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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 10:

Yayyy me first!


Wooohooo!!!!


Ahaan!! Rashid teasing them! Loved the scene! 😳 Poor Asad blushing! 😆

A Date! 👏 Not a dinner date though! 🤔

Awww.. Zoya took him to the graveyard? 😲 To her parent's grave! 😭 Beautifully written! I loved it! ❤️

The gang teasing AsYa... awww...😳 And the shoe shopping convo was too cute too! 😆

And finally Asad took her out on a date! The most exceptionally unique date everrr!!! 👏

The Best dialogues:

Rashid continued "Young love it is but I don't want your personal life to interfere in your profession."

Everyone was glad to hear this and smiled that finally they had confessed. Asad turned crimson red while Zoya kept a straight face throughout.


~~~~


Asad walked in and hug her from behind. Zoya immediately turned off her laptop and pushed Asad's arms away.

"Can't I even hug my girlfriend?" asked Asad.

Zoya turned and looked at Asad "Not while we are working."

Asad pouted at this and said "That's unfair. As it is we are not paired together."

Zoya chuckled at this and replied back "Well we will surely get time to work together soon."

Asad made a sad face and said "I wonder when that will come."


~~~


With that Zoya drove the car with a confused Asad sitting beside her. She finally stopped the car at a graveyard.

"Kabristan" spoke a shocked Asad.

Zoya replied "Yes."

Asad said "Now I get it. You are planning to kill me and bury me here. And these flowers are for my grave, right?"

Zoya just chuckled at this.


~~~


Zoya finally stopped between four graves which were placed two in front of two and sat down there. Asad sat down next to Zoya.

"These four graves belong to my parents. My birth parents as well as my foster parents" Zoya spoke with tears streaming down her cheeks.

Asad wiped away her tears with his hands and placed his hands on her shoulder to comfort her.

Zoya spoke between her tears "I come here almost every full moon night."

Asad motioned her not to cry and Zoya wiped away her tears and gave a smile.

Zoya continued "I put flowers on every grave as it gives me peace and somehow brings it close to my parents. Also, I don't like seeing graves without flowers and I want everyone here to feel loved. "

Asad smiled at this and said "I don't even know where my ammi's grave is. "

Zoya was shocked to see this and tears fell from Asad's eyes.

Asad said "Her dead body could never be retrieved'."

Zoya gently kissed away Asad's tears and pulled him into a tight hug.

"Ayaan's parents don't have a grave too. At times he just comes with me and this gives him'" Zoya spoke.

"Peace' I know' I felt it" Asad said meaning every word.


~~~


Zoya then drove to a place near the sea and a little far away from the city. They had picked up ice-cream on their way.

Now they sat on the bonnet of the car enjoying their ice-cream and the cool breeze of the sea. Also they could see the whole city from that place.

"The best night of my life" said Asad smiling at Zoya.

Zoya replied "Really?"

"Zoya, I am very grateful to you for tonight. I have never felt so much at peace with myself before" spoke Asad honestly.

Zoya simply smiled at Asad on hearing this.

Asad then said "You really are the light in my darkness."


~~~


Ayaan said "Well, sir does have a great choice. The pair of converse Zoya is wearing are amazing." He then asked Zoya "Don't you think so?"

Everyone then noticed the pair that Zoya was wearing. It indeed was fantastic. It was ankle length and the color was blue with a blend of white. It could go with almost any attire.

Zoya replied with a smile "I think they are perfect."

"Just like you" blurted out Asad.

Zoya turned slightly pink at this and Ayaan exclaimed "Why are you blushing, Zoya. We all know about it now."

Ayaan then started humming.

Aaj kal Tere Mere Pyar Ke Charche Har Zubaan Par
Sab Ko Maloom Hai Aur Sabko Khabar Ho Gayi

Aaj kal Tere Mere Pyar Ke Charche Har Zubaan Par
acha
Sab Ko Maloom Hai Aur Sabko Khabar Ho Gayi
To kya

Rashid came in the canteen and interrupted Ayaan "You sing quiet well Ayaan."


