A sequel to GOOD BYE....

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is for all my lovely readers who wished a happy ending.only ur coments made me write this sequel.hope you like this too.sorry if I disappoint u...

this is the link to first part..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93207570


Asad cried helplessely watching zoya walk away from him.he waited for her to turn back to him atleast once but zoya disappeared from his sight.he banged his fist onto ground cursing himself for all those happened in their lives.rashid felt bad seeing the plight of his son and stepped forward to console him but stood one stepaway considering he might increase the pain of his son further.ayaan gathered courage annd kneeled infront of asad ..bhai...bhaijaan..everything will be fine...control yourself...asad grabbed his collar and pulled him fiercly...shireen came forward but stopped in her steps by rashid.his angry look and bloodshot eyes were enough for ayaan to understand his mistake.he felt ashamed and hung his head .asad pushed ayaan away without speaking even a word and turned his head away...

Zoya trudged with a heavy heart and with teary eyes.zoya sat in the car and closed her eyes trying to control herself from running back to his arms.she cant afford to get betrayed once again.car started to airport but all through the way only thought running in her mind is about asad.who gave her a second life. All the moments played in her mind..their first dance,their heart to heart talk when they were intoxicated,asad indirectly proposing her at the airpotr ,their engagement.zoya opened her eyes too see the ring .she touched it lovingly .it reminded her the night when asad asad knelt down in front of her under the starry sky and full moon to ask her to spend the rest of her life with him.she onceagain felt cheated by destiny.zoya saw a lady crossing the road holding her daughter's hand.she remembered her phuphi,the way she pampered her not less than what a mother does to her child.she cursed herself for her impulsive actions, for lack of enough trust on her family members .zoya reached the airport.she proceeded to checkin and was issued a boarding pass.she saw a kid crying for a pizza and a small smile played on her lips rememering the day when asad made her a pizza and fed her.unknowingly her fingers reached her lips to wipe off the cheese.she was brought of her thoughts when someone asked her to give them way.

I cannot let her go.i will get back my zoya ...asad ran not even noticing the obstacles in his way.asad missed a step and fell down. ignoring his grazed skin,he got up and ran to his car.rashid and ayaan worried seeing him and tried to follow him but asad was fast.he drove his car like mad ignoring signals and speed limits.he reached airport.he checked the flights for newyork and proceeded towards the gate but was stopped by the guards he pleaded them but in vain.he onceagain lost his hope.he sat there with his eyes shut trying hard to control himself from breaking the barriers.he suddenly remembered his phone and dialled zoya hoping she will answer his call atleast.he lost it again.asad can hear the final annnouncement for the takeoff of zoya's flight.he closed his ears unable to bear the fact.he cried for somemore time burrying his head in hands.he started to go back but the sight in front of him made him stop in his tracks.there was zoya just opposite to him sitting with her eyes closed and resting her head on backrest.asad never felt this happiness in all these years which he is experiencing at this moment.his heart urged him to gather her in his arms but his mind warning him that zoya might rumaway if she saw him.he stood there silently and watched her face.her eyes swollen due to continuos crying and the tear stains on her cheeks.he walked slowly towards her and sat beside her without making any sound.zoya felt his presence and opened her eyes but she did not turn towars him.she just stared the floor.asad slowly moved his hand and entwined his fingers with hers.zoya tightened the grip.they sat there in that position for somemore time. Neither spoke a word .asad spoke first breaking the silence.you are mad.do u know that?zoya smiled on hearing.how could you zoya?do u think u can live with out me?zoya hung her head.zoya turn to me..asad looking into her eyes..did you once think about me before taking this decision?how can I live with out you?zoya couldn't control her tears anymore...asad wiped her tears but she turned away.asad moved to her front and pulled her into a hug.zoya tried to push him but he was strongenough to resist.leave me mr khan.zoya started beating him.i am still angry on you.i don't want to talk to you.get away from me...asad smirked seeing zoya.she is just a kid.zoya became angryon him and started beating hardly.asad's smile turned into a laughter.he released her and distanced him.zoya stood there with her hand on her hips and looking at him angrily.he could not help but feel happy for the girl in front of him.zoya huffed and turned to walk but asad held her hand.he moved close to her locking his eyes with her.zoya could feel the love and care in his eyes.her heart melted seeing him.asad cupped her face...zoya I promise you that I will never hurt you.i will never leave you.only death can separate us.zoya closed his mouth with her hand.never say that mr khan. I want to live my life with you.and even death cant separate us.asad pulled her into embrace. Both thanked god for giving back their life.

Rashid and ayaan stood faraway from them watching this couple unite.they felt somewhat free of guilt but still they are not in a position to face them.

Asad and zoya walked back hand in hand planning their future...sorry fighting over their future plans...

Haha...I am done ...and now its ur turn...

My dear lovely readers..kindly excuse me for the mistakes...I am very sleepy to proof read this...I will send pms tommorrow...

What can I expect??? 😉decision is upto u...

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WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Because they r kids babies like S says ehehe
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you. At least I can see my babies happy and together in the form of fictional writing. God knows when they'll be left in peace in the show.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it, thank u sooo much for giving it a happy ending!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm so glad you wrote a sequel and that with a happy ending! Thank you 😊
It's amazing and beautifully written. I am glad that at least here Rashid stopped Shirin.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You know what's sad... Ayaan and his family don't feel guilty and won't feel guilty. And even sadder than that is no one will call them out on it! Like Nikhat apologize was so stupid and Zoya saying its okay was the dumbest thing on the planet. IT IS HER BLOODY FAULT and anyone else who contributed to her low self-esteem issues. I hate that household and its members, which is why I always forwarded them. Ayaan pissed me off from the beginning. The only person I ever liked (still like) is Humira BUT her character is SO irrelevant that it doesn't matter. Great story though
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amazing OS👏
loved it infact the end when he came to her and says "u knw u r mad" aww i loved that line😃
u know u r amazing writer, thumbs up👍🏼
thanx for such a wonderfull OS😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Because they r kids babies like S says ehehe


yep...even i feel the same...they are babies with no brains...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks dear...
glad u like this...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tnx for the sequel
its awesome

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