#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17)

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AAOGE KAB TUM O SAAJANA...

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Originally posted by: --Mahima--

update comming in few hours

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Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
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its update time

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Trying to keep my comments simple..

Brilliant Update as usual baby! 🤗

Asad gone somewhere! 😲 Dilshad sending Najma! 😊 Awww... Asad crying at the beach!

Najma consoled Asad! 😃

Beautiful Scene! Najma stood for Asad in front of Rashid and didn't let Asad get shoutings from him! 😳

Zoya at Khan Villa? 😲

Rashid noticed Zoya's red eyes and questioned "What happened to your eyes?"

"Something went inside them" replied Zoya not meeting Rashid's eyes.

Asad heard this and knew that Zoya had been crying. He was glad that the two had not spotted him yet.

Obviously she's been crying! 😭 Poor thing!

The flashback was so ADORABLE! ❤️ Zoya finished the case before anyone could come! 😆

She opened the door to let Asad in and remarked "Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan, I don't think your intentions are good."

Asad blushed a bit and after composing himself chided "I am not shameless like you."

"Me and shameless! You are the one who is in my room at 3:30 at night" said Zoya warping her arms around Asad's head.

Asad smirked and moved close to Zoya and blew air in her ears to which she turned crimson red. Asad then whispered into her ears "I need a first aid box."

Zoya who was expecting something romantic was startled and moved back. Then as Asad's words struck her and worry took over her. "Did you get hurt when you came here?" she asked as she moved to get a first aid box.

"Not me but you. I noticed few bruises that you got from the fight and hid smartly. I knew you won't tend to them at all and I couldn't sleep thinking about that" replied Asad looking at Zoya intently.

The flirting was too cute! 😃 Asad tended to her wounds! 😳 Really a super cute part!

Yayyy! Nikhat and Nuzzhat also forgave Asad! 😳 Awwwiiieee! 👏

Spinster's Part is Las Vegas! 🥳 Awesome! 👍🏼

Another Flashback! ❤️ Basket Ball reminds me of DMG! Loved the AsYa convo towards the end of the Flashback! ❤️

"Deleting from the memory of the pc was easy but how do I get him from my mind and heart" questioned Zoya to no one in particular.

It's impossible to erase memories from your mind! Flawlessly written Chapter! 👏

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Love the whole update! ❤️ Continue soon! 😳

Love you heaps Mahi baby! 🤗 ❤️

xoxo

Mina di! 😳

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Prazeena Bhattarai

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Firstly the title of this chapter was awesome! Superb!! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

"It will be alright, bhaijaan" consoled Najma as she hugged her brother.

"I can't live without, Zoya. It is killing me slowly" sobbed Asad.

Najma felt tears sting her eyes and she said "Zoya will be back besides you and I know that. She loves you a lot bhaijaan."

"Tamatar, I know that I hurt you too but you always treated me dearer than even a real brother" apologized Asad.

That was really heart touching 😳 😳😳

I always adore this brother-sister duo...and they were jus wow in this update !

And than came the Flashback...Zoya's dedication to her work and Asya conversation aftermath was beautifully written ! 😳 😳 😳

After saying this Zoya moved from there but Asad grabbed her hand to stop her.

Did he really do that??? Manna padega asad miyaa !! 😳 😃 😆

Woah! Asad is winning everyone's heart...in the speed of tortoise 😆

I guess Aayan and Zoya would be the last one 😆

Asad also had something in mind so he said "We should go to Las Vegas once to see if we can find anything there."

"I had thought of the same thing" announced Zoya.

SAME SAME THINKING 😳 😳 😆 😆

TRIP to Las Vegas on the way !!! Yipppeee !! waiting ! !

That BASKETBALL wala flashback was the best part of the chapter ! !

I really enjoyed reading it ! 😃 😃

"Deleting from the memory of the pc was easy but how do I get him from my mind and heart" questioned Zoya to no one in particular.

This was really touchy ! !