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after watching today's precap..i felt like writing this drabble...it is not a happy one but i can no more tolerate the crap going on and vented out my frustration...

After many taunts and insults nikat is married to farhaan.ayaan decided to end their game the next day and informed asad to take his zoya back.next morning ayaan went to zoya to inform about asad but saw zoya packing things.he felt relieved thinking asad and zoya talked to eachother atlast.asad is waiting outside for his zoya,to take her in his arms and never let her go away from him.ayaan and zoya walked into the hall .everyone is shocked to see her with luggage.ayaan explained their drama to his family members .ayaan dismissed shireen and badibee s protests and signalled zoya to move.till then zoya not even spoke a word.asad could no more wait to meet zoya so he moved into sm .ayaan started walking out holding zoya's hand but stopped after listening to zoya.

I have something to say ayaan. Please give me some time.ayaan freed her hand and stepped away.zoya moved towards humeira but she turned her head away.humeira..i know you were hurt.i can understand the pain when the person you love you trust betrays you.unknowingly I am the cause of your pain.i know it is difficult to forgive me but I apologise for the mistake.but one thing you've not lost your love, ayaan love you and only you. Forgive him, he has done everything for his sister.i thought to talking to you but I couldn't face you...saying this zoya turned back but humeira pulled her into a hug...sorry zoya.humeira spoke...for my behaviour towards you..i could not come out of the trauma even after knowing that it was a mistake and you sacrificied your love for our family...sorry to hurt you zoya..

Zoya wiped her tears and went to rashid...dost...sorry for cheating you with all this drama.you gave me support when there is no one for me,it may be day when I first met you at mazhar or the day I was alone in this mansion.i always respect you and our frienship.unknowingly I was the cause of nikat's pain and I tried my best to make it...but its time for me to leave ...rashid lovingly patted her head and spoke with teary eyes.it is not your mistake zoya.it is mine,I once again failed in fight with destiny.instead of helping you I hurt you ..sorry beta...

Asad felt bad seeing zoya .he was angry on himself for making zoya suffer all these days.but he promised himself to never hurt her again.he closed his eyes tightly to control his emotions.he opened his eyes listening zoya spoke..mr khan...you gave me all the love which I craved for .i know you still love me as much as I love you.but things were changed ...that day when you sent me with ayaan ...that day when you made me sign the nikahnama even after knowing the consequences...that day when I was betrayed onemore time by the person I thought of spending my whole life with, by the person who gave me a new hope that someone cares for me, by the person whom I blindly trusted and walked along ...sorry mr khan .my heart can no more tolerate this.

Tears were flowing continuosly from asad's eyes...no zoya..dont say that...I am sorry. I beg you for apology.this never happens I promise...saying this asad moved towards zoya but she stepped back.please mr.khan...at least let me speak now...I became a puppet in the hands of you and ayaan.you not even thought about me once before promising ayaan.i don't deserve to live with you mr.khan.you are so great to sacrifice your love but I am an ordinary girl and I can live my life with only one person.mr khan I've not talked to phuphi all these days.i couldn't face her,if I meet her I think I cannot leave.so you apologise her on my behalf...

Everyone is shocked on hearing her...everything around asad became blank on hearing that zoya is leaving...asad held her hands and spoke ...zoya..please don't leave me...i will do what ever you say...I cant live without you...I promise zoya that I will never leave you..please comeback with me..

Zoya is trying hard to control her tears..please mr khan. Leave me.dont make it hard...I have to go...asad pulled her into his embrace and hugged her tight.zoya too hugged him back but gathered courage and freed herself...zoya cleared the lump in her throat and spoke...its time to leave..you are always with me mr khan, you are my life and this will never change...

Servant came and informed zoya that the taxi arrived.zoya started to move but asad held her wrist...zoya painfully realsed his fingers and walked away...asad collapsed on to the floor and cried aloud seeing the light of his life walking away and onceagain sending him back to darkness...


sorry for mistakes...i haven't proof read it...i like to know what you feel...

here is the link to its sequel...if u wish to read a happy ending proceed...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93341443


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shishiksg thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey is this the end of ur story r there any continuition
dnt end on sad note re
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's good! Are you gonna continue it? If yes, please do pm me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good! Zoya and Humeira's moment was very nice. I liked it very much. Are you going to continue it? 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good dear 😊 I liked it 😃
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Originally posted by: shishirareddyp

hey is this the end of ur story r there any continuition

dnt end on sad note re


thiss is the end shishira...i am not going to continue this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Breeze..

It's good! Are you gonna continue it? If yes, please do pm me😊


thanks dear...i am not going to continue this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice but painful -please write more drabbles
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Posted: 11 years ago
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in real qh ayaan collaps not asad .
But u written very well
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome writing👏
i don't deserve to live with you mr.khan.you are so great to sacrifice your love but I am an ordinary girl and I can live my life with only one person⭐️

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