Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 24
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hai all, thanks for reading...
i gave a precap for the first time in my story to know all ut comments on the very first interaction bw AS and Zo... but i think u all were lost in Daddy- daughter moment... anyways here is the their interaction... i hope i have tried to bring it right...
would love to know ur feedbacks too... part 2 will be today only... after ur comments...
Note:
Zoya never interacted it with asad after that day..she never responded to his calls.
Asad did try a few times in the beginning to assure her... but respected her decision. But he was always in touch with ayaan to know about zoya.
The very next day zoya went and got the annulment of this marriage and had ayaan sign those papers. But agreed to live there till nikhat wedding. Asad knows about this thing.
She never shared room with ayaan... She respected the elders..but never agreed to get paraded in the front of the crowd.
chapter 15
After dinner zoya goes to her room and sleeps next to asya... But could feel the vaccum at the other side of asya... doesn't think much and pulls herself into sleep... It has been emotionally exhausting day for her. After some time asad walks into zoya room... And looks at her princess... Sleeping peacefully... and then move to his room and brings his laptop and sits on their bench... in the garden...
Around 11.pm
Zoya gets up from her bed to drink water and come to kitchen... she see asad sitting in the garden... she recollects all their bench moment...it is a part of their lovestory... it doesn't matter...how angry they are at each other...if one of them is sitting there... the other person always sits next ... and sort out the problems...she knows asad is not expecting her...bcoz according to him she is sleep... but she just couldn't let him sit there alone... He has been sitting there alone for last 3 years...
Zoya makes 2 cup of black coffee with a little sugar... and goes towards asad... zoya could see that asad is staring at the laptop... on getting close she could hear her voice... on getting close she could see herself talking... it is all her skype chat with Hu.. in the last 3 years... asad closes once and open the next.. and he just looks at them... With love in his eyes... and the next was last skype chat before coming here... and the last one was her very first video with asad... Her sleeping... asad looks at the video and caresses her face in the screen... then closes the lap and just sits there..
Coffee appears in front of him and he turns to see zoya holding the cup, he accepts the cup and moves involuntarily to make space for zoya and places his laptop in the ground. Zoya comes and sits next to him..and both are silently drinking their coffee... asad has missed her coffee... and he sips them as slowly as possible to hold zoya next too him...
Zoya knows asad is trying to talk to her... but she has been avoiding him...but this bench always gave her the support... to open.up and to talk with asad...
Z: I am sorry MR.Khan...
Asad is stunned to hear zoya speak...that is more than enough for him...and he couldn't understand why she is apologizing...if anyone should say it was him
A: why r u saying sorry,... I should be the one to ask u for apology... but for whatever I have done... but I know my sorry is no equal to whatever u went through bcoz of me...
Zoya doesn't say anything just listens to him...she knows he has load to tell... then only the burden from his heart will be removed... she wants him to feel light... she knows the shoulders are overloaded from the age of 10.
Z: for not telling u about asya...
A: NO.. ur decision is right zoya...i don't even deserve to know that I have a princess... after what happened... but I am thankfull to u for trusting me to be a good father... even though I lost ur trust as a partner.
Z: Asad I am saying again... what happened was fate...it is not u...
A: no zoya... whatever happened...it is my mistake...the biggest mistake of my life was not trusting u from the beginning... and having a different mindset about...u..just bcoz of ur actions...if only I trusted u... this day wouldn't have come in our life ...even after loving u... I trusted the wrong person...i trusted a devil who came into my life in the form of a friend... I didn't have the brain to find about her...the past of her life when she was away from our life... I blinded trusted her...even though when u shared ur doubts with me... I never believed u... ... u almost last ur life to pull me out of the devil...clusters...
Z: no asad... it all happened bcoz I was stupid to go alone that day... even though I promised u ... I went against the promise...i.e..why..
A:... may be... But what made u go out alone zoya... Is my lack of trust in the past... Though we have come miles from there...the way I questioned u for proof... for everything u say.. pushed u that day. If I started trusting from the day I met...u wouldn't have taken the alone steps that zoya... u would have come to me and shared ur thoughts with me...but subconsciously u wanted to justify ur words with proof.. bcoz I have always questioned zoya... i.e... why...
Z: asad... Please... let it go... we cant change the past... let it go...dont relive that day... and torture urself...after everything... u did what u thought was right...
A: no...but I shouldnt have dragged u there...zoya...as if u r my property... I was already feeling guilty of Najma-Imran... relation... When I heard nikhat tried to kill herself... I just want to save her life... But at the heep of emotions I didn't realize... In order to save one.. I killed another one...
Z: asad..
A: it is the truth...i did kill u that day... that day I killed my zoya with my own hands...I didn't realize that my hands were filled with ur blood... till ammi made me realize the truth... I sacrificed u... just bcoz u trusted me... I could never forgive myself... For forcing u... what u did was a mistake.. but what I did was a cold murder... ur tears didn't affect me...if only I loved u... I wouldn't have forced u there..bcoz of ur love for me... u put urself through the crap...even though u tried to put some sense into me.. I never heard u...
Z:.asad it is past...don't life in the past... Please... We can't change things that happened... we should just learn not to repeat the same mistake again...please don't torture urself..
A: it is in u to forgive me for all my mistake...but why do u do it... why don't u punish me...
Z: I cant punish myself asad... U r the only person in the whole world I could call as mine till asya came into this world..
A: don't say that... After everything I put u through...tears were flowing in his eyes..
Zoya realized asad is still living in the past...with the help of asya zoya has moved forward in her life...asya is the form of their love... helped her put the bad memories behind.
Z: please asad.. I am strong girl... I can handle myself in any situation...alone as I always have in my life...so just let it go...
A: no zoya...ur strength is something that I shouldn't have taken into account.. bcoz I should be ur strength.. and protected u.. but I didn't do it...
Z: Mr.khan... look at me..none of thing that happened that day was planned by u...we just became toy in the hand of destiny... So let it go... IN THE WAR BETWEEN LOVE AND FATE... FATE OWN..end of story... I am begging u let the past go...if they are going to bring bitterness in our life...remember those which bring happiness in our life.
Asad was silent for sometime..he realized the truth. In zoya words. He has to start living in the present. The love of his life is sitting next to him and asking him to live again... and has also given him the precious gift in the form of his daughter.
A: zoya fate didn't win that day.
Z: mr.khan..
A: fate may have won the battle zoya... but our love own the war...our love gave as asya... our hope to live... breathe , cherish... love ...
To be continued...
with the next part... i am taking a break... as i have paper to prepare for my upcoming conference... once i complete i will try to give u 3 parts with the story ending on asya wedding.,,,,,, have some ideas tooo...
but will take defintely some time.. minimum of a week...till then enjoy the story
hai all, thanks for reading...
i gave a precap for the first time in my story to know all ut comments on the very first interaction bw AS and Zo... but i think u all were lost in Daddy- daughter moment... anyways here is the their interaction... i hope i have tried to bring it right...
would love to know ur feedbacks too... part 2 will be today only... after ur comments...
Note:
Zoya never interacted it with asad after that day..she never responded to his calls.
Asad did try a few times in the beginning to assure her... but respected her decision. But he was always in touch with ayaan to know about zoya.
The very next day zoya went and got the annulment of this marriage and had ayaan sign those papers. But agreed to live there till nikhat wedding. Asad knows about this thing.
She never shared room with ayaan... She respected the elders..but never agreed to get paraded in the front of the crowd.
chapter 15
After dinner zoya goes to her room and sleeps next to asya... But could feel the vaccum at the other side of asya... doesn't think much and pulls herself into sleep... It has been emotionally exhausting day for her. After some time asad walks into zoya room... And looks at her princess... Sleeping peacefully... and then move to his room and brings his laptop and sits on their bench... in the garden...
Around 11.pm
Zoya gets up from her bed to drink water and come to kitchen... she see asad sitting in the garden... she recollects all their bench moment...it is a part of their lovestory... it doesn't matter...how angry they are at each other...if one of them is sitting there... the other person always sits next ... and sort out the problems...she knows asad is not expecting her...bcoz according to him she is sleep... but she just couldn't let him sit there alone... He has been sitting there alone for last 3 years...
Zoya makes 2 cup of black coffee with a little sugar... and goes towards asad... zoya could see that asad is staring at the laptop... on getting close she could hear her voice... on getting close she could see herself talking... it is all her skype chat with Hu.. in the last 3 years... asad closes once and open the next.. and he just looks at them... With love in his eyes... and the next was last skype chat before coming here... and the last one was her very first video with asad... Her sleeping... asad looks at the video and caresses her face in the screen... then closes the lap and just sits there..
Coffee appears in front of him and he turns to see zoya holding the cup, he accepts the cup and moves involuntarily to make space for zoya and places his laptop in the ground. Zoya comes and sits next to him..and both are silently drinking their coffee... asad has missed her coffee... and he sips them as slowly as possible to hold zoya next too him...
