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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Beautiful, amazing, very touching and very emotional...Very well written...!!! 😊

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: cclove

Aww you cried . . . I 'm gonna take that as a compliment 😳

Please do! This was so beautifully written. I loved every bit of it. How she couldn't listen to his voice without crying, how he couldn't stay away from her after knowing where she was. How she knew she shouldn't forgive him, but knew that living a life without him would be too much pain to bear. How he understood that he didn't deserve her forgiveness, but had nothing more than endless apologies and new promises to offer her, since he couldn't turn back time.

It was just amazing. Simply brilliant. 👏

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-Candz-

@-Candz-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: mochhug

Please do! This was so beautifully written. I loved every bit of it. How she couldn't listen to his voice without crying, how he couldn't stay away from her after knowing where she was. How she knew she shouldn't forgive him, but knew that living a life without him would be too much pain to bear. How he understood that he didn't deserve her forgiveness, but had nothing more than endless apologies and new promises to offer her, since he couldn't turn back time.

It was just amazing. Simply brilliant. 👏

😳 Makes me feel great that you loved it so much

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: cclove

😳 Makes me feel great that you loved it so much

I'm glad 😊 You should 😃

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HoneySuckle

@HoneySuckle

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Love this, brilliant writing as usual, had me tearing up right alongside Zoya and Asad

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CrazyPatel1

@CrazyPatel1

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Very very very good beautifully written

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

perfect scenario to be played in
QH and i would be glad to see
CVs showing something like
this...
Lovely OS...

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-Candz-

@-Candz-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: monaco
Very nice! I like that both Zoya and Asad grow from this, and that Zoya does some much needed soul searching. Very poignant

That's what i feel should happen at the end of this track in the show. Growth and a realization of their mistakes. Without growth, the struggle and sacrifice would've been for nothing