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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Chapter 1:

Awesome Update! ❤️

Loved it to bits! ❤️

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Chapter 2:

This update was sooo cute!

Completely loved it!


OMG! Asad and Zoya fighting like cats and dogs and they played Rock-Paper-Scissors thing? 😆
This is ADORABLE! ❤️

Zoya made Asad eat spicy food! Awww... poor thing! 😳

Ahaan.. I guess Najma is gonna get her bhaijaan and her bestie together soon!
Surely they have to wish her together! 😳


BRILLIANT UPDATE! 👏
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Chapter 3:

OMG!!! Their lips brushed??? 😲 ... ☺️

Yayyy!!!! ❤️

Ahaan.. Dance competition!


Haayeee...


Ya allah.. They FOUGHT AGAIN!!!!


Going to the next part! 😉
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Chapter 4:

Awww... Mutual Understanding... 😳
Asad and Zoya teasing each other! Kya baat hai! 👏


Sharing a bitter black coffee!!!! 😳

Wah wah.. Dosti ho gayi finally! 👏


Awww... I loved the HARRY POTTER convo.. 😃 ❤️

The ending was sooo sweet...

That's the beginning of a LOVE STORY! ❤️

Continue soon baby!

Loved every bit! ❤️

Love you!

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Chapter 5:

Harry Potter and AsYa.. *Lethal Combo*

Asad is Dan's friend and OMG Zoya and her pick up lines... 😆

Crazy gal... 😳


I just loved the part:

"Your smile is like Expelliarmous, simple but disarming" said Asad looking at Zoya's smile.
Zoya looked at Asad and said "You are hitting on me."
"I am not. I was just saying a pickup line you could use. You know when you meet Daniel next" Asad said with a hint of jealously in his voice.


So she loves HP and not Dan.. Ain't that a good news for AAK! 😉

Loved every bit! ❤️

Love you!


Going to next update! 😃
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Chapter 6:

So Finally Mr. AAK has confessed.. Kind of... 😉

Najma is totally gonna play cupid! 😃

Loving the bonding between AsYa

Loved every bit! ❤️

Waiting for Dilshad to convince Rashid to send AsYa to Punjan for case together... Haayeee..

Love you!


Continue soon! 😳
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Chapter 7:

Asad asking Zoya about Marriage preferences? 😲 *Shocking* But I loved the whole convo! 😳

This man is not leaving any chance to tease and romance her! 😉 Too much! 😆

Running into the jungle.. OMG! Hadd hoti hai Asad miya! 😛 Bechari ne jeans pehna tha.. What was the need of lifting her.. Or did you actually want to lift her! 😉

Finally the Mangalpur effect and that too with MayUr Mahasangram! 👏 ❤️

Zoya managed to cook given the fact she didn't know how to! 👏 Kitchen Romance! ☺️ I'm always a lover of Kitchen Romance! 😳

Oye hoyye.. 😳 Asad singing for his wife.. (so called wife)... I love that song! ❤️

Now the only thing I'm waiting for is... KISS..

Love the whole update!

Love you heaps my baby sista!


Continue soon! 😳
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
For New Thread [#2]:

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima


@ Mina Di
You are the reason I started this story. You have been there with me right from my first story. From a friend you have become my elder sister. I so love you.
And ofcourse you became a Sizzlerz today (5th AUG)


First of ALL.. CONGO FOR NEW THREAD! 🥳

Thank you baby sis! 🤗 I love you more! ❤️

You're the reason for My Stories and I'm the reason for yours! 😳

We have known each other for many years now and we shall be like this forever love!

SIZZLERS!!! 🥳

P.S.: I still damn hate the color!
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Chapter 8:

Fighting for the bed! 😆 Ain't that cute! 😳

OMG!! SMF ki Zoya Farooqui is scared of Cockroaches???

This man is not leaving any chance to tease her! Does he? 😉

The Best dialogues:

The mere thought of a cockroach on the bed made Zoya shiver with fear. She then grabbed Asad's arms swiftly and said "We can share the bed."

Asad raised his eyebrows and asked "You are more scared of a cockroach than any man sleeping next to you."

"You are not just any man" Zoya replied and forcefully made Asad sit on the bed.

Asad after settling down on the bed made direct eye contact with Zoya and asked "So you trust me?"

Zoya did not answer the question but her eyes spoke everything.

Asad, who wanted Zoya to admit it, got up from the bed and said "In that case I'll sleep on the floor."

"I am in the same room with you. I think that is an answer in itself"replied back Zoya and the proceeded to lie on the bed and turned her face to the side opposite to Zoya.

Asad probing further asked "Is that a yes?"

Zoya pretended to sleep and did not reply.

