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Posted: 12 years ago
oh asad plz come back
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Originally posted by: --Evon--

Hi! I wanted to update before the week started. It is shorter, but I hope you like it.. Once again, thanks for all the responses!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
I'm pretty sure that without those, it would've taken longer to write this chapter. Honestly! So 🤗


So we pick up with Asad leaving...

Chapter 9

One mistake

You know, the people who say never do anything good for anyone... they are right. It's useless. Help someone and then get insulted in return. Perfect! She can spend time with her favorite Arhan all she wants.
She cares too much about reputation and unfortunately that guy happened to have a clean slate. But I've heard enough of him from others who had a different opinion. She'll eventually get to know him really well.
I looked at my wrist watch and unnecessarily barked at the driver to hurry up. There was still enough time till my flight.
She was a headache. And she hates me. Good riddance. God help him if he ever goes to her help.
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"Arhan" I whispered uncertain of what was happening. Mr. Khan's warning reappeared at the back of my mind.
He grinned. "At least you are awake, I can't figure out if others are dead or asleep. I need some suggestions on these."He raised the designs in his hand.
I smiled back. "Hold on a sec." I let go of the door to get my jacket since it would be cold in the lobby or any caf that's open. One thing I was very clear about Goa was that it is a cold place.
But before I could even walk a few steps away from the door, Arhan stepped inside. I jumped up when I realized he was right behind me. Without paying any attention to me, he walked past me.
The room was quite big for a regular hotel room (Ok, it was perfect for a 5-star hotel's regular room, I just wasn't used to it). On the left side from the door was a king-size bed with side tables and a dresser neatly spaced like some high-end showroom display. A seating area was straight ahead and Arhan spent no time charging ahead to spill everything he had on the coffee table that was surrounded by two couches.
He promptly took a seat on one of those couches facing the opposite direction. I sighed. I wasn't really planning on having him in my room... past midnight... two of us alone. I'm not that dumb.
He was so unassuming that I didn't know how to tell him to relocate. He had already opened one of the designs. "I need another perspective on this."
I was still standing by the door wondering what the wisest choice is. He... is a good person... right?
He looked over his shoulder at me. "Are you going to keep standing there? I didn't come here to tour your room, I want to tour your mind."
Finally closing the door, I walked to the couch opposite his as he eagerly asked for my opinions on his designs.
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My flight was announced and I got up to go. The matter with Zoya was still fresh on mind worrying me and frustrating me. But I warned her and now it's her responsibility.
So I got on the plane to leave Goa.
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Arhan and I worked for over an hour before I started feeling sleepy. I was reaching for my phone across table to look at the time, but he picked it up.
"1:02" He said holding the screen up so I could see it.
"You're not going to sleep?" I asked him as I stretched. He shrugged.
But, then he suddenly moved his attention from his papers to me. He stared at me for a few seconds before proposing, "Would you date me?"
I laughed because obviously that was a joke. My laughter didn't stop until I saw that he didn't look away, instead his stare had become more intense.
"Surprised?" He gave me a crooked smile.
I nodded. My mouth hung slightly open. Surely, he wasn't serious, I thought again.
He eased into the couch breaking the stare as his smile turned into a smirk. "I have only seen three types of women in my life: those who fall over themselves trying to impress me to be my girlfriend or those who try the hard-to-get approach in getting the position. Oh and there's a third type, those I'm not interested in..."
