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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

so beautiful..

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

sad but nice ...
i dont want dem to suffer dis long ...

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priya713

@priya713

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

So good Candy. Reading it from your POV, makes me not mad at Asad at all...if only he explained himself (if Zoya lets him that is) this way, then they really could reconnect. I would love if this is how it played out on the show...btw,you know you're a good writer when as you read, all you see is Asad and Surbhi as the dialogue is being read...u always capture their words perfectly to how its represented in the show. oK, I'm done praising you twin 😊 lol

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

sooo beautifulll !!!!!!!!

loved it...so heart touching...

their emotions...zoya's pain...love...hurt...so well written...

hats of to u...

Thankew so much for pm

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SOWMYA

@sowmy18

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

That was super duper awesome!

loved it somuch!😳

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

it was fabulous. you're right, this isn't forgiveness, it's just giving into the inevitable as the two cannot live without each other.

it was perfectly penned down in Zoe's pov. it broke my heart to read of her misery that she went through for months just because of him. I just hope they don't make her suffer there in SM & Asad comes to her rescue.

Love.

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

wow gr8 part

loved it

plzzz pm me for your next work

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

I teared up!!😭

Brilliantly written!! 👏👏

The end?? Not about forgiveness but giving into the inevitable!!👏

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago

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Maahi

@-Bubble-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

End was Awsome... :)

great work dear.. :)

U r good writer.. :)

Great JOb :) :)

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Great OS Candy! You've penned down the characters' emotions so beautifully! Gosh, one can complain all they want about these angsty tracks but they sure churn out some of the best writing from the good writers here on the forum.