Asad sighed and sat down on the bed. He knew that Zoya was still awake and decided to prank her. He exclaimed "Oh my god. Cockroach on the bed."

Zoya hearing this swiftly got up and jumped on Asad's lap. She quivered with fear and asked "Where?"

Asad smirked at the success of his plan and said "Right here."

Zoya looked at Asad to see if he was pointing anywhere but she still couldn't see any cockroach. "I don't see it" spoke Zoya and her face was turning pale.

Asad chuckled at this and said "In my lap."

Zoya now understood that she had been played at. She was first upset and then went mad with rage. She started hitting Asad on the chest with her fists.

Asad immediately grabbed Zoya's hands and twisted them behind her back.

As a result they came closer to each other. They could clearly hear their own heart thumping in their chests. Then an eye contact was made and they both were lost in the moment. Zoya moved closer to Asad and their lips were now inches apart. This closeness was driving Asad crazy. He moved more close to Zoya and now just a little gap was left between their lips. Before they could close this distance, the wind outside made a loud swishing sound making Asad and Zoya aware of the position they were in.

Zoya quickly got up from Asad's lap and went to lie down on her side. She turned her face away from Asad so that he could not see her crimson red face.

Asad followed suit and lied on his side with his back towards Zoya.


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I read this ^^^ part again and again!!!

Oh shit!!!! Zoya almost died???? 😲

Asad saved her.. HURRAY!!!! And he is taking care of her!

Finally.. Ayaan knows about Zoya's feelings towards Asad! 😳 I'm lovin' it! ❤️

Oye Hoyye!!!! Asad Zoya ka haal behaal ho gaya ek doosre ke bina!!! 😳

He spoke aloud to no one in particular "Wish I could hear that voice every morning when I wake up."

She spoke to herself in a whisper "Wish I could see that face every morning when I wake up."

Wah! Kya baat hai! 👏 I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Ab I want KISS.. Pretty Please! *batting my eyelashes*

Love the whole update!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

*hi five*

And now... listening to "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Chapter 9:

Loved the way they spoke their hearts out and shared their feelings and likes and dislikes with each other! 😳

Finally they KISSED?????? YIPPEEE!!!!!

OMG!! You and me do confession at the same time! DAMN Girl! How much of Telepathy can we do at a time? 😲 😆

The Best dialogues:

Asad found Zoya standing on a balcony of the same hotel where there was the engagement party. She was facing the sea and the cool breeze was blowing her hair.

"Zoya" shouted Asad.

Zoya did not stir from her position.

Asad moved further closer and said "Zoya"

Zoya knew that it was time to face everything and turned around to look at Asad.

"I am not here to apologize for what happened as doing that would mean that I regret it or that it was wrong. But I don't think like that. For me it was perfect" spoke Asad making direct eye contact.

Zoya turned back again as she digested each and every word. She had not expected Asad to speak so directly about it.

Asad on seeing Zoya's reaction said "You can't turn your back towards the truth."

Zoya was still shocked and did not say a word.

Asad moved towards Zoya and grabbed her hand. He made her turn around to face him and holding both her arms said "You can't deny that there is something between us. There is a strange hidden desire for each other deep within us. You can't refuse the fact that I love you and you love me."

The closeness was driving Zoya crazy. "You are hurting me" spoke Zoya as she struggled to move from Asad's grip.

"I didn't mean to" apologized Asad and left her arms.

Zoya again turned to look back at the sea.

Asad on seeing Zoya's reactions said his final words while walking away "You can run away from me as much as you want. You can turn your face away me till whatever time you want. You can deny your love for me till your last breath. But you can't run away or turn or back to your feelings. You can't lie to yourself."

Zoya turned on hearing this to see Asad walking away from her. She felt that something very precious was slipping away. "Asad" she shouted.

Asad stopped in his tracks and immediately turned to look at Zoya.

Zoya started moving towards Asad while speaking "You asked me what my last words to you would have been so I am telling them to you now.Those words are that I may take a journey even to the end of the world but yet will find no one like you. Not even in the world of movies or books. Not even in my world of Harry Potter."

Asad realized that Zoya had indirectly told him that she loved him. The words 'not even Harry Potter' were ringing in his head and a huge smile spread on his face. He opened his arms for Zoya.

Zoya seeing this ran and quickly hugged Zoya with all her might and Asad replied back with equal passion.

Unknown to them someone had seen and heard everything and was smiling ear to ear.


~~~~

I read this ^^^ part again and again!!!

This was the CUTEST CONFESSION EVER! 👏

Ab ye Razia aur Ghafoor kyun aa gaye?

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Ab I want another KISS.. Pretty Please! *batting my eyelashes* Obviously.. AFTER CONFESSION KISS to banta hai boss! 😉

Love the whole update!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

*hi five*

And now... listening to "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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