AsYa SS ~ Vaada ~ Updated on PG 116 ~ 04/08 - Page 70

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey do PM when u update next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update..
Curious to read more..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Intriguing, I can't wait to read what Zoya is watching on the phone.

Please update soon Monica 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
I guess is missed comnting on part 6 so this is a combined 1
I really really liked ur writing style
U always keeps this suspense part going
Zoya & Jamil frndsip was so strong that when she needed some1 she went 4 him & he's also always there 2 support her
So Ayaan succeeded in fining her but d way u penned Zoya's situation that was heart breaking
Both brothers made a joke of her life & I m wid Zoya that she shouldn't give up so easily
very well written Mona👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting Chapt Monica..
I mean i know others will not agree with me on this but as much as Zoya was going through all of this duringg this whole sham thingg Asad was also the same...i mean in a thing we have to do the right thing so that will show the other part was wrong...so Asad just did the wrong thing ( not totally wrong did he had any options..haa options bhi thay but woh show waalon ne nahi bataya 😆 ) but seriously...a Man who was hell jealous even by knowing the fact that his fiancee was dropped by someone during that whole Rajbir fiasco...soo how would that same Man would have felt when he has to address his own love as his brother's wife...
Matlab meko ab bhi Asad ka utna fault nhi lagta...
And see in this FF Zoya has Jamil as his friend...but Asad ke paas kaun...Billi jaisi dost...so how vulnerable he must be... ?
I think bahut zyada deep hoogaya.
Update soon..
Edited by MayurChan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug



I know I know! The problem is that I'm not home anymore! And therefore I didn't get time to pen it down! I'm on a short Vacation. And this was all I had time to write. My updates are like 10 pages😆

So I need almost a day to do them. But I'll get started on it on Sunday and hopefully will have a make up update done and ready by that night or Monday at the latest😃

Glad you liked it!😃I can't promise a happy ending. It all depends on my mood. Right now it's looking grim. But lets see. Nothing's set in stone😉


Just found this..
How is Your Mood now..?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok now what will it be
I so wanna know what ayaan was showing to zoya
Lets see now
But you write really well
Thanks for updating
Will be waiting for more..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
And I want Pm's too..
And haa Humidein ka kya matlab.?
Isn't it UMEDIEN.?
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Posted: 9 years ago
how I missed such an amazing story 😲
read part 1...
that was very interesting...
zoya is missing...
what happened that day...
such an interesting plot...
will read remaining chapters soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!! What is in the video? Cant wait to find out :-)
Poor zoya...she is so torn in between all this! Feel bad for her

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