New OS: Putting on a Face

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hey tis is superb...

luv it...

thx fr the pm...

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MissReadingFaye

@MissReadingFaye

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Beautifully written, the words flowed perfectly; loved the way you described everything with so much detail and all the emotions came to life. That was amazing.

P.S. Love the title of your OS, aptly describes the content and has a deeper meaning.

👏

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chichi220

@chichi220

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Lovely beautiful this twist will really change zoya

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Loved it,,... So well written. I have been really proud of Nikhat when she accepted Imran and Najma. But, now after her stupid act I don't like her much. I thought she was strong and mature but naa.. she is not. And, Ayaan oh!!! What to say about him, he failed as a friend, as a lover and as a brother too. Being a true brother he should have made Nikhat realize about her mistakes.. Shireen I haven't ever like her.

I want zoya to take a good step after this entire issue. Asad should decide her place in his life. She is not some toy to lend it to someone, she is a human and his love. By doing this he disrespected their relation. Aurate to ghar ki izzat hoti hai, maan hoti hai.. You protect them never leave them... Asad has again broken is promise to protect her.

Very well written. Love it..

Dee

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

awesome...but u should continue it

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: fanraya
👏Lovely..

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: rajnid68
think I came across an dead end...
but brilliantly penned. ..
the pain ..the longing..

Yeah that's because I couldn't type anymore, I was beginning to get senti again 😳 and thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: Linsie
Awesome!!! ... but need to continue

QUOTE=Linsie]

Thanks Linsie! I will try to, if I can 😳

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
seriously Gul messed it up badly 😆

Tell me about it

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: KulfiBai
Great OS! Can't wait to see how Gul plays this track out :)

Thanks! 😊 yeah me too

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: tv05
nice os...

Thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: aashiqua
brilliant..

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: neenabinu
loved it...

Glad you liked it! 😃

Originally posted by: nilusoni
awesome

Thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
Great OS!! Very well written!
I want to see something like this in the show!! Lets see how things play out in the show!
And the song? Never heard it before but it depicts Zoya's plight!

Thanks so much! 😃 yeah I've been listening to it ever since this whole track started. Its from a film called Aankon mein tum ho, I think its a 90's movie