I was trying to gauge his intentions while my mind worked on hyper drive trying to process my situation and his sudden personality change.
Meeting my gaze once again, he added, "You are the first one to not fall in any of these categories."
I tried to smile to diffuse the situation, but I couldn't. So, I took the direct approach, "W-What do you want?"
"Date me." He said simply, leaning forward in his seat like he was asking about my taste in coffee.
I shrank back subconsciously as my brain tried to find a way out of this room, away from him. His friendly nature that I previously loved made him seem like a self-assured rich, entitled man who could be as terrifying with his smile as he was once charming.
The door was too far and I would have to go past him to reach it. The window behind me had rails and it was shut tight. We were on the 7th floor, no one would hear me from this height even if I managed to open it. Lastly, my eyes fell on the phone that was closer to him than it was to me.
My heart dropped when he picked up my phone and shut it off but not before adding, "so it doesn't bother us."
Clarifying that he knew what was going on in my mind, he smiled at me like you would at the futile actions of a kid. "The door is far, the window is closed, the phone is off. Now that we got that over with, care to answer me."
As if I had a choice.
"And if I say no?" I asked cautiously.
"You wouldn't." His confidence added to my nervousness. He rested his hands on his knees and chuckled at me, "Why would you do that?"
He talked with ease and comfort - like it was a business deal - except for the occasionally smirk giving away the amusement he felt. I was disgusted.
I had a plan in mind: to distract him and run for the door. So, I feigned curiosity, "Why do you like me?"
He tilted his head. "I'm bored with all the run of mill girls in short, skimpy dress with the mind of a five-year old. You're so much better. Smart and perceptive. Beautiful as well."
Instead of distracting him, I was distracted for a second at his praise since he sounded so convincing. I mentally slapped myself, those compliments are the reason I'm stuck in this situation. I can't use any brain activity to be flattered by him.
"But I won't mind seeing you in those dresses though." He added with a wink.
I had to use all self-control I had to not gag at his sleazy comment; his compliment long forgotten.
He seemed distracted enough with his thoughts when I jumped and made a run for the door. But I barely crossed him, when he grabbed my hand pulling me back.
His grip was so tight I could feel the bruises on my arm. I whimpered, "Let me go!"
He was too strong and was easily restraining me despite my continuous struggle. He leaned in inches from my face and I abruptly stopped, mortified that he was about to kiss me. But he didn't. He smirked at me.
"Stop struggling or I will really kiss you." I froze. Was he teasing me?
"Good! And now agree to go out with me!" He was trying to be sweet to me? I wasn't sure. I think he was honestly trying... Would anyone believe this crazy person?
I started struggling again wincing at the throbbing pain on my arm. "Stop it! Please!" I shouted at him.
He glared at me finally losing all his (fake?) sweetness. "I've never been rejected by anyone.."
The implied warning was how dare you?'
He threw me backwards on the couch and shook his head at me - disappointed. "If you just agree to give me a chance, we wouldn't have to go through this, you know."
He talked as if it was my fault we're in this situation! He was trying to hide his temper through a smile but displeasure was clearly visible on his face.
He waited for my answer. "hmm?"
"Fine, I'll date you!" I screamed back at him through the angry tears that had streamed down my face once realization set in about my desperate situation. There was no rule to say I can't lie.
He straightened up and crossed his arms across his chest. "Spend the night with me then."
My eyes widened as I looked up at his dead serious face - a challenge. He knew that I would have gone back on my word.
This was this guy's real face. This was Arhan's real face. I was so wrong about it. About everything.
I shivered and hugged myself. I see no way out of this.




