



P.S.: You promised me a KISS! 😡

I'm totally in love with this story!


Now I have to wait to read further!!!

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! I wanna know what happens next? 😳

Love the whole update! ❤️

Continue soon! 😳





Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️




*hi five*
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Note ~ For FF to SS:

FF to SS... Well, I knew this a week back! 😆
I totally understand the difficulty of managing two FFs and college at the same time!


Let me tell you a secret.. 😳




I hope you heard me! 😃


P.S.: Waiting for the New Stories! 😃

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Phew! Finally done with posting all the previous comments! 😉

*FLYING KISS*


Love you heaps baby.. Going to Read Chapter 5... 😳



xoxo

@Ayra - Your turn! 😉

Thanks for waiting! 🤗
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
My turn! RES!!
Mrina - 🤗
Unres

First of all Congratulations on the new thread!! 🥳

Loved this update!! Finally they confessed!! 🥳
Aww!! Zoya did not want to be hurt more so was giving curt replies to Asad
I love Zoya's granny..She so worldy wise that she knows what going on in their minds😉 and I also like how she is pushing Zoya to let go her feelings😉
Zoya's mom and Asad's mom were friends??😲..Good this might bring them closer!
Asad was so hurt when he heard about his mom😭

Loved Asad Zoya and the whole map and the car sequence😆...Poor Zoe! She cried when the car falls in the marsh! Aww!! Asad kisses her tears away😳😳

And then the station master and his wife😆...Asad and Zoya pretending to be Man and wife😉...Irish men I tell you!! They want Asad to give a real kiss and whoa!! What a kiss!!😳😳 😳😳
Zoya is all red and she wants to be kissed by Asad every night😉😉 😳😳😳

And then the wedding sequence!
Thank god Zoya is all safe now!😊 and Asad is all jealous with Mathew again for dancing so closely with his Zoya 😉
I loved how Asad said he wants to look out for Zoya at all times!😃 and I am really glad Asad and Zoya clear the social status crap and talk about their feelings and confess and again Kiss 😳😳


Love ya 🤗

p.s- sorry about the late comment.. had typed one this afternoon but lost the page accidently😭
Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

My turn! RES!!
Mrina - 🤗


Love you! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Congrats on da new thread and nice update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Wow Awesome update

Granny actually read Zoya like a book and also gave her an advice...love u granny
On station master and his wife's insistence,Asya have their first kiss ever...Aww cute

Mathew's arrival result in a jealous Asad and thus confession follows...which is really superb

This ooe of my fav chapter afterall its abt confession and over protective Asad

Its really a fabulous,awesome,fantastic and flawless update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
wow...awesum update..congo for new thread...th.ks...do pm me nxt tym plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on the new thread...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love and confession


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