~~~


"Have you seen Asad?" asked Zoya.

"No Hi' No Hello' Direct Asad" teased Humeira.

Ayaan further teased "Looks like someone is missing someone badly."

At that moment Asad walked in along with Najma, Nikhat and Nuzzhat. Padfoot trotted behind them and rushed to lick Zoya.

Najma asked "Who's missing who?"

Humeira answered "Someone was missing someone. Not any longer though."

Zoya and Asad's eyes met at this as Asad understood what Humeira was saying.


~~~


While having lunch Asad seizing a chance whispered into Zoya's ears "8:30 sharp' I'll pick you up' It's my turn to take you on a date."


~~~


"How did you pull it off?" asked Zoya.

Asad replied "With some help. I wanted to do something that you would like for this date. And I know that you love experimenting with gadgets and I had found it similar to your taste."

Zoya exclaimed "I love it Asad."

Asad just smiled and said "Now sit back and enjoy the show."

Zoya was enjoying to her heart's content seeing the bluish white colored lighting striking the cage and hearing the music produced. Asad was just enjoying Zoya's expressions.

Zoya said "I have never enjoyed music so much. In fact I have never enjoyed so much."

"I always enjoy this much whenever I am with you" said Asad.

Zoya hugged Asad on hearing this and Asad hugged her back with equal passion.

Zoya and Asad after some time pulled away from each other.

Zoya then kissed Asad on his cheeks.

~~~~


I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Loved both the dates!

Love the whole update!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

*hi five*

And now... listening to "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Chapter 11:

Yayyy me first!


Wooohooo!!!!


Haayeee!!! 😳

After the third knock she turned the door knob and went inside. At that very moment, Asad entered in the room wearing only a white pajama and he was drying his hair with a towel. Zoya froze on that very spot.

Asad after a few seconds spotted Zoya in his room who was just gaping at him. He smirked and said "Like what you see."

Zoya finally came back to reality as Asad said those words. She started speaking "I just came to..." and trailed off as she saw Asad walking towards her "six packs"

Asad was enjoying the effect he had on Zoya and moved closer to her who started taking steps backward. She was soon pinned between the wall and Asad and he kept his hands on her either side. Water was still dripping down his chest and the towel now hung around his neck.

"So you like six packs, huh?" asked Asad clearing enjoying it.


I loved the AsYa Room Scene... 😳

---x---

WHAT THE HELL??? 😲 Ghafoor and Razia are Asad's Maamu and Mumaani? 😲 🤢 And they are plotting against Zoya? 😲 Why?????

Awww.. The group scene was Adorable! 😃 *group hug* 🤗

OMG!!! Zoya is suspected by Lucius? 😲 Ayaan and Asad are her pillars of strength. She would prove herself innocent. 😃

Asad took her for a DATE!!! the whole convo of pulling each other's legs was awesome! 👏 😆

THE OFFICIAL PROPOSAL!!!! WOOOHOOO!!!!!

The Best dialogues:

"I don't survive due to oxygen; I survive because you exist" said Asad.

Zoya chuckled at this and said "That was the cheesiest one-liner I have ever heard."

"They are better than your Harry Potter pick up lines" said Asad defending himself.

Zoya replied back "You dont understand Harry Potter plus Daniel loves my lines."

"Wait a minute. You still in touch with Daniel?" enquired Asad.

"Of course" said Zoya and then added "Jealous?"

"Jealous my foot... After all you had said you love the character actually and you love me more than that" said Asad.

"I had said that" said Zoya laying emphasis on the word had.


~~~


After some time Asad broke the kiss and said "I think we should go home."

Zoya who was still lost in that moment said Hmmm..."

Asad moved a little away from Zoya but Zoya was in no mood to let him go.

