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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I am actually eagerly waiting for chp 12

You said its your fav right

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waiting for the update now 😳

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Mahima--
I am loving my new username
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Me too ❤️

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Mahima--
I am actually eagerly waiting for chp 12

You said its your fav right

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Yes it is 😳

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Mahima

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Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Yes it is 😳

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Haan! Update Ready! 😃

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Now I get it that why is this your favourite chapter

Totally loved it

The alarm rang and Asad got up to switch it off. He stretched his arms out and turned back to see his wife trying to snuggle into the duvet as she lost the warmth of her husband. He smiled and got back into bed and pulled her into himself. She stopped shivering.

Just this simple line was so beautifully written... and that is why i love your work so much

She gently opened her eyes and looked at Asad who had a sweet smile playing on his lips. She pouted. He quickly got up and scooped her up in his arms and walked into the bathroom. Zoya was still in her sleep.

I had butterflies in my stomach through the whole scene... totally loved it

The drive to snow point through the narrow roads and the snow was ethereal.

I totally agree with you... this was one of the best parts of my Manali trip

I was drooling over all the pics that you have shared.

The snow point had loads of snow games. Snow scooter-ing , Skiing, Yak riding, Snow castle making, sledging.

I love these activities... totally amazing... and I could see you enjoying all of them... wow

Zoya made snowballs and threw them on Asad. He kept protecting himself. She had made a heap of them and continued to throw them on him.

I love snowballs 😊

Zoya quickly removed the warm clothes and slipped into her daily wear kurti and loose patiala salwar while Asad went in for another shower. Zoya sat on the bed and covered herself with the duvet and rested her back on the head board as she drifted off to the time after her engagement with Asad.

The flashback was my another favourite fav of this update... so touching

"Why were you crying?", he asked sweetly cupping her face in his hands.

"Asad! Ghar waapas jaane ke baad, kya hum Ammi ke kabr par phir ja sakte hain?", she asked.

"Zoya, aapko mujhse poochhne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai jaan! You need to just tell me what you want. I would give you all the happiness in the world meri jaan.", he replied with a gentle smile.

I am loving this Asad more and more

Asad got into bed and pulled Zoya close to him and both drifted off to sleep. The day went past as they spent their time lazing around in the room and cuddling into each other.

This was so cute and brilliant