Asya abbu manao OS

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Hiii guys i m back with an os...i so wanted dis to happen dis in QH bt i knw dis cnt happen as it is out of d way nd if uh dnt lyk it thn extremely sry... So d story is tht ol d truths r out nd zoya ne apne abbu ko maaf kr dia nd zoya is nw statyng with his dad nd razia is in jail...siddiqui is nt ready to accept asya's relationshp... So d story begins... Asad nd zoya talking to eachother on phones... Zoya: plz mr.khan kch kijaiye na main ab aur apke bina nh reh skti pr main apne abbu ke khilaf nh ja skti...plz mr.khan(teary). Asas:- plz zoya aise mt royo main promise krta tu hu main har mumkin koshsih krunga ki apke abbu ko mana sku... Sayng so nd talkng for sum more tym he cuts d calll. Aftr few mins asad calls asad.. Ayaan:-salaawalekum bhaijaan. Asad:-walekumassalam...ayan mjhe tmse kch bat krni thi.. Ayaan:-jee bhaijaan khiye.. Asad:-kch aisa idea do jisse main zoya ke abbu ko mana sku plz ayaan... Ayaan whu is watchng tayab ali song suggest him...:-bhai ek idea h bt vo apki personality se bilkul hatkar h... Asad:-ha bolo ayaan main kch bhi krunga... Ayyan explains him wht to do... Asad(shocked):-yeh tum kya bol rhe ho...kya yeh kam krega? Ayaan:-krna toh chahiiye bhaijan bt bhabhi zrur khush ho jayegi. Asad blushes nd smiles nd cut d call.. Nxt day morng asad goes infront of siddqui house nd with his gang which he has ordered sings d song tayyab ali pyaar ka dushman haye haye...zoya comes out nd is schkd to see asad in tht avatar foloowing her everyone comes out of their house nd strt dancng nd njoyng...zoya come running nd hugs her... Siddqui comes out nd is surprised to see wht is happeng he slighlty smiles bt thn pretnds to be angry... Siddqui:-yeh kya ho rha h? Everyone stop nd r scared to nw wht will be siddqui's nxt step... Sidiqui:-zoya tum isse nikah krna chahti ho jise kisi chiz ki tehzib aur tameez nh h? Zoya:-bs abbu ap itne tym se mri mohabbat ka mazak uda rhe h pr main chup kuki main apse bht pyarr krti hu..main apse pyaar krti hu iska mtlb yeh nh ki main mr.khan se kam pyaar krti hu...ab aur insult nh seh skti main inki main ja rh hu mr.khan ke sth. Zoya:-chaliye mr.khan mjhe yaha aur nh rhna... Asad:-nh zoya main nh chahtaa ki ap mri vjh se apne abbu se juda ho main janta hu ki vo apki zindgi mein kitna mayne rkhte h...hum nikah tbhi krnge jab sbki manzuri hogi tb tk main apka intezar krunga...main janta hu hmari mohabbat schi h isliye allah humhe juda nh krnge...sayng so asad leaves frm der leavng a teary zoya nd a shckd siddqui nd family ... Aftr an hour at khan mansion... Asad is in his room nd doorbell rings nd dilshad goes nd opens d door... Dilshad(shocked):-ap yha?ayie andar ayie... Zoya hugs phoophie nd comes inside with his full family... Dilshad:-asad dkho toh kon aya h zara bhr aao... Asad in a sad mood comes out nd is schked to see thm.. Siddqui:-tum smjhte kya ho apne apko tum aise tamaashe kroge aur hum tmhe hmari beti de denge...tumhare aj ke behaviour ke bad mjhe yakken ho gya ki tum mri beti ko bht khush rkhoge aur uski khushi ke liye kch bhi kroge aur kbhi use uske abbu ki yad nh ane doge... Asadnd zoya(shckd nd nt able to trst wht dey heard):-ji kya kha apne... Sidqui:-yhi ki mjhe tum zoya ke shauhar ke roop mein qubool ho... Zoya:-abbu ap sch keh rhe h? Sidqui:-ha beta. Zoya :-abbu mjhe toh lga ki ap mr.khan ki bezti krne ke liye yha aye h...abbu i love uh...sayng so she hugged his father... Asad still in shck nd stndng der still...zoya came to him nd hugged him nd pinched him to tel him tht dis is d reality... Asad was so happy tht he hugged him back...:-m so happy zoya mjhe yakeen nh ho rha...he hugged his ammi nd his sibblings nd went to sidqui. Asad:-thnku mr.sidqui apne zoya ka hath mre hath mein dia. Sidqui:-tumhe shrm nh ati tum apne hone vale sasur ko nam se bulaoge?abbu bulao hume... With tht everone shred a perfect moment nd congratulated eacother... THE END so tel me guys how was it ol d cmnts whether gud or bad r excepted...plz tel hows dis through ur cmnts

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad nd tayab ali ! Lol :D

Nice os :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please use proper paras cant read it properly :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So cute story dear. Write more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnks for ur cmnts...nd ankie i ll try to post proper paras...nd thnku so mch every for ur cmnts
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please change your writing pattern

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