AsYa ss:||KILL the Messenger|ON-hold!

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SS:KILL THE MESSENGER
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It was a cool and pleasant evening , asad had planned an outing with his family. He reached home soon because he was a bit free today from work.He unlocked the door using his keys , without making any noise so that he could give a surprise to his family . "ammi" he called out to get no response.
"tamatar, ayan, kahan ho tum log" he called out peeking in their respective rooms. He came to dining room and find a paper written "ASAD." He unfold it and read
'asad beta ,mai aur tamatar Kisi se milne jaa rahe hai , mai wapas aakar bataungi tumhe, agar bhook lagi ho toh fridge me khana hai ,tum aur ayan heat karke kha lena Allah hafiz beta!"
" pata nahi ammi kahan chali gayi" he sighed .
Just then he heard the bell rang . He opened the door thinking it 'd be ammi and najma,but it was a postman "yes?"asked asad.
"you have a courier sir.pls sign here"the postman said giving him a envelope . Asad took it and signed . After the post man left ,he saw the envelope. There was only the seal. the sender had not written the name and to whom the letter was.
"ajeeb log hai, letter kiske liye hai, ye toh likha hi nahi" he groaned to no one in particular. He kept it in the table and thought of having some snacks. He opened the fridge only to find daal chawal, sabzi n all. So he took a apple and a glass of juice.
He sat on sofa and started to nibble his apple reading a detective story and kept the juice in the table, but the glass fell over in the table spoiling the letter.
"oh shit" he said keeping the book aside and took the letter which was now soaked in juice.. He tore it and took the paper out ..
"thankgod, paper gila ni hua ,sirf envelope hi gila hua hai" he sighed keeping the stuffs in the sofa , but suddenly he noticed something different, photo of a girl.
Asad took the photo and stared
"beautiful , but who is she" he muttered He then took the paper and was shell-shocked "some one wants to kill this girl" he thought after reading the courier . He looked at the letter to find some clues, the address of that girl had written in it.
" what should I do now,lagta hai galti se ye letter yahan agaya hai,par address toh hamara hi hai" he thought. Without second thoughts he left to her address to make her aware of the threat she will be facing very soon.

A/N: HI everyone. . I ve been thinking to start a new ss and here is the outcome , I hope I will get the same appreciation as I got to my stories I LOVE YOU ZOYA AND NAUGHTY HEARTS..
so this SS will be more of a detective type but dont worry .. romance will be there as Romance is my fav genre and of course yours too!!!
dont forget to hit like and comment 😳 😊

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my other works:
NAUGHTY HEARTShttps://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3709153/asya-ff-naughty-hearts-part5-marry-me-pg73
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Very interesting continue soon and pls send pm to me. Update soon
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will read it soon...
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Intresting concept and prolouge... ...😊
Looking forward for update so update soon... 😊
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Very unique concept.
Continue soon.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.
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continue soon
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Interesting, continue soon😃
Thanks for the PM😊
Can you please PM your stories to TAT_VJ (my friend from madhubala forum) 😳 She keeps telling me that the OS there are really good and I always tell her that the ones here are better, so😳
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its very interesting!!! do continue soon!👍🏼

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