AMAZING STORY!!

UPDATE SOON!!!! PLEASEEE!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG
I just loved it ff finished all the chapters in one go
Lovely and different concept
Plzz con spoon
So excited to see how Asad will save her
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh no...i jst hope Asad's conscience hadnt allow him to board the plane cuz i think he's the only one who can save her
Now that she has learn about his true nature,she will have to be careful in future
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update as usual...
Mr khan has not left goa...Right...He is going to save zoya😕
We should put Tanveer and arhan together, they would compliment each othe beautifully...The Vamp and The Creep😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
are yaar
ab to update kar do
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi everyone! Ok, I had no intention of updating in the middle of the week. But then your comments kept making me want to write 😳... I am easily pleased! 😆 Love you guys for the responses!!! This one is longer because I didn't know where to break it off. Enjoy!
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Chapter 10

Why is it you?
I shivered thinking about the consequences of what I just said. It took him a few minutes to process my words.
I staggered up so I didn't arouse any suspicion and tried my best to show my dejected face. Admittedly, I didn't need to try too much because I was really close to giving up.
It worked since he stepped back a little to give me a bit space as I wiped my continuously flowing tears. And that's when I noticed the vase on the coffee table that was within my reach.
He moved his hand forward to place my messy bangs behind my ears. I flinched at the contact but he didn't seem to mind. My heart was pounding as I decided to finally do something. I gathered all my strength and pushed him back hoping he would at least lose his balance and fall back on the other couch.
He didn't; but his leg bumped into the coffee table. And the momentary distraction as he cursed under his breath was enough for me to maneuver past him. He lurched forward to grab my hand and even catching me for a second. I got hold of the vase and broke it on his hand, so I can slip away before he could tighten his grip.
With a yelp, he held on to his bleeding hand and I ran to the door without looking back. I could hear him shouting as I ran to the elevator the moment I was out of the room. Frantically pushing the down button, I hoped the elevator will come faster.
Then I remembered that Arhan probably had too much pride to actually run after a girl. I threw a glance behind me and there was no sight of him confirming I was right. When the empty elevator finally reached my floor, I stepped inside and closed the door, pushing for lobby.
As the door closed, it revealed my haggard look, torn shirt and bruised arm, which told a worse story than the real one. I can't look like this in front of anyone, let alone the people of this hotel.
Quickly thinking, I pushed the button for 3rd floor instead. Most people in the hotel staff know me. Even if they don't, they will after this. I shook my head, that can't happen. The door opened to reveal an empty third floor. I tried to find the stairway so I could at least gather myself.
I slumped down on the first stair when I finally reached the stairways. I wrapped my hands around me but still couldn't manage to feel safe as I jumped when the door closed behind me with a click.
I made an attempt to hide the torn sleeve in a way it's not as visible. But it wasn't working... nothing was. My frazzled nerves were making me tremble even when Arhan and his awful presence was four floors away. Going back inside the hallway, I ended up in front of the executive suite - Mr. Khan's suite.
I leaned on the wall beside the door remembering his words. I berated myself for not listening to him because now there was no one I could turn to. I couldn't go to any of my colleagues. They hated me because of Arhan and the way he stuck close to me. His attention made others think there was something inappropriate going on between us. At that time, I didn't care because I had nothing to hide and I honestly believed he just appreciated my work. Now I know why...
"Zoya" I smiled when I heard a tender voice calling me.
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Well, it didn't come as a surprise to anyone that I was back standing in front of the hotel well past midnight. Yes, I boarded the plane. And yes, I also got off before the take-off.
I knew it was useless to come here because everyone is probably in their dream world. I had the urge to check up on Zoya, but I would look like a fool - or a stalker, take your pick - for going after a girl who rejected me twice. So, I decided to just go to my suite.
From afar, when I thought I saw a person standing close to my door, I just dismissed it as a light trick caused by my tired state. As I got close, I recognized the girl as Zoya and called out to her.
She didn't reply, only smiled. She seemed dazed. The closer I got to her, the more worried I got, the angrier I got. Her state was shocking. I didn't want to imagine how she came to look like this in the first place.
I called out to her again and this time she snapped to attention slightly scared. She visibly relaxed when she recognized me and relief washed over her face. Before I could say anything, she hugged me grabbing my coat in death grip and cried silently.
