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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Awwwhhlleee!!!! Such a cuutooo wala story didi!!! And I laarrvvvee the way you write! Makes me feel shooo happiee- shappiee!!! I especially loved the Dilshoo-Zoya convo and the last part where Asad holds onto Zoya's and and she promises never to leave him. Awesome awesome OS!!!

P.S: Onions?! Rs 85/kg hai didi! Agar aapki tarf phenka toh daddyji mera katal kar denge! 😆 🤣 Waise hi aakaal pada hai pyaaz ka! 😆 Chocolates aur cakes phekungi to chalega?? 😃 🤗

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

beautifully written! I could totally imagine everything happening in my mind! it felt so real! nice work!

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Faatimah

@starsanjana

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

wow i wish u could wirte my story in english exam..i sure will get full marks...only 24 mins...👍🏼

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

beautifully written😊...n i just loved the ending🤗

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Susita825

@Susita825

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

love it love it love it sooo much

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KJSGforever

@KJSGforever

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Awww Asad's storyyy is sooo sadd :'(

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...Binish...

@...Binish...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

It was nice to read.

You have written it very well. 😊

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

KJSGforever, ehmmbhvirman ankita26 risingsea101 _Sadaf_ Linsie Prizi ..vidhi..

princess555 prettyji Susita825 ap3h7u MjhtFan_Mahima ButterflyKisses afsuu sps1234

kristenpattison annanyaksgian Love-AsYa- Enchantress 4ever srashti_kul MisZoobieDoobie nihirash rajnid68

Cindrella3 amruta04 suganti Raveena78 Fimmy AsyaManic rads73937 sasir ziya117 MayurnASYA

tnusredey -Mrinalini- neenabinu iqrasweet raj_tanha_fan Ramlath skavya

Saralicious --Kriti-- webuser7 tv05 DevikaRavish

Thank you all of you 🤗

starsanjana 🤣 🤣 I wish someone wrote my exams instead 🤣

Far - not all time i write, if it bugs me i do 🤣 😆 😆

Shrijaa - Nahi nahii mujhe Pyaazz chahiyeh aur kuch nahi 🤣 🤣 😆 😆

reyna. - I wrote that in ENGLISH, then re-worked with a Urdu dictionary 😆 😆 😕 Sure i will keep a Translated part 😊

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Amazingly beautiful Ankie...i was really hoping for more

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

It was beautiful!!

p.s- No onions..too costly...cucumber will do?😉

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