Asad said "Zoya, we are not married yet."

"But we will be soon" said Zoya who was totally submissive at the moment.

"Zoya, I dont want you to regret it later" said Asad.

Zoya replied "I never regret anything in my life."


~~~~


I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! I wanna see how you reveal the mystery! 😳

Love the whole update!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

*hi five*

And now... listening to "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Chapter 12:

Yayyy me first!


Wooohooo!!!!


Haayeee!!! 😳

Asad to this replied with a pout "Am I not understanding."

Zoya simply chuckled to this and said "You are jealous of Padfoot now."

"I am not jealous of anyone and I have no reason to be" spoke Asad linking his hand with Zoya's.

Zoya simply blushed at this.


I loved this Scene... 😳 I could actually imagine this!

---x---

What's up with Asad? 😕 He is behaving wierd! Poor Rashid sir.. His brain is doing somersaults!

WHAT THE f**k!!!! Asad is involved with Razia and Ghafoor? 😡 And the damn revelations!!! 😲

And YOU...



You are seriously ^^^ this girl who is laughing out here! 😡

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! I wanna know what's the mystery coz I know Asad ain't bad!

Love the whole update! ❤️

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

*hi five*

And now... listening to "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Bas ho gaya... Finally done with posting all the previous comments! 😉

*FLYING KISS*


Love you heaps baby.. Going to Read Chapter 13... 😳


Bye...


Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Now this is a cliffhanger...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update plz continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
congo 4 new thread!!
Awww its bad tht Asad played a game!!

Anways chaptr was gd!!

Tq so much!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆mri di aap spam kar ri ho?😆
res!!
OMG!!!!! MAAAHII!!!! THIRD THREAD!!!
mahi tu to choke chhakke maar ri hai yaar... 😆
may u have 100 threads for ths...
wooohooo
rest of d comment coming soon!!!
😆
Edited by LuvUAsYa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Congratulations for new thread🥳
Ohh so Asad really believes that Dilsad is the reason for his ammi' s death... Poor guy he is very soon going to realise his mistakes n will see the true colours of his mammu n mumaani😡
U stopped in such a cliffhangr.. will Asad save Zoya and ask for her forgiveness n love kya Zoya Asad ko maaf kar payegi... Plz update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
res!!
Unres


And we have a quick update!!🥳
Congratulations on the new thread!!🥳

Thank you so much for the special shout-out !! You also have been a very dear friend in no time!! I love it when I help you spam Mrina's threads😆😆... Love you loads!! 🤗
Me ??a spammer?? What can I say?? I learnt from the best!!! 😉😉

So finally you had to put in a note stating Asad was NO player and what happened had actually happened!!!..OK...i have no choice but to accept it now😕

Coming to the update now...
Aww!! Everybody is worried how Zoya is going to cope with the heart break😭😭..But our super girl has taken charge and has prioritized people's safety!! She and team made one hell of a master plan in locating the hideout!! Ayaan is such a darling friend, knowing how much she is coping with the pain, asks her to go and get some peace !!

Asad??? what do I say about him now?? He cares about Zoya and also knows Zoya will chose right over wrong!!!

And then the Jack Frost song!! Apt song in here!!👏👏
Asad's turmoil and Zoya's pain at first and later his realization and her choosing her duty!!

Loved this line
he wanted to be home and home is where the heart is!!

Honestly after all our chat, I did not expect Asad to realize this early..You gave me a surprise there 😊

And then our super girl has got the key and Asad sees Razia and Gafoor threatening her!!
Loved Zoya's line here telling Asad
"Somebody can be the light in darkness if you want to get out of the darkness"

And Zoya took the fall!!..She is a super girl..nothings going to happen to her...I am waiting for Asad's reactions now...Bring on the drama Mahi!!!
p.s - You disabled the quote settings??? I could not quote my fav lines and had to struggle typing them!!😆😆

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago

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