AsYa SS ~ Vaada ~ Updated on PG 116 ~ 04/08 - Page 57

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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm so slow!! I dunno why I never read part 5 up till now.

It was SO SAD GOSH. How do you write all this without crying yourself ):

Especially this part:

Laying in his bed, staring blankly at the window, and completely disheveled, was a numb and lifeless Asad Ahmed Khan. His eyes were bloodshot, his stubble uncared for, and she saw this far off look in his eyes. A look of a man who had lost his will to live.

Seriously girl, I was imagining it in my head and made me so so sad ): Next part soon please!!

Posted: 12 years ago
Yay for an update! 🥳 🤗 (even though I'm like 4 days late! Sorry. 😆)
Poor Asad! Actually poor everybody, this story is so sad! 😭 😭
You wrote the whole thing exceptionally well (as always), but I really liked the way you described Asad's pain. 🥺 Made me depressed! 😆
Continue soon! 😃
-Fari 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Feel very bad for Asad .Zoya
please come back...cant see u
both crying!
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Posted: 12 years ago
There is the ghost of once living Asad Ahmad Khan!!
He is simply a memory of that man...
Zoya had left them all... breaking them into pieces...
Where did Ayaan find Zoya?
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Posted: 12 years ago
I know!! I know I am super late..I just got busy and I am really sorry about the late comment!!😃
Thank you so much for having me in the dedication list!! Glad you enjoyed the lame poem!!😆

Coming to the update now-
Thank you!! Zoya is not at the madarasa!! *phew*

Aww!! Poor Asad!! He is so lifeless!! So sad!!😭
I am relieved Zoya in her letter to Phuphi said she will remain in touch!!😊

and Ayaan finally made himself useful and found out where Zoya is!! New york??😉

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Readers: Monica baby you are getting out of our hands!
Monica: i will try to post soon😳
Readers: we want it within 2 days!😕
Monica: i cannot post!😛
Readers: 😲NAHI!!!! Allah miyaan whats wrong with you ms. Monica? Yeh sunnay say pehlay main nay IF chor kyun nahi diya??😲
Now Post Soon...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it so much...
Zoya come back
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maheerah

Readers: Monica baby you are getting out of our hands!

Monica: i will try to post soon😳
Readers: we want it within 2 days!😕
Monica: i cannot post!😛
Readers: 😲NAHI!!!! Allah miyaan whats wrong with you ms. Monica? Yeh sunnay say pehlay main nay IF chor kyun nahi diya??😲
Now Post Soon...😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
Let me update Meri Jasbhaat first this week, then I'll do this one okay? 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... This is a great story👏
I simply have no idea why i haven't come across this sooner😔
My apologies for the late comment, hope you don't mind😃
This is brilliantly and beautifully written👍🏼 A simply superb piece of writing...The emotions that you portray are so real that i can actually feel them...
I cried when asad and dilshaad read their letters it was so emotional😭
I really do feel bad for asad but a part of me feels that he deserves this punishment, as he took zoya for granted...I just don't want him to suffer for the rest of his life...( I'm just so conflicted)
Poor zoya...Where in the world has she dissappeared to??? Licking her wounds😕 I think when she returns she should play hard to get, It might be fun
Anyway this is your story and i would love to read how it progresses. You really are one of the greatest writers on this forum, I have enjoyed reading your works👍🏼😃
Would love to recieve a pm for this when you update, if possible...

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