New OS: Putting on a Face - Page 3

Originally posted by: mysticlover

Everyone is in sad n separation mood...
Zoya has literally become a walking corpse... Asad so guilty of what he had done...
Because of this track I've started resenting Nikhat... may be Ayaan too... I've never liked Shirin... she is downright selfish...

Originally posted by: rivya

Cvs ki tarah tum bhi hummein rula ne pe kyon tuli ho...

loved the OS and the song was good too...

Originally posted by: Ambreen83

Beautifully written, the words flowed perfectly; loved the way you described everything with so much detail and all the emotions came to life. That was amazing.

P.S. Love the title of your OS, aptly describes the content and has a deeper meaning.

👏

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

awesim..thnks..

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Loved it,,... So well written. I have been really proud of Nikhat when she accepted Imran and Najma. But, now after her stupid act I don't like her much. I thought she was strong and mature but naa.. she is not. And, Ayaan oh!!! What to say about him, he failed as a friend, as a lover and as a brother too. Being a true brother he should have made Nikhat realize about her mistakes.. Shireen I haven't ever like her.

I want zoya to take a good step after this entire issue. Asad should decide her place in his life. She is not some toy to lend it to someone, she is a human and his love. By doing this he disrespected their relation. Aurate to ghar ki izzat hoti hai, maan hoti hai.. You protect them never leave them... Asad has again broken is promise to protect her.

Very well written. Love it..

Dee

Originally posted by: lover1998

OMG SO EMOTIONALLL. Plz continue i really want to know what happens nextt