AsYa OS: Little Asad's Biggest Wish - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: webuser7

Mona darling, can I hug you?? 🤗 🤗 Sorry for taking the liberty of giving you a nickname!

Monica, it was beautiful. When I watched this episode play out on the show, I was very disappointed with the dialogues as Asad did not even once acknowledge Rashid's efforts. On the contrary said some wishes are never fulfilled. I thought they completely missed a possible poignant scene in the eagerness of throwing the separation symbolism our way. It was too cold for me.

What you wrote is what I had hoped to see. So, for me your scene was 1000 times better that what they showed.

Very, very nice!!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


AWW yay! I love my new nickname 😆😃

Thank you! I agree! They really missed an opportunity to show a heart touching scene between them, about Rashid and his wish. It would've shown how much he truly valued and craved his father's love, which was always deserving of, but sadly never got.

I liked that they showed him giving Zoya such importance in the show. But I really felt it was incomplete. Just for the sake of separation symbolism, like you said.

Thanks again hun! Smiling so broadly right now 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well mujhe mere muqqadar ke saathkoi complaints nahi hai kyunki you are written in it 🤗

okay that sounds wrong 😆

but i know you KNOW what i meant 🤣

this was soo adorable.

And in TT vid Asad was going to say few things as such, but they didnt let him maybe cause for the future 😆

ahhh pleasure!

My bestoes loved it too.

made our day my sweeto 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
res.

unres.
omg that was perfectly beautiful! the emotions u showed were just amazing it felt so real! I really wish this happened on the show. I think the gift scene was cut too short
Edited by Love-AsYa-4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Well mujhe mere muqqadar ke saathkoi complaints nahi hai kyunki you are written in it 🤗


okay that sounds wrong 😆

but i know you KNOW what i meant 🤣

this was soo adorable.

And in TT vid Asad was going to say few things as such, but they didnt let him maybe cause for the future 😆

ahhh pleasure!

My bestoes loved it too.

made our day my sweeto 🤗


AWWW OMG Ankie I'm gonna cry (ok not like that. Ok you KNOW what I meant 🤣)

I'm gonna have to watch that TT video haha. I stopped watching SBB, SBS, TT and E24 for the last month. Too much ZoYaan overload. And I figured I'd let Gul surprise me. I mean she's already done irreperable damage 😆 But I wanna see how she intends to attempt to fix it.

Love you! 🤗 And your besties (bestoes? 😆) too! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful..loved it..thanx for d pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: aashiqua

i wish they hav shown such emotional yet lovely scene n d show than d crap they show nw...u r truly an amazng writer


Thank you thank you thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Wow
It ws beautiful...
N dis
"he was allowed to be stupid, to make mistakes, to explore and live life fully and freely. Something Asad aspired to as a child, and well into his teens."
It's so true...I cn understand his pain n longing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reyansh23

Wow
It ws beautiful...
N dis
"he was allowed to be stupid, to make mistakes, to explore and live life fully and freely. Something Asad aspired to as a child, and well into his teens."
It's so true...I cn understand his pain n longing...


Thank you! Glad you liked that bit 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Aap meri yeh aarzoo poori karengi, na?"
Aapne to hamari ek arzoo puri kari--how emotionally touching this sequence could have been if the CV had let it pan like this! Somehow all these emotional sequences are kind of given fleeting glimpses off by the CV's wonder why!
Another one I feel so bad they never prolonged is the return journey from the airport after the engagement! That could have been memorable!

Maybe you could write an OS for us to make it come alive---love the way you write!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranz

"Aap meri yeh aarzoo poori karengi, na?"
Aapne to hamari ek arzoo puri kari--how emotionally touching this sequence could have been if the CV had let it pan like this! Somehow all these emotional sequences are kind of given fleeting glimpses off by the CV's wonder why!
Another one I feel so bad they never prolonged is the return journey from the airport after the engagement! That could have been memorable!

Maybe you could write an OS for us to make it come alive---love the way you write!


Hmm I remember that. I did want them to include something. Perhaps I will. Sure I'll give it a shot. (pun intended 😆)

Thanks for the lovely feedback

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