AsYa FF ~ Heartbeats [Thread #2] *COMPLETED*

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

OFFICIAL NOTICE

AIM-

TO MAKE MINA DI UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE 🥳

HOW-

BY COMMENTING AND SPAMMING 😉

NEED HELP-

CONTACT ME FOR GUIDANCE 😳

TO JOIN-

ALL ARE WELCOME... THE MORE THE MERRIER 🤗

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Loads of comments comming up!!

Just keep reading till page 3 end 😉

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

A new thread finally!

Perfect counts of chapter too

I am so happy to finally create it

Every work of yours is special to me

Mina di... you and everything about you is perfect

You are an ideal sister

An amazing personality

I totally love you big sista 🤗

P.s. you got loads to read

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chp 11:-

can't quote the best parts

your update made me nostalgic

well can't believe I went to Manali just few days back and didn't see any of the places you mentioned

Now I realize how beautiful Manali actually is

comming to the update

this was superb

totally loved the sight seeing experience

you described everything so beautifully

I so want to go back and do rope crossing now

and ofcourse visit the temple too

atleast I went to Rohtang pass

Unable to speak about the whole trip and your update now

it's making my cry 😭

reminding me of the worst trip of my life

but yet making me smile and enjoying your experience

I should have rather visited Manali only through your story

It would have been better

nah.. it would have been the best

🤗

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Frustrated after the trip

yet sharing a few pics

Somehow unable to post more

*sigh*

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Just showing some love

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Comments till page 3 end

Happy Reading!!!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Consolidating ALL my comments related to the chapters here! ❤️

Tabhi had reserved so many posts

Also after chapter 6 I had pointed all my fav dialogues so far

I'll post them along with the comments of the chapter

🤗

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Prologue:-

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Res

Editing :*

Well i know i reserved 2 posts cause i wanted to divide my comment in 2 parts...

This one is abt my view on the ss

Title- i just love it

Banner- freaking awesome

Prologue was picture perfect

Well explained

Asad's feelings and turmoil were so clear

Flashbacks made things more clear

Your work took to me to the Khan mansion

I know i am on the pm list already ❤️

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Reserve :)

Editing this too

Story dedicated to me ❤️ i just love this feeling

Don't know y but this ss is really close to my heart and so are you

You are a really special person to me

For you i am always active here (a reason i haven't completely left i-f)

Me being first to comment on ur work means a lot to me

I am really excited abt this ss

Looking forward to it a lot

Luv you di

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Fav dialogues-

"Kaash Ammi aapke Jeeju ko nahi jaanti hoti, aur aap humare saath nahi reh rahi hoti! Khuda jaane woh din kab aayega jab aap meri zindagi se ruksat hongi!", he concluded.
Flashback ends
"What the hell were you thinking Asad? How could you say such a thing?", he questioned himself.
A drop of tear fell off his eyes onto his palms.

Flashback
They were about to part their ways to their rooms when she lifted her hand along with him in a reflex being habitual of being handcuffed for the past days.
They looked at each other with unknown feelings as she spoke, "I'm sorry! Mujhe laga main abhi bhi aapse bandhi hui hoon!"
"I mean.. Handcuffed hoon!", she clarified.
Flashback ends
He thought about the close moments they spent together, the kiss he dropped on her forehead being relieved that she was alive! His eyes welled up as he fought with the unknown feelings building in him.

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago