Faasle III parts 31-40 - Page 99

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

First of all i will to say that I am so so so so so sorry for being so late...i did see your update in the morning but was busy and then i went out😭so i am really very sorry but i will make it up to you with an extremely long wala comment i just hope you don't get bored and tired reading this...😆

please...no sorries year. IF is not our life😆 even if we want it to be

Well coming to the update need i say it was as usual fantabulous...I knew you said that we won't be disappointed and i had full faith in you but honestly this update was even better than my expectations...with everything that is going on in QH this update was so refreshing and wonderful and i loved how you had your own take on how various scenes could have been handled in QH...this update was sheer brilliance di and i just want to hug you for this🤗

Honestly di when in the QH asad said to zoya"kya aapko meri mohabbat pe yakeen hai"i felt he was emotionally blackmailing her and here too you show him emotionally blackmailing zoya but i loved the dialogues

"ZOYA, KILLING PEOPLE IS ALSO NOT A JOKE! Kya tum is mission ke liye mera itna sa kaam nahin kar sakti? Kya mujh par yakeen nahin hai? Trust me, everything will be alright. I just need you to look at the bigger picture here. Please say YES Zoya- mere liye, mere andar ki us badle ki aag ko bujhaane ke liye, hamare saath jo na insaafi huyi hai, uske liye- please Zoya."

I loved these dialogues especially because you showed asad being selfish here and asking zoya to do something for him and not for some other person.I guess you were just tired of him being selfless and being used all the time😆But i find this more realistic.Being a little selfish is kind of a survival mechanism for every human being and i loved how you showed asad's selfish side here😃

if u look at it from asad's perspective, he didn't see anything wrong in that idea...even he is operating undercover but he touched a sensitive chord here. That's what I feel that even in the show, Asad touched the most sensitive chord in Zoya's life...if he had asked her to do anything else, I am sure should have not felt so hurt or abandoned

But more this i loved how you showed zoya handling this situation👏

"yes, I will help you. Of course I want justice too but I can only help on my terms, not yours."

I loved the dialogue di...and i loved how zoya stood up for herself and put her foot down instead of crying and begging.I loved how you didn't let the strong,independent zoya succumb to the situation and turn into a lamb

yes, even in the show, they could have shown Asya help Nikhat in a positive way- persuade her, promise to help help her through the crisis instead of their foolish plan

aap mujhey jaante zaroor hain lekin poori tarah pehchaante nahin hain

So true...i guess after zoya's accident he started loving zoya selflessly but didn't really understand her

I loved how you showed that just for asad's happiness zoya didn't forget humeira's happiness

Aapke liye mere dil mein bahut izzat hai Mr. Khan and main chaahti hoon zindagi bhar yeh izzat barkaraar rahe. I would never want to belittle my love or feelings for you, and I hope you feel the same way about me. Please don't even entertain that thought again

Now that is called reply...what a slap on asad's face👏You know di the CVs absolutely missed this part in the show that how will zoya ever br able to respect asad again when he agreed to the fake nikaah but i loved that you showed this aspect here👏and what a firm way to put her foot down...now this is our zoya..the one who will never sacrifice his self respect,who will put her view across firmly and who will know where to draw the line when your expects something from you...

yes, at least in the show Zoya had been so clear about her ideology about nikaah and even then asad made her compromise her most cherished ideology...that wasn't fair at all

Asad lowered his eyes; he had never felt so ashamed in his life

Another thing that CVs missed asad being ashamed on his decision..yes he was sad that he had hurt zoya but i didn't see even a little shame for having agreed to such a thing

well he did say that he felt guilty and that's why didn't want to face her till dilshaad drilled some sense into him

he tried to hold her hand but she backed away.

"Mr. Khan, please don't try to touch me right now."

Wow now this is what i wanted to see in QH too...zoya being apalled by asad's physical proximity and jerking him away but instead we got a clinging zoya...but i am so happy that you showed her reacting this way...a way in which any self respecting woman should react😃

I am glad that zoya told him that this was a big deal for her and that she was upset...he really doesn't understand her he thinks she is overreacting...well i guess an occupational hazard of being in naval forces you tend to take things less personally but i am glad zoya asked him to leave👏

yes, that's a woman's weapon for sure😆 no man likes physical rejection by his woman (life lesson for you too😆)

I loved how she decided to sit in the back seat...small gestures do say a lot😆

oh and we got to hear "incredibly foolish"again...oh man i have missed this

"Mr. Khan is an idiot! Mr. Khan loves ammi."

Awww i loved this...you do manage to bring a smile to our face even in most serious of situations di😳and i love you for this

Di this whole convo between zoya and asad was just perfect...you should be in QH's creative team they would be much better off

ha ha...no yaar, i can't work under deadlines and TRP tamasha

I like ayaan calling dilshad ammi

Never in her wildest dream did she imagine Rashid falling for such an immature and unpolished person

Your characters are so real di...in QH dilshad doesn't ahve any hard feelings against shireen but here she does which is normal for a human being

Beautiful convo between ayaan and dilshad..i knew they would bond but i didn't think they would bond so soon

He has always tried to search Asad bhaijaan in me ammi

There can be no worse feeling for a child when his parent want him to be like or searches his another child in him...i feel bad for ayaan

OMG i feel so bad for ayaan he has never been loved by his parents and what can be worse than to think that he shouldn't have been born

yes, this is nature's way of punishing Shireen and her kids and also a punishment for rashid for not fighting for the truth

Zoya bahut nek ladki hai aur wo apne chaahne waalon ke liye apni jaan bhi de sakti hai lekin agar uski marzi ke khilaaf ya uske naa pasandi ka koi kaam karne ko kahoge, then she will never come back to you. Trust her and give her more responsibilities for Farhan. Don't alienate her. She can be your best friend lekin agar main usey jaanti hoon tho usey kabhie Asad se door le jaane ko galti bhi mat karna

I understand that girl better than anyone

I think this comes from what a big disappointment has been dilshad's character lately but Dilshad is indeed the person who knows zoya the best.she understands her in a way in which even asad doesn't and i loved how she spoke up for zoya.She actually acted like a mother.Thanku for giving me my favourite dilshu momma back😳and the way she walked off was a clear warning that no one can harm her cub till the mother lioness is there👏

You know i think talking to dilshad did some good to ayaan..he didn't shout at zoya for defending AK and even accepted his mistake of leaving humeira alone with farhan

yes, ayaan has really bonded with dilshaad...let's see how this plays out

Trust her and give her more responsibilities for Farhan. Don't alienate her. She can be your best friend.

I am so glad that ayaan is considering and paying heed to dilshad's advice..it shows all he needed was proper guidance and he can act as responsible not so selfish person...he isn't bad he just didn't have good guidance

Am I just a nanny for Farhan?

Way to go zoya...i am happy she finally spoke those words...ayaan nd other need to know that she isn't just a care taker for farhan nd i am happy to see ayaan realizing his folly and being ashamed of his behaviour

So the pla is in motion...so happy to see ayaan understanding everything...

Can i just say i loved the little romantic car ride scenes😳

Aww i am glad asad finally realized that he was wrong to have forced her like that..

aww he is a perfect gentleman opening the door and all...ab well zoya ko manana to padega na😳i loved his hesistance when he asked if she will sit at the back or in front

Aww i loved their cute banter about dilshad eating karelas during asad's birth😆

reminds me of good old QH days...ab to bas yahi sochti rehti hoon jaane kahan gaye wo din😭

Mirchi icecream really?I have never heard of it?have you eaten it di?

yes...it's an acquired taste for sure. As far as I know it's only available in Mumbai (maybe Pune also)

"Thodi teekhi, thodi naram, thodi thandi, jaldi se pighalne waali," he grabbed her hand, licked her cone to stop the ice cream from melting away to the ground, "lekin sab se zyaada tasty."

OMG how can you make eating icecream so hawwt and sexy☺️i am blushing like anything and my cheeks are all red...extra passion for us?😳..your characters do show passion more with their words rather than action...you must be one hell of a sweet talker?haina di?😳

he he...I am very different in real life. Ask my hubby- he would never consider me romantic😆 I am too practical in real life

"Ki tum hamesha khush raho, kabhie mujh se naaraaz na ho aur hamesha apne dimples flash karti raho."

aww this reminded me of the scene after asad's o janne ja dance😳

"Mujhey bhi ek zidd hai Mr. Khan," she whispered back in his ear.

am i just thinking dirty or was that a sexy whisper😳if it was it worked😳i could to tally imagine zoya mischevious eyes slowly whispering into asad's ears nd asad's sexy look☺️

She kissed him in public😳awww yahan to ye log band kamre mein bhi kuch nahi karte😡

Asad ran after her, "if this is the reward after every fight, I will make sure we fight a lot after our nikaah."

Who wouldn't like to fight if this how get rewarded?so do you fight a lot too di?😳

all couples do..those who don't are either lying or not communication with each other. Fighting is a way of communicating (another life lesson for you)

"Make sure you have shaved that stubble by then." She winked at him and shut the car door on his face.

Aww my clean shaved asad will be back😳but you love his stubble so why are you getting rid of it?too ticklish for zoya?😳

yeah...stubble looks great but doesn't feel as great😉

Di i can't tell you how much i loved this update...the little things that i wanted to see in QH during this track was shown beautifully and the sweet romance was just the cherry on the top...i hope i did justice to your update with my comment coz i can't tell you how much i loved this update...

love dreading your comments. Now I am motivated to start working on next part

chalo you can tell how much i loved this update coz this time i wouldn't just hug you i would kiss you too...muaaahh😳

I am officially declaring that i am in love with you di...so this time the song that i dedicate to you is"pyaar hua iqraar hua hai"

aww...love you too😃 That's the one good thing about QH- at least we all got to know each other

Love you loads di...muaaahhh🤗

Originally posted by: webuser7

Sangeeta, brilliant update! Glad to see that you are using your creativity to depict what Gul is not showing!! 👏

thanks RK. I have the luxury of knowing what people like and no TRPs or channels to worry about😆

Atta girl, Zoya! Way to go!! She's my kind of girl! Stand up to your beliefs and don't follow blindly whatever your loved one says!! 👏 👏 👏 Help Asad on your own terms!

Asad, truly the bechaara! Tried emotional blackmailing and failed miserably. Ab toh akal thikane aagayi aapki?! Don't mess with Zoya and her paak thoughts!! 😃

yes, i can never write about a weak female protagonist

"ZOYA, KILLING PEOPLE IS ALSO NOT A JOKE! Kya tum is mission ke liye mera itna sa kaam nahin kar sakti? Kya mujh par yakeen nahin hai? Trust me, everything will be alright. I just need you to look at the bigger picture here. Please say YES Zoya- mere liye, mere andar ki us badle ki aag ko bujhaane ke liye, hamare saath jo na insaafi huyi hai, uske liye- please Zoya."

Sorry, Asad! YOU are missing the bigger picture, not Zoya!! Badle ki aag ne aapko andha bana diya hai!! Confused ladka! One minute feels sorry for Rashid and next day back to badla!

from his perspective- he is right too but he touched a very sensitive chord there-nikaah

"aap mujhey jaante zaroor hain lekin poori tarah pehchaante nahin hain."

Ooh, Zoya said that many times! Buck up buddy! Time to really understand your love!!

"Zoya?" Asad was taken aback, "I am sorry but why are you making this a personal issue?"

Asad lost his patience, " tum tho aise act kar rahi ho jaise maine tumhein sach much Ayaan se nikaah karne ko kaha tha. Damn it, it was just a suggestion. Like an undercover operation. Why are you getting so emotional about it?"

Duffer, because it is personal! She is a civilian after all!! The only time she wants to go "undercover" is with you. 😉 😳 Aayi baat samaj mein?! Pun intended!!

Humiliated by her gesture, Asad stared at her," you can sit in the front passenger seat Zoya. I am not your chauffeur."

Typical desi man! I have heard my Dad say that many times!!

oh yeah...a fav😆

"I guess I should call a cab then." She tried to get off but Asad pushed her back and shut the door. He rolled his eyes and mumbled, incredibly childish!"

"I heard that Mr. Khan." She retorted.

Those were the days on the show...

Farhan was intrigued by the banter in the car. Giggling, he blurt out, "Mr. Khan is an idiot! Mr. Khan loves ammi."

My cutie patootie!! 🤗 Yes, out of the mouth of babes!! Although sad, in a way it's good that Farhan doesn't speak much at home. Else Mr. Khan ka bhaanda phoot jaata!

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Sangeeta, you are plain evil! Just kidding of course! Alright, alright! Granted I was confused about Ayaan - the most complicated character IMO in your story!! Now, I really feel sorry for the bloke! Bad childhood, missing parents, no siblings (that he can bond with), schizophrenic wife and autistic son. Wah, upparwaale ne pura chappad phaad ke gum diye he isko. Yeh bhi bechaara! Sabse bada bechaara. 😭

yeah...ayaan is paying for his mother's sins and also Rashid's sins

Will Dilshad herself be the farishta in Ayaan's life and give him a parent's love and guidance? Zoya's role is definitely different. Or a new romantic entry?! Or will Humeira be cured? Is it even medically possible? See, I am a true romantic. Agar insaan accha ho, then I want him to be happy (when possible). Time to give Ayaan a break!!

let's see what Ayaan does...he is indeed an imp character in this story but very unpredictable

Dilshad is a very caring person. Glad to see her bonding with Ayaan. Her insecurity/jealousy about Shireen is also justified. I am sure after meeting/seeing Shireen, she must have wondered what Rashid saw in Shireen to dump her and her kids. Usme aisi kya baat hai jo mujhme nahi! Is she going to figure out the truth about Ayaan's parentage? Aapka answer pata hai: wait and watch!!

The paternity secret will def come out but let's wait and see what Dilshaad does with that knowledge

"Zaroorat padhe tho taa umr!" Dilshaad got up and raised her chin, "jaise maine ki hai.. Mere baat par gaur karna. I understand that girl better than anyone. Allah Hafiz Ayaan. Main kal aaungi. Bahut raat ho chuki hai ab."

@underlined: now what are you hinting at? Dilshad hasn't been pining for Rashid all these years. I thought mentally she had moved on. So what or who has she been waiting for taa umr?

she has never stopped loving rashid. She might have moved on because of his sins but in her heart, could never love anyone again. We all love such idealistic characters because in real life that seldom happens

Glad Ayaan discussed the "Nikaah with Zoya" option with Dilshad and she dissuaded him. Otherwise the sherni would chew him alive and spit him out in a NY minute!! Bachh gaya Ayaan!!

Ayaan had returned with Shireen, confused and baffled after his conversation with Dilshaad. An upset Humeira unloaded a list of complaints about AK, how he snatched Farhaan and took him away, how he tried to hurt her etc etc. Ayaan was stunned to see the broken vase scattered on the floor.

Aah, the drama that awaited Ayaan at home. Where did Shireen disappear amidst all that? She came back with Ayaan but did not try to calm her bahu/niece?? Is she really that uncaring? Nothing touches her heart? 😡

shireen went upstairs to her room after returning from the hospital😆

Thank god, Zoya explained the situation and Ayaan understood it. Now where was Humeira when Zoya and Ayaan were talking? If the discussion was happening in front of her, then isn't Zoya added to her schizophrenic hit list?? How come she did not create a scene?

Humeria, like in the show, just watches with her mouth wide open😆 As Amber said in her post- Humeira is a side line player who got to play kho kho one time😆

"Yeah, there is a delegation arriving from Sweden next week. I had promised Rashid uncle that I would take care of all their exhibitions and displays. I need access to all their files and information."

Zoya does not know that Rashid is in the hospital. Then how could she take this chance? I am guessing she is lying as didn't Rashid want to keep her away from his shady business? If this delegation is not shady why is the information locked in Rashid's secret office? I am confused.

Let's assume Rashid keeps all the files with him and when she needs it, he provides them to her. As far as she knows, he is out of town (Ayaan didn't tell her where he was- he just said he was out)

"Am I just a nanny for Farhan?"

Ha.. Ha! Emotional blackmail isse kehte hain!! That statement should have hit close to home for Ayaan as it is true. He used and abused Zoya's love for Farhan.

"Main sach much idiot hoon. Agar Zoya ko yeh plan manzoor nahin tha, tho mujhey usey force nahin karna chaahiye the. Kya soch rahi hogi wo mere baare mein?"

Yes, Mr. Khan! You taught Farhan the right thing. You are an idiot!! Awwal number ke idiot!!

He saw her walk back to the car. Swiftly, he got off and opened the passenger door for her, "Z-Zoya-t-tum-yahan front seat par baithogi ya phir se back seat?" He asked hesitantly.

Ha! Ha! Yeh kya Mr. Khan?! Kardi na chauffeur wali harkat!! 🤣 Darpok kahinke!! Aap apni sherni se sach much darte hain!!

Main Rang Sharbaton Ka

Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani

Main Rang Sharbaton Ka

Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani

Mujhe Khud Mein Ghol De Toh

Mere Yaar Baat Bann Jaani

"I am sorry, I had no choice in the song selection."

"Waise bhi aap se itna meetha song thode hi expect kar sakti hoon."

"You are right. Saara meethapan tho sirf tum mein bhara hai, haina?' He taunted her back.

"Wonder what phoophi ate while giving birth to you?"

"Ammi ko karele bahut pasand hain." He chuckled.

🤣 The song and the nok zokh! Oh, how I miss it on the show!! Issi baat pe muzhe Zoya ki shayari yaad aagayi. Zoya ne arz kiya hai:

Mere humsafar na baniye, hume akele ki aadat hai,
Mere humsafar na baniye, hume akele ki aadat hai,
Zooban ko mishri na banaeye, hume karele ki aadat hai!

oh yes...that was my fav shayari from Zoya...it was cute, poignant and very apt. Wish to hear some more like these in future instead of the betuki ones

Wah! Wah, Zoya! 😆

Asad shook his head and mumbled, "I had no idea itni mirchi bhari hai tum mein Zoya." Just as he said the word mirchi', he saw his favorite Natural Ice cream parlor at a distance. He applied the brakes, parked the car safely and hopped out of the car.

"Yes, this is called mirchi ice cream. Eat a few more bites. The real flavor comes as an after taste."

Yummy, Natural Icecream. Oh, how I miss the "Sitaphal" and "Chikoo" flavor!! My favorites!! I wasn't aware of the "mirchi" flavor, but then it's been years since I ate Natural icecream. It was before my marriage when we used to visit my uncle in Juhu/SCruz that I fell in love with it!

yes mirchi flavor is also one of them...quite an interesting flavor

"Thodi teekhi, thodi naram, thodi thandi, jaldi se pighalne waali," he grabbed her hand, licked her cone to stop the ice cream from melting away to the ground, "lekin sab se zyaada tasty."

Uff, koi AC on karo please! Fall season mein bhi mujhe itni garmi kyon lag rahi hai!! 😆 😉

he he...what will happen on their SR then...u will have to move to alaska to read that part😆

"Mujhey sirf ek zidd hai," he whispered again. "Kya?"

"Ki tum hamesha khush raho, kabhie mujh se naaraaz na ho aur hamesha apne dimples flash karti raho."

Aww, how cute Mr. Khan! Kya aap apne dimples bhi dikhane ki khidmat karenge?! Kya hai na, hum bhi dimples ke diwaane hai!

"Zoya? Public mein?" His eyes popped wide, "that's a bit daring."

Heh?! Hypocrite much Mr. Khan??!! Mumbai darshan/Victoria time pe aap ne kya kiya tha? Woh public mein nahi tha? Mouth to mouth resuscitation?! Zoya ne cheek pe kya kiss kar diya, eyes popped out?? Lips pe kiya hota, toh aapka kya hota?! 🤣

Asad ran after her, "if this is the reward after every fight, I will make sure we fight a lot after our nikaah."

That's what we want. More nok zokh!! 😃

"Make sure you have shaved that stubble by then." She winked at him and shut the car door on his face.

Asad touched his wet cheek and smiled at her, "your command is my order your highness. Soon, this stubble shall be history."

Accha Sangeeta, command or order toh same hai na? Shouldn't this be "your wish is my command" or did you change the original phrase on purpose due to the navy hero?

yes...that's the defense services way 😆

Stubble will be history?! Party time!! I know I am in the minority but my favorite Asad is the clean shaven, short hair one!! So...

Zoya is being practical now...SR ki tayyari kar rahi hai😆

Waiting for the next update!!! Until then a 🤗 from me to you for cheering my depressed QH mood with your lovely update. I love a strong female protagonist!!

glad to have helped...next one is action+AsYa engagement😃

Originally posted by: bheegi

Originally posted by: bheegi

Originally posted by: bheegi

@ Narges: Yes, I am looking forward to Ram Leela too. Hope SLB doesn't disappoint this time. lately, his movies have been naam badhe darshan chote types

@ Anushree: You know, Asad has humiliated Zoya so many times but she has always returned to him even if he just shows up with tears. Asad is her weakness- remember slap scene, airport scene etc. It's the same situation here. Even though he disrespected her and hurt her feelings, the moment she saw his caring side, she just melted in his arms. That's very consistent with Zoya's character. I know a lot of people feel she doesn't have self respect but when it comes to asad, her longing for him outweighs any other conflict in her mind. Any other woman would have walked away a long time ago but she stayed back despite the thappad and then even at the airport, she came back running to him after he had kicked her out

Yes, I am loving mahabharat...their characterization and Krishna's Gita sermons are just awesome. I heard that 15-25 year olds are the biggest audience of this show. Kudos to their team. I wish my kids could watch it- they are so busy with school that they have no time for TV

Originally posted by: me2you

Lets hope so Di, keep our fingers crossed. If I can interrupt between you and Anu; lagta hai Mahabharat is something great to watch. I might consider to watch it too, since I do not know much about it. We used to watch it when we lived in India, but that time I was just a 2-year old kid 😛

Originally posted by: bheegi

@ Narges: Yes, I am looking forward to Ram Leela too. Hope SLB doesn't disappoint this time. lately, his movies have been naam badhe darshan chote types

@ Anushree: You know, Asad has humiliated Zoya so many times but she has always returned to him even if he just shows up with tears. Asad is her weakness- remember slap scene, airport scene etc. It's the same situation here. Even though he disrespected her and hurt her feelings, the moment she saw his caring side, she just melted in his arms. That's very consistent with Zoya's character. I know a lot of people feel she doesn't have self respect but when it comes to asad, her longing for him outweighs any other conflict in her mind. Any other woman would have walked away a long time ago but she stayed back despite the thappad and then even at the airport, she came back running to him after he had kicked her out

Yes, I am loving mahabharat...their characterization and Krishna's Gita sermons are just awesome. I heard that 15-25 year olds are the biggest audience of this show. Kudos to their team. I wish my kids could watch it- they are so busy with school that they have no time for TV