AsYa OS: Little Asad's Biggest Wish

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Rattyswami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

nice OS...i just love when ASYA are soo understanding and loving towards each other...their innocent love just melts my heart😊

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

wish the show had shown this

kuddos to you

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

amazing os...

luv it...

thx fr the pm...

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Nisha

@nisha150

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

i havnt seen dis epi as i was out of town and after reading it i really wish to see d epi ...as i taught dey might hav showed sum stupid only...
n cumng to d Os it was superbbb...u very well expresed d emotions of Asad..i can give u the title dat is QUEEN OF EXPRESSING ones' emotions...

updatee meri jasbaat soon plzzz...ab aur intezzarr nahi hota ...:((

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

This was sooo beautiful Moni! I can't even describe it! 😳 It was Adorable! ❤️ You're are an amazing writer! 🤗

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goingreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Aw haha this was 86532785 times better than what they showed on the show. I felt like the scene was incomplete because Asad was so unfeeling, reading this just made the scene so much better (: If only they'd hire you as their writer Monica! I'd be forever grateful.

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: goingreen
Aw haha this was 86532785 times better than what they showed on the show. I felt like the scene was incomplete because Asad was so unfeeling, reading this just made the scene so much better (: If only they'd hire you as their writer Monica! I'd be forever grateful.

Aww you're so sweet. But problem to yehi hai na. Ki mein India mein nahun rehthi 😆 Or I would apply haha

So happy you liked it ;)

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astonm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

AWWW!

Hello extremely talented person!

This is so cute! I haven't watched the episode so idk what actually happened, but if was even 1/10 of the amazingness of this OS then it must have been good! I could imagine everything the way you wrote it and it was totes adorable!

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: astonm
AWWW!
Hello extremely talented person!

This is so cute! I haven't watched the episode so idk what actually happened, but if was even 1/10 of the amazingness of this OS then it must have been good! I could imagine everything the way you wrote it and it was totes adorable!

Aww thanks!!! 😳😳 Actually it was somewhat like this. Except for the whole first half haha. They didn't really focus on his abbu, or on the toys, or what they meant. They mostly focused on the separation symbolism. Which is why I did this. I really wanted them to show how Asad felt about seeing that his Abbu also yearned for him all these years. But as always, the CV's just skimmed the top of this possibly poignant and beautiful scene. And focused on Asya.

Can't complain, but yeah, it could've been better haha.

And btw, right back at you 🤗

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago