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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Ayaan deserves more
The way you are writing the pain of zoya is awesome
Can feel it

Trust me he's in for more

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#732

although i hate d fact dat asad n ayaan treated zoya like a commodity mmbut still my heart goes oit to asad ...
please contonue soon
thanks for pm

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#733

Full to emotional roller coaster
How he thought that he will go to Zoya & showed her asad condition & wanted her to come back. He didn't realise that she is also in pain like asad. Well deserved slap. Ayaan knew that only asad can heal her but he was not in a position & don't want to be near her as he want her happy without him. Jamil was good friend. He promised her that those khan brothers not coming anywhere near her. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#734

superb part

wow zoya slapped ayaan amazing

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#735

As much as I love Asad I honestly don't know what can defend his hideous actions.

I just hope that Zoya manages to cope through it. It's not an easy task but not completely impossible for Zoya.

This update was definitely heart wrenching and I as I had guessed the video was of a terribly broken Asad.

Brilliantly written... but I still can't help but hope that probably they get their happy ending with each other though I have no idea what Asad can do to lessen Zoya's pain or gain some redemption in her eyes.

Please let them find their way to each other only!

Please?

Love,

Aashka

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#736

This

"These Khan brothers... I promise Zoya, they won't come anywhere near you. Not if I can help it."

👏

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#737

As painful as it was, this piece was so emotional so full of rage so high on pain so beautifully described the loathing that Zoya felt for Asad and Ayaan.

Can't imagine her pain but reading about it did make me sad within. But I don't feel anything for Asad at the moment. Hope things get back to normal soon.

Loved reading it. It was very well written👏

Please update soon 😃

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Shadowblue20

@Shadowblue20

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#738

I have a strong feeling that u r planning of getting jamil and zoya marriage.i think zoya would fall in love with jamil.asad would stay alone.if u r planning then i have a request to kill asad..like he wasn't able to bear the pain and he thought he doesn't deserve any one love and he suicide.amd left a letter for zoya of sorry telling the thing he planned to give her a surprise and how happy he was and why he never want to fall in love what ever he did to give her pain was to make her hate and she never hated him..but when he wanted her to love him she started hate him.the reason he took the decision of sending her to that house.was that he had not send her to that home then his sister would have suicide and how could he spend a peaceful life knowing that he was the reason some where her sister suicide.he though she would understand him...these are my few request..some where i think asad did the right thing becaise u cannot live with the guilt..as much zoya was in pain asad also was in pain..

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: Shadowblue20
I have a strong feeling that u r planning of getting jamil and zoya marriage.i think zoya would fall in love with jamil.asad would stay alone.if u r planning then i have a request to kill asad..like he wasn't able to bear the pain and he thiught he doesn't deserve any one love and he suicide.amd left a letter for zoya of sorry and thing he planned and why he never want to fall in love what ever he did to give her pain was to make her hate and she never hated him..but when he wanted her to love him she started hate him.the reason he took the decision of sending her to that house.was that he had not send her to that home then his sister would have suicide and how could he spend a peaceful life knowing that he was the reason some where her sister suicide.he though she would understand him...these are my few request..some where i think asad did the right thing becaise u cannot live with the guilt..as much zoya was in pain asad also was in pain..

I don't believe in suicide and I hated that the show used that at all. And as for Jamil and Zoya, trust me, they are strictly good friends. I am showing Asad suffering because what he did was the not the only solution to the problem of his sister wanting to commit suicide. She needed love and support and to understand that marriage isn't everything in life. But the show chose to butcher that message by forcing Zoya to be married to someone based on a ridiculous mistake. And what irked me more was that Zoya went back into the Khan Villa like nothing happened. A self respecting woman would not do that and let a man treat her that way. That is what I am trying to remedy in this story. There will be no suicide. I don't condone it in the slightest.