Thread#1 Asya FF: || Married to Darkness ||Link To the New Thread PG-1 - Page 20

Originally posted by: elenaa

Heloo miss mcdreamy! ⭐️

so finally u did update on Wednesday! 😳

But I was studying for my exam so cudnt read it earlier 😭

but now tat I hav read it, here are my comments ⭐️

first of all the title of d chapter Goodbyes u are rite they are always difficult whether u hav to say it to ur frnds or ur family 😭

and then the moment zoya entered d house she cud feel tat something is wrong 😲

and pleaseee stop farida and tell her not to leave our poor zoya all alone wid d devil 😲

asad's room is so depressingg...everything is so darkk and our zoya is just d opposite... 😕

the moment zoya woke up n heard d glass breaking believe me I was also scared for her...he dragged her shouted at her...wonder wat more he will do in the futureee 😲

Zoya is not able to comprehend wat asad asad meant but tat devil will make sure tat it gets in her head soon! 🤢

All in all I loved d chapter! 👏

and I also like d way u justify ur title in every chapter ⭐️

p.s I dont know how u expected d chapter to turn out but I seriously loved it 🤗

and the most important thing update soon! 🤣

❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

I am second

I could have first if I had not told Mina Di to rush and res

But this is dedicated to her so she had to be first

I loved the way you have written this

Zoya's feelings were well expressed

Brilliant work

Farida Bi was awesome

and Asad was so cold

overall well written

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awsome update... 😊
waiting to know the reason behind asad behaviour...😊???
waiting for nxt part update soon... 😊

Originally posted by: starslinedup

A very good start to the story...makes u wanna know what happens next...so do continue soon..n gr8 job!!!

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

Heyyy Elena...you have no idea how HAPPY you have made me with this comment!😃 Thanksss❤️...I love your long comments😳...It just makes me sooo happy!😊

A big thanks for appreciating my work...

And Farida bi is essential to the story but she'll come later...glad that u weren't disappointed.😃...

Thanks once again!❤️

Ps. Best of luck for your EXAMS! Hope you rock it!
😆🤗

🤗 🤗 I know I said dis before but still agn my saying tat I was not all disappointed wid d chapter 😳

and I also loveee to post longgg comments for ur ff ⭐️

farida is an important character..ahaan...lets see wat she does in d future 😉

p.s I rocked in my exams at least according to me..ab jab marks ayengey tab hi kuch pta chalega 🤣
miss mcdreamy❤️

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Such intensity! Awesome update!!

I am your fan!

I'm sending you a buddy request! Please PM me the next time you update!!

Originally posted by: ...Asya...

its awesome

u know wht

i love stories where asad does not accept zoya as his wife!!

pm me too

i love it!!!

i cant wait to read!!

Originally posted by: elenaa

🤗 🤗 I know I said dis before but still agn my saying tat I was not all disappointed wid d chapter 😳

and I also loveee to post longgg comments for ur ff ⭐️

farida is an important character..ahaan...lets see wat she does in d future 😉

p.s I rocked in my exams at least according to me..ab jab marks ayengey tab hi kuch pta chalega 🤣
miss mcdreamy❤️