Zoya knows asad is trying to talk to her... but she has been avoiding him...but this bench always gave her the support... to open.up and to talk with asad...
Z: I am sorry MR.Khan...
Asad is stunned to hear zoya speak...that is more than enough for him...and he couldn't understand why she is apologizing...if anyone should say it was him
A: why r u saying sorry,... I should be the one to ask u for apology... but for whatever I have done... but I know my sorry is no equal to whatever u went through bcoz of me...
Zoya doesn't say anything just listens to him...she knows he has load to tell... then only the burden from his heart will be removed... she wants him to feel light... she knows the shoulders are overloaded from the age of 10.
Z: for not telling u about asya...
A: NO.. ur decision is right zoya...i don't even deserve to know that I have a princess... after what happened... but I am thankfull to u for trusting me to be a good father... even though I lost ur trust as a partner.
Z: Asad I am saying again... what happened was fate...it is not u...
A: no zoya... whatever happened...it is my mistake...the biggest mistake of my life was not trusting u from the beginning... and having a different mindset about...u..just bcoz of ur actions...if only I trusted u... this day wouldn't have come in our life ...even after loving u... I trusted the wrong person...i trusted a devil who came into my life in the form of a friend... I didn't have the brain to find about her...the past of her life when she was away from our life... I blinded trusted her...even though when u shared ur doubts with me... I never believed u... ... u almost last ur life to pull me out of the devil...clusters...
Z: no asad... it all happened bcoz I was stupid to go alone that day... even though I promised u ... I went against the promise...i.e..why..
A:... may be... But what made u go out alone zoya... Is my lack of trust in the past... Though we have come miles from there...the way I questioned u for proof... for everything u say.. pushed u that day. If I started trusting from the day I met...u wouldn't have taken the alone steps that zoya... u would have come to me and shared ur thoughts with me...but subconsciously u wanted to justify ur words with proof.. bcoz I have always questioned zoya... i.e... why...
Z: asad... Please... let it go... we cant change the past... let it go...dont relive that day... and torture urself...after everything... u did what u thought was right...
A: no...but I shouldnt have dragged u there...zoya...as if u r my property... I was already feeling guilty of Najma-Imran... relation... When I heard nikhat tried to kill herself... I just want to save her life... But at the heep of emotions I didn't realize... In order to save one.. I killed another one...
Z: asad..
A: it is the truth...i did kill u that day... that day I killed my zoya with my own hands...I didn't realize that my hands were filled with ur blood... till ammi made me realize the truth... I sacrificed u... just bcoz u trusted me... I could never forgive myself... For forcing u... what u did was a mistake.. but what I did was a cold murder... ur tears didn't affect me...if only I loved u... I wouldn't have forced u there..bcoz of ur love for me... u put urself through the crap...even though u tried to put some sense into me.. I never heard u...
Z:.asad it is past...don't life in the past... Please... We can't change things that happened... we should just learn not to repeat the same mistake again...please don't torture urself..
A: it is in u to forgive me for all my mistake...but why do u do it... why don't u punish me...
Z: I cant punish myself asad... U r the only person in the whole world I could call as mine till asya came into this world..
A: don't say that... After everything I put u through...tears were flowing in his eyes..
Zoya realized asad is still living in the past...with the help of asya zoya has moved forward in her life...asya is the form of their love... helped her put the bad memories behind.
Z: please asad.. I am strong girl... I can handle myself in any situation...alone as I always have in my life...so just let it go...
A: no zoya...ur strength is something that I shouldn't have taken into account.. bcoz I should be ur strength.. and protected u.. but I didn't do it...
Z: Mr.khan... look at me..none of thing that happened that day was planned by u...we just became toy in the hand of destiny... So let it go... IN THE WAR BETWEEN LOVE AND FATE... FATE OWN..end of story... I am begging u let the past go...if they are going to bring bitterness in our life...remember those which bring happiness in our life.
Asad was silent for sometime..he realized the truth. In zoya words. He has to start living in the present. The love of his life is sitting next to him and asking him to live again... and has also given him the precious gift in the form of his daughter.
A: zoya fate didn't win that day.
Z: mr.khan..
A: fate may have won the battle zoya... but our love own the war...our love gave as asya... our hope to live... breathe , cherish... love ...
To be continued...
with the next part... i am taking a break... as i have paper to prepare for my upcoming conference... once i complete i will try to give u 3 parts with the story ending on asya wedding.,,,,,, have some ideas tooo...
but will take defintely some time.. minimum of a week...till then enjoy the story
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