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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: a.sharma

hey... please update soon... have been waiting for it for sooo long now...


sry fr making u wait
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sketch done👍🏼


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

waiting for update..


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PART1: FIRST MEETING:)


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Asad drove fast to the address which was written in the letter, after reaching to the place he got down and knocked on the door to get no response .he waited for a minute for the door to be opened.
He messaged his temples , thinking "kahin uss ladki ko kuch hogaya ho toh"


Suddenly he noticed gas coming from the side window. He looked through the window ,but it was too blurr,probably it was kitchen. He didn't know what to do. Was the girl being attacked?.he then searched for stick or stone to break the window atleast.
After a finding a stone he broke open the window But there was no one in the kitchen now .he switched of the gas.he noticed that the some1 was cooking something and has spoiled the dish .



"thankgod" he sighed.
He then looked for the girl in the house, he went out of kitchen to the living room. He saw her photo frame hanging in the wall , he was lost in her beauty. Suddenly he saw shadow behind him with a broom-stick ready to hit him.



"wait , am not..." before he could complete his sentence ,she started beating
her yelling "chore ,chore".
Anyhow asad managed to stop her by grabbing her hand and in that instant they both fell on sofa and she was still shouting on the top of her voice. Asad kept her palm on her mouth to stop her.

"relax.. Mai chore nahi hun, "mai yahan tumhari madad karne aya hun." He informed. She gestured him with her eyes to let her free, he took his hand.

"huh" she sighed ."aap chore nahin hai ,toh yahan kar kya rahe hai" she enquired frowning


"agar aap mere upar se uthjayingi toh hum baith kar baat kar sakte hai" asad said controlling his anger And she laughed loudly to hide her blush and got down.


"hmm.. Toh , wassup?" Asad was shocked by her cool behaviour with a unknown person "hellloo" she waved her hands in front of him

"hmmm , yah , am ASAD AHMED KHAN"he introduced himself

"hi,am miss farooqui, zoya farooqui ,naam toh suna hi hoga" she said happily copying a dialogue from a film,to which asad couldn't resist his smile

"so , wats the matter mr.khan" she proceeded

"wo, 1 min" asad showed her the envelope
" galti se ye letter hamare ghar pe aagaya hai , , shayad hamare neighbours ka hoga but kon aapko hurt karna chahta hai"he said but he was shocked to see her reaction bcoz zoya was neither shocked nor puzzled

"mr.khan , mai jaanti thi ,aisa kuch hoga"
"matlab?"
"Newyork me mera 1 dost tha, he fell in love with me but I told him clearly ke am not interested ,then after some days he got violent ,yu know na some mad guys forcing girls to accept 'em" or else he will kill me" she replied calmly Asad had guessed from her accent that she had not spoken hindi for long

" you have to be careful Ms.farooqui" he said

"yah.. Thanks"

" k. aur haan meri wajah se aapke window ka nuqsaan hogaya , am sorry "

"its ok, you are a super-man" she laughed
ab mai chalta hun allah hafiz" When asad was about to leave they heard strange noises and saw a shadow thru the french windows,he gestured zoya to keep silent . Asad then saw 1 more shadow ,they both were probably trying to get into the house . Asad went out thru the back door to get those mens red-handed.zoya followed him hiding pepper spray in her hand. Asad then tapped on 1 of the man's shoulder to which he replied

"arrey 1 min ghar me koi nahi hai shayad"


After a second they both turned realizing they were caught. asad then punched them both on there nose and zoya started spraying the pepper. But one of man somehow managed to get the pepper spray from zoya and sprayed on her while asad was fighting with the other .

" aah, aasad ,asad" zoya shouted Asad started punching them till they lose their effort and fainted

"Ms.farooqui , are you alright"he asked Zoya was not able to open her eyes.
"chaliye aap andar ja kar wash kar lijye, mai in logon ko dekhta hoon" he said
"but I cant see anything , its its so ah .." she cringed
"ok yu sit in living room ,I will be there" he said.

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Asad got to know from the mens that they were thieves ,and not what asad and zoya were thinking asad handed them to the police
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" Ms.farooqui , come here, " asad lead her to the wash basin and helped her wash her face, he didn't know just In 1 meeting how he got soft corner for this girl.


"those mens were thieves, but what about this letter" asad asked worriedly

"oh, kuch nahi hoga mr.khan , iam a brave girl" she tried to smile,her eyes had become red
" aapne toh mujhe chore samajh liya tha but sach me chore aagaye "
",aap akeli kaisi rahegi yahan par " he sighed and said, "mujhe lagta hai ke aap"

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hit like and comment 😆 pls..?
p.s. this is not proof -read so pls ignore any mistakes 😳
Edited by princesbarbie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice😊
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting one thanks for pm continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
at last 1 chap update ho hi gaya.. 😆
it was amazng... Poor asad , bechare ki dhulayi ho gayi... 🤣
thnx for the pm..

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