#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17) - Page 37

Originally posted by: nuts_22

Awesome update dear😊

Totally loved it

Bechara asad😭

felt sooo bad for him

The song,the emotions,the love,the pain and the past

Completely enjoyed reading it

You are an awesome writer👏

Now I need an update fast😉

Today I am online specially to read your update😃

And this time I got an long update

luv ya🤗

Originally posted by: happygolucky234

Asad shouldn't get forgiveness so easily. He should repent more

Originally posted by: sasir

nice.loved it

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Thankewww thankeww so much Mahi...wud love to see dat scene

Abhi exam toh aaya bhi nahi baby 😭 its after a week!!!!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭

Anyways hope it wud go well...And i will not end up writing some Asya scenes 🤣

Love ya!!! 😳 😳

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

All the best!!

You'll surely do well

😊

Originally posted by: freya123

amazing update

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Yayyy me first!

Wooohooo!!!!

WOW!!!!!

This chapter was really heart wrenching! 😭 Zoya was saved from falling yet, was shot while saving Padfoot! 😭

The way you have portrayed everyone's condition through the song while in the hospital was flawless! 👏

Asad was praying inside the dargah and begging God to bestow death upon him but spare Zoya. He begged God not to punish Zoya for his sins. Not punish him like this. Tears flew out of his eyes as he prayed. A fakir who had seen Asad like this from morning till the night time now placed his hands on his shoulder and said "Tumhari dua Qubool Hai allah ko." Asad hearing this ran back to the hospital as he felt life returning to him. Without bothering about anyone who was stopping him, he ran inside the ICU room and saw Zoya opening her eyes. Relief spread through him and he thanked God as the doctors brushed past him to attend to Zoya.

This para took my breathe away! I actually had teared! 😭

I'm really enjoying Zoya's come back! The strong girl is back! 😃 And the way she is behaving with Asad!

Asad Ahmed Khan totally deserves this behavior after what he has done!

Rashid's scene with Asad was brilliant! 👏 *hats off*

Rashid who noticed this finally let out his anger. He held Asad by his collar and shouted "Get out of our sight this very second otherwise not even God can save you."

Asad who was expecting that sooner or later this would come just calmly replied "I won't leave, abbu."

"Abbu! Don't you dare call me that" shouted Rashid whose anger was increasing with Asad's stubbornness.

Asad with tears in his eyes said "I know it is too late but I am sorry for all that I did. I am ready to do anything to convince you about my honesty now."

"I want nothing to do with you" said Rashid pushing Asad out of the door.

"Stop" shouted Zoya who had been witnessing all this.

FANTASTIC! 👏

Our Zoya Captain allotted amazing jobs to each and every person! 👏

"Ayaan, Rashid sir and Humeira will keep an eye on Asad. Najma should do all research regarding the bombs and suspects. Nikhat will check all official records to find their whereabouts. Nuzzhat will get their sketches with various disguises made and distributed throughout the entire world. Asad will help you all in this work" instructed Zoya.

Dilshad smiled and asked "Nothing for me?"

"You won't leave me alone till I recover so how can you do something else" said Zoya.

"I love my job" said Ayaan with a smirk.

Zoya who knew Ayaan well said "And no violence."

I was sure Ayaan would love his job! 😆

Poor Asad.. I know he has committed a sin.. but, u know na.. I have a soft corner for that soul!

OMG!!! Asad and Zoya conversation was BRILLIANT!!!! 👏

"Zoya, Can we talk?" asked Asad with hesitance.

"What is it?" shot back Zoya.

Asad started "I wanted to apologize to you for all I did and that I lo..."

"You need not to. I know I was just a pawn in your plan. You are an extremely good player. But if you are here to get my forgiveness then I am extremely sorry. I have learnt that if a person betrays you once it's their fault but if the same one does it again then it's yours. Plus the person who you should actually ask for forgiveness is Dilshad phoophi. You broke her totally after all even before you were born she has been fighting against death for you" said Zoya without taking a single breath.

Ayaan entered to room to see Asad there and said "Leave! Now!"

Asad left without a word.

I loved Zoya's reply.. She should not at all give in easily! Way to go Zoya! 👏

And the BEST SCENE...

Dilshad and Asad actually made me cry! 😭 The revelations of the past was awesome! 👏

Asad has had a major misunderstanding about everything coz of that Ghafoor and Razia! 😡

Finally he is accepting Dilshad as his Ammi! 😊

Asad heard everything and just placed his head on Dilshad's lap and wept.

"Love doesn't come that easily. You need to fight for it. I have seen love for Zoya in your eyes. She is angry and hurt but you don't give up" instructed Dilshad.

Asad said "I won't ammi. I'll fight for our love even against death."

Flawlessly written Chapter! 👏

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! I wanna know what happens next? 😳

Love the whole update! ❤️

Continue soon! 😳

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️

Bye...

xoxo

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Finally my favourite comment is here

You know while typing even I had tears in my eyes especially during the song part

Even I am having a soft corner for Asad but just don't want things to come so quickly

Yes strong Zoya is here but maybe not that strong

Dilshad-Asad scene was planned by me long back only

I LOVE YOU TOO BIG SISTA ❤️

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Your favourite comment is it? 😳

I'm glad you wrote the Dilshad Asad Scene! 👏

Obviously.. Zoya can't be that strong! She is not Iron Man! 🤣 And for Asad.. I know, you too have a soft corner, but his sin cannot be forgiven so easily!

I'm loving tha pace of this story and the way you have planned things is BRILLIANT! 👏