#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17)

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@A_bibliophile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Hi pls don't show zoya as a broken soul and that girls are too emotional she is a spy they are trained get the normal asya back but pls I want to see soya doing a tit for tat to what as ad did to zoya then both of them will be even no emotional baggage I still can't digest sad was so clever and sly he made a complete fool out of zoya please make sad taste his own medicine let zoya also trap asad and then when they are even then the can actually start afresh zoya is looking like a emotional and dumb foil right now after zoya also dupes sad then u can start with the actual story cool cases gay fronds mischief pls do consider

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

[BR][DIV]I don't mind stalkers if they are like you cause you are amazing [L][/DIV][BR][DIV]I know you waromantic AsYa but it is hard to give as per situation but I'll give 2-3 moments here and there for sure this time (and not the flashback ones but in actual)[;)][/DIV]

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: elenaa

Awww shukriya shukriya shukriya 😉 (zoya ishstyle mein)

I read ur line 'and not the flashback ones but in actual' countless times

now IM AN OFFICIAL STALKER 🤣

I am blushing now 😳

Before you ask when will I update then not before a week

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 56

Posted: 12 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: ican
Hi pls don't show zoya as a broken soul and that girls are too emotional she is a spy they are trained get the normal asya back but pls I want to see soya doing a tit for tat to what as ad did to zoya then both of them will be even no emotional baggage I still can't digest sad was so clever and sly he made a complete fool out of zoya please make sad taste his own medicine let zoya also trap asad and then when they are even then the can actually start afresh zoya is looking like a emotional and dumb foil right now after zoya also dupes sad then u can start with the actual story cool cases gay fronds mischief pls do consider

Hey! I think Mahima is doing a great job with the story! Zoya from no angle is weak in her story. Obviously when she is alone, she has to break down to herself. She hasn't broken down in front of Asad and not even her colleagues.

She has been an extremely strong character and the way Mahima has portrayed it is beyond perfection. Any girl, be it a spy or a police inspector, she is a girl! We girls are emotional to a certain level.

Zoya has not let anyone know of her inner turmoil which is extremely strong!

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Hey! I think Mahima is doing a great job with the story! Zoya from no angle is weak in her story. Obviously when she is alone, she has to break down to herself. She hasn't broken down in front of Asad and not even her colleagues.
She has been an extremely strong character and the way Mahima has portrayed it is beyond perfection. Any girl, be it a spy or a police inspector, she is a girl! We girls are emotional to a certain level.
Zoya has not let anyone know of her inner turmoil which is extremely strong!

agree wid every word of urs 👍🏼