AsYa OS: Little Asad's Biggest Wish

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

You are an amazing writer...this was just beautiful...
The insight into asad's feelings on seeing the gifts from his dad was beautifully portrayed...
And the way he assures zoya that it was because of her that he came to know that his father cared for himwawas beautiful...the hesistance with which asad spoke his heart out acknowledging his father's love for him was just so beautiful...
Loved it 😳

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

brilliantly written ...had d scene b dis elaborate it wud ve been perfect ...
frm nxt tym wenever u ryt anything plzzz send me pm ...

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veenisha

@veenisha

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Edited by veenisha - 11 years ago

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Awww it so beautiful. ..very well wr

Cv ruin all dis..grrr

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

absolutely adorable. .

phir mukadar. .yahaan bhi picha nahi chodtha..

kash Gul nay eisa socha hota..

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Finally I'm back and this is the first thing that I read when I entered the forum! Thank you thank you so much for cheering me up with this beautiful OS!!! Literally made my mood!! I love this version of the scene that you wrote, especially the part where Asad tells Zoya that she made him realize that Rashid Khan really cared for him. The biggest shocker was when he called him "Abbu" and i loved that shock!!! I really want to see something like this in the show but that is seems next to impossible, given the current um... condition. But i loved this OS!!! Great great great job!!!

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

fab one as usual...ur work is incredibleee...

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

This was way better than the show... I loved it... it was emotional n more appropriate...
I like Ayaan but sometimes I feel he gets everything that Asad holds dear... his Abbu... now Zoya... I know I'm being irrational but I couldn't help think about it every time Gul brings in such twisted twists...