#2|| AsYa SS: With All My Life (Chp 5 to Chp 8) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Jackass ... 😆
Lovely update ...beautiful 😃
Congo for new thread 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-



CONGO FOR NEW THREAD! 🥳
Wish you many more threads to come! 🤗

Wooohooo!!! PARTY TIME!!!! 🥳

I know I'm Special! 😉 I love you more! ❤️

Bodyguard Asad Ahmed Khan reporting on duty Madam! 😉



This was the first thing that came into my mind! 😆 But seriously.. This story is really MY FAVOURITE! ❤️ I love it to bits!

~x~



Big hug to you my baby! 🤗 Lot more waiting for you! 😉


I love all the siggies

Especially the jahapanah bond ones

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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-


Hello... I'm here with my comments for Chapter 5:

Awesome Chapter! 👏

MY FAVORITE ONE TILL DATE!!!! 😳 After all.. It's CONFESSION! ❤️

Asad is so protective of her! 😳 Yayy! They reached Dublin! 😃 and Granny is here! 😳

Asad's Mom and Zoya's Mom's were best friends! and Nuzzhat's mom too! 😃 Awesome! 👏

Asad leaves the room and calls it a night as well.

Granny "You love him, don't you."

Zoya (Am I that obvious?)

Granny "He loves you too!"

Zoya (Things like this just bring up my hopes!)

Granny "He won't admit it that soon."

Zoya "That is cause he doesn't love me."

Granny "Just follow my advice. Let go of your feelings for a day. Treat him like a stranger for a day. He'll come around."

Zoya "No point trying."

Granny "I know you will give it a try."

Zoya "I'll go take a nap."


Awww.. Granny! *BIG HUG* to you! 🤗 You are the only one who understood that...


🤣

They left Granny's place! Off to the station and there goes... Fighting for the map and... MISHAP! 🤣 But Zoya.. I love you for that! 😉

Zoya "*sob* I was just trying to..."

Asad "I shouldn't have shouted so hard. I know I am stubborn and I..."

Zoya starts crying harder.

Asad "Please stop crying!"

Asad tries to stop Zoya from crying and when she doesn't he kisses away her tears startling her.

Zoya "I.."

Asad "Now that you have stopped crying, we need to walk towards the station. I don't think it's too far."

Asad takes the map and starts walking with Zoya following him lost in her own thoughts.

Zoya (Asad kissed me!)

Zoya (But he just kissed my tears away.)

Zoya (He could have wiped them off with his hands too.)

Zoya (Maybe I should give granny's advice actually a try.)


OBVIOUSLY YOU SHOULD TRY WHAT GRANNY SAID! 😳

Staying in the Station Master's house! 😃 I wonder what's next... 😉

Asad and Zoya enter the house along with the station master.

Station Master Wife "Its great to have a married couple with us. Just an hour back a couple came but they were not married so I drove them away."

Zoya (She'll drive us away too them.)

Station Master's Wife "So it is... Mr. and Mrs.?"

Asad "Asad Ahmed Khan!"

Zoya (Asad lied! Can't believe it.)


Kya baat hai Asad miyaan! Aap to bohot chaaloo insaan hain! 😆 😉

~x~

Station Master "Your love is so young and yet you both are so distant."

Zoya "We are just a bit shy."

Station Master's Wife "Let go of it then."

Station Master "Show us a kiss!"

Station Master's Wife "Yes! A kiss!"

Asad holds Zoya's face and pecks her lips.

Zoya (This was the best moment of my life."

Station Master's Wife "You people call this a kiss."

Station Master "Kiss her like a man!"

Asad cups Zoya's face and smacks his lips with hers and slowly deepens the kiss.

Zoya (Correction! This is the best moment of my life.)

After a moment Asad pulls away and Zoya is all red now.

Station Master "Now that's a real kiss."

Station Master's Wife "A husband should always kiss his wife before he sleeps."

Zoya (I would love kissing Asad every night.)

Asad "I guess we should call it a night then."

Station Master "Looks like you both can't wait to get some alone time now."

Station Master's Wife "Don't tease them too much. Zoya is already red."

Zoya (Everyone is looking at me now. I should learn to control myself.)


I have read this part 6 times! 😆 I guess that justifies how much I loved it! 😉 ❤️

RAZIAAA!!!! 😡 B.I.T.C.H. 😡

Glad the case is closed! 😉 Matthew is here and Asad is JEALOUS!!!! I'm Lovin' it! ❤️

And there comes, CONFESSION!

After some time as Zoya comes out from the washroom someone grabs her and takes her towards the fountain away from the wedding party.

Zoya "Leave me!"

The person lets go of Zoya's hands and Zoya sees the person's face.

Zoya "Asad!"

Asad "How dare you?"

Zoya (What have I done now?)

Asad "How could you dance with Matthew and that too so closely."

Zoya "I am answerable to you."

Asad "I am your bodyguard."

Zoya "You are no longer my bodyguard. The case is over."

Asad "But I want to look out for you."

Zoya "And why is that so?"

Asad "Because I have got used to it."

Zoya (He still won't admit.)

Zoya tries to move away but Asad grabs both her hands.

Asad "Where are you going?"

Zoya "You need not care about me."

Asad "But I want to."

Zoya "I can't take it anymore so you better stay away from me."

Asad "I can't do that."

Zoya "I'll die if you don't because I am hopelessly in love with you. It kills me when you mention about my status. I know I am poor and not worth you but it hurts to hear it from you."

Hearing this Asad kisses Zoya passionately.

Zoya (Why is Asad kissing me?)

Zoya just pushes Asad away from her.

Asad "Please don't push me away from your life because my life has become you. I remember the first day I saw you I didn't know who you were but I was so lost in your beauty to even help you pick up your stuff. When I learnt you were a princess and I your bodyguard, I realized that you deserve a prince but not me. That is what I meant by status all the time. I tried to be as rude as I could but I couldn't be at all because I fell for you. I hate it when you get close to Dave or Matthew. Nikhat told me that day that you love me and I should forget the fact that you are a princess but also warned me that tough times lie ahead. I can't put you in any danger because of me. The reason being that I love you."

Zoya "I can face everything as long as I have you."

Zoya moves closer to Asad's lips and captures them with hers. Asad responds back with equal love.

Zoya (I'll love you Asad with all my life!)


Awesomeness, Flawlessness, Brilliance and Beyond Perfection! 👏

BRILLIANT UPDATE! ❤️ LOVED IT TO BITS!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

Now I go...



Bye bye...

xoxo

Keep scrolling down! 😉


I am totally loving your comment

You wanted kiss and I gave you loads

It is easier to type an update than reply to your comments

You always make me blush so hard

I LOVE YOU

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Consolidating ALL my comments I have made by far on


With All My Life chapters and notes on Thread #1.

*ENJOY READING* 🤗

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I totally loved reading all of them again

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

My turn! RES!!
Mrina - 🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: princess555

Congrats on da new thread and nice update 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Wow Awesome update

Granny actually read Zoya like a book and also gave her an advice...love u granny
On station master and his wife's insistence,Asya have their first kiss ever...Aww cute

Mathew's arrival result in a jealous Asad and thus confession follows...which is really superb

This ooe of my fav chapter afterall its abt confession and over protective Asad

Its really a fabulous,awesome,fantastic and flawless update


Your fav chapter... I am glad to hear it

I am so happy you loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

wow...awesum update..congo for new thread...th.ks...do pm me nxt tym plzzz


will surely pm you

its just that I haven't sent out pms yet

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Linsie

congrats on the new thread...


Originally posted by: Linsie

Love and confession



Love your comment as always

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: aish-au

beautiful confession ❤️

update soon


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