#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17) - Page 69

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ican

Hi pls don't show zoya as a broken soul and that girls are too emotional she is a spy they are trained get the normal asya back but pls I want to see soya doing a tit for tat to what as ad did to zoya then both of them will be even no emotional baggage I still can't digest sad was so clever and sly he made a complete fool out of zoya please make sad taste his own medicine let zoya also trap asad and then when they are even then the can actually start afresh zoya is looking like a emotional and dumb foil right now after zoya also dupes sad then u can start with the actual story cool cases gay fronds mischief pls do consider


The actual story is about how Cupid Strikes two individuals and how they get together in spite of everything
well Zoya has not been shown as an emotional and dumb fool

she was hurt but she didn't take a break from work and almost gave up her life to get the key

she had to break down but yet she didn't showing it to anyone

"Weak people just cry, Strong people take revenge, Intelligent people let go."

and the Zoya in my story is intelligent

she isn't a tit-for-tat kind of person

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-


Hey! I think Mahima is doing a great job with the story! Zoya from no angle is weak in her story. Obviously when she is alone, she has to break down to herself. She hasn't broken down in front of Asad and not even her colleagues.
She has been an extremely strong character and the way Mahima has portrayed it is beyond perfection. Any girl, be it a spy or a police inspector, she is a girl! We girls are emotional to a certain level.
Zoya has not let anyone know of her inner turmoil which is extremely strong!


Thank you for making things clear 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--


Thank you for making things clear 🤗


🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: elenaa


im not asking I know it obviously takes time to update such a wonderful chapter everytime 🤗


yah! glad you understand

I have to update my other story too which will most probably tomorrow 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Page 100 is coming so I'm spamming!



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Posted: 12 years ago

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