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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

SUPERB UPDATE DEAR..
Keep writing
loved it to core
niyati

...thanks dii...this is a lovely comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear i need much time to read , wil cment abt every part later.
I m nw nt clear with any character.
Forgve me ashu.
SORRY BT I'L CMENT AFTER READING
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Asad... can feel the love zoya shows for his siblings and for him...
so sweet a motherly love...
something that missing from his life...

he can see zoya... missing in her...

and zoya knows... she built her walls to strong...
even she cant manage it...to trust asad...

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Love zoya and kaka fight...

and how asad manage very simply...

so funny and loving moment...


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Little sad moment... made asad cry , he cant hold himself...
but zoya hold it well...

that beautiful hug...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashrina

note for chapt 13

hey guys! its me once again... i know iam bothering you all but one thing i want to clear...
i guess many of you will be wondering why i made asad a cry cry person in this part..usually the man comforts the woman right? but its different or maybe weird here...but thats in the story...its like zoya is the mother figure and she is comforting asad...
all you have to do is read behind the lines...i have hid many reasons and justifications behind this cry cry asad...
well, if you cant or dint...let me tell you...its actually like
zoya had built a shell around her ...this you all know...so she is happy with her present but has not thrown away her past, but blocked it with that shell, 👏 👏 thats it...she isnt expecting any love and she is morethan happy with all the love she is getting from her family and friends.
but here asad, he still wants to live his past, he is craving for love. he had always lived a lonely life.he had missed it for years...and now when he is now surrounded by his loved ones..he cant help but expect more and more. 👏 👏 👏 after years he has met his family and is now swimming in the pool of love...suddenly when losing someone of his loved ones will be like draining a few litres of water from the pool of love.all he had always wished for was to be with his loved ones...but now fate is taking someone who had been the father figure for him the last few years...he had missed so much in his life and now he is not willing to let go of anything now...and thats why he let his emotions flow...
and zoya being the strong women she has always been just supported her best friend thats all but that doesnt mean that she wont face her past and a day will come when she would be vulnerable...she will definitely face such a day...but thats comes later in the story so for that you simple have to wait and watch...oopsi sorry sorry, you have to wait and read...but as of now its only the happy days.
Just think of this part as the day when asad was comforted by zoya when he found out that his own father was the culprit of his mother in the show...eventhough not by hugs but by words..but here its opposite...its my hug and barely by words.
okay again now bye...love u all...for again reading my stupid ramblings.



Zoya stop expecting...

But asad want more...

you can add them has asya POV... ext part of the story...

thanks for the explanation... 👏 👏 👏
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is almost a month... from your last update...

how are you...

when is the next update...


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