AsYa OS: Little Asad's Biggest Wish

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

WOW!!!👏

its amazingly beautiful!!!..u actually put asad thoughts(in the episode)in words...that too soo beautifully!!!

u r simply gr8 dr!!!!👍🏼

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MissReadingFaye

@MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Loved it, it was extremely well written 👏

xxx

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Wish the CV's grew brains on how to make scenes :)

Beautiful Monica :)

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Khan Sadaf

@_Sadaf_

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Just simply beautiful! 😳

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Have I ever told you that I like...no correction...LOVE your work???

Monica, why are you doing this to me??? You made me cry 😭

How I wish this scene was in the show. I am sure it would have helped to increase the TRP's. Such an emotional scene. Amazingly well written and very realistic dialogues. 👏

You are right. Kaash the CV's emphasized a bit more on the scene, especially on Asad since this was a very sincere, genuine wish from a kid who longed for his abbu. You managed to bring out that feeling and emotions very well. Loved the way you compared both brothers.

Asad, the man, is not jealous about his brother. But Asad, the kid, does envy the life his little brother had while he had to face the obstacles, the hurdles and struggles of life at a very young age.

It's not to say that that desire had completely vanished.

Wow, he said 'abbu'. He does not ask for money, he does not ask for toys all he asks for is love and affection. He cared less about all the gifts, all he could see was the love of his father and that made little Asad, and the little kid joh aaj tak kahin na kahin Asad mein zinda hain, a very happy kid.

Kya kahoon...its was touching and just too beautiful to be true.

Thanks for giving us the little happy Asad. It really touched my heart...

P.S. You are on a roll girl! 😎

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Aww!! This was heart touching and so beautifully written!!

Asad in the episode did not have a thing to say when he saw the gifts (though there were some dialogues in the BTS which were edited for god knows what reason!!)

I am happy that Asad in your story atleast realized Rashid's efforts for him !! It was really really really beautifully written!!