Kuch Toh Baaki Hai|AsYa & AyRa|Removed. - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Asad ruined 2 beautiful couples

lets see how he fixes things

you have written it beautifully

well done

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
VERY INTERESTING CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW THE STORY UNFOLDS THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Kameeni nxt part kab ayega????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Awesome 🥳
Loved AyRa part ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Very nice. please pm ne when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Res
Will unres after College😃


Unreswa
Finally part 1 aagaya. *happy happy dance dance*
Annie... dil khush kar ditta tune... aa jhappi paa

about the update *serious face*
I must say KUCH TOH BAAKI HAI update mein...
. oh come on who am I fooling... this was super good

about the parts I loved from the update :

I hiccupped, as she tried to calm me down by rubbing my back.
I sobbed hard, hugging Humera while she tried to calm me down

Because you love him. Came a voice from her heart.

She sreamed at the top of her voice making Humera jump, who was consoling her.
Humera stuttered to a hysteric Zoya, cupping her face and making her look at her. Zoya clutched Humera's hands tightly and shivered,She stammered, convincing herself more than Humera. Her voice was a mere whisper now, mirroring her shattered heart.

Her broken voice was a mere whisper, mirroring her broken heart, as her head fell down in defeat.


As Ayaan and Humera hugged their respective siblings, consoling them, they couldn't help but let the tears flow which they were shedding for each other.


I would say superbly written...
*ignore the drama. I m in a good mood*


Edited by -SB- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Madam aapki vacation khatam kab hogi????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Hey loved it...
Its really very interesting story...
Update n continue soon...
Pm me when u update next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
After ur exam update this one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Thank you for re-opening it hinz :)

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