For the next few minutes, she stayed like that as I wrapped a hand around her and rested the other on her head to soothe her. I didn't really mind how long we stayed like thaat but it was worrisome seeing her shaken like this. For a person who didn't want help in getting her luggage in the plane, this was a drastic change.
She pulled away slowly and muttered something - a sorry or a thank you - I couldn't tell. That's when I saw the fresh purple blotches forming on her arm and I gritted my teeth barely controlling my anger.
"Who did this?" I knew; I just needed confirmation.
Despite her silence, her apologetic eyes were my confirmation.
I will bury that guy six feet under. Alive. I turned to go but she stopped me. "Don't."
"I will-" I clenched my fist. He was not getting away after making her like this! I wouldn't let him!
She stopped me when she said, "I don't want to be alone."
Her voice was trembling ever so slightly.
I let go of my intention to hunt him down. For now. That could wait. "Ok, let's get in first."
When we got in, I went to turn up the heater; I could tell she was freezing. She was still standing by the door shifting uncomfortably when I returned.
Since I already saw the reason for it, I took off my jacket and wrapped it around her. She eased into it giving me a weak smile. "I'll get something warm for you to drink. You should sit down."
Grabbing on to my shirt sleeve, she pleaded, "Don't tell anyone about this, please."
I nodded and turned to leave; but, she didn't let go. I looked at her again and waited for her to continue.
"Not even Tanveer," she added quietly.
I nodded again. Why would I tell Tannu all this? Why would anyone?
As I entered the kitchen, from the corner of my eyes, I saw her following me to the kitchen instead of the sitting area. She leaned on the farthest counter from me to stay out of my way.
It was awkward that I could feel her eyes on me; however, it was also a little cute how she followed my every move with her eyes like I might disappear if she looks away.
After a few minutes, I handed her the hot chocolate and we relocated to the sitting area.
Slowly, she gave me a rough outline of what happened in a quiet voice as I tried to contain my anger. I told her she was impressive for getting out. And I also assured her that I would get her phone and stuff out of that room since she had no intention of going back any time soon. As her story ended and her drink finished, her voice was beginning to gain back its original strength.
At the end of her story, she said, "I'm sorry."
"Aise bade bade desho main, aisi choti choti baath hoti rehti hain." I replied SRK style trying to lighten the mood and managed to make her smile properly.
"So filmy. Do you watch movies just to memorize these lines?" She teased me.
"Oh.. thank you for bringing it up. I wanted to clear this misunderstanding that I have a string of girlfriends. I don't flirt with everyone... I know you don't like me and have a really bad opinion of me, but can you stop treating me like," I paused since I was getting worked up and then muttered under my breath, "...another Arhan."
"You're not like him!" She exclaimed. Her reaction was strangely satisfying. I was exaggerating a little; but according to Tannu, Zoya thought I was capable of hurting someone too... So Arhan seemed like a good comparison.
"Even when I thought you flirted with every girl you see, I knew you would never hurt anyone." The strong conviction in her eyes told me she wasn't lying. But then why did Tannu say otherwise?
"You are not like Arhan." She repeated. I gave her a smile to say I believed her.
"You are a harmless flirt... sometimes." She added the last part when she saw me frowning. "I think your definition of enjoying life to the fullest is speeding ahead. Sometimes you should stop and take in the scenery. There's beauty in that too." She said thoughtfully, taking me back by her insight.
I shrugged having no interest in acknowledging my lifestyle problems at this moment. "You should rest."
She nodded but then suddenly spoke up, "Then, who was the girl by your door last time?"
"Who? Ah.." I rolled my eyes. "Arohi? She's my cousin." She looked away embarrassed.
"Your boyfriend will have a tough time with such a possessive girlfriend." I chuckled. There was a light blush adorning her cheeks.
"But guys like a little possessiveness," I added as an afterthought; it was true, at least for me. "Just don't go snooping in his cell phone," I joked.
We sat there in silence for a few more minutes before she yawned. I pointed her to the bedroom, "You should get some sleep."
"I'll sleep here." She lied down on the couch and refused to move, no matter how much I asked her to sleep on a bed instead. And now that she was lying on the couch, it seemed wrong for me to sleep on a bed, so I settled on another couch.
She fell asleep within minutes, and I covered her with a blanket; she snuggled into it making me smile.
I brushed a stray hair from her peaceful face, feeling relieved that she was moving on from earlier events.
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Sometime in the night, I woke up; the couch wasn't the most uncomfortable place to sleep. The moment I opened my eyes, I came face to face with Mr. Khan's sleeping face. He was sitting on the carpet and fell asleep leaning on the couch. His face was close enough that if I fully extended my hand, I could touch him.
I sighed, why him? Why was he so nice to me? There were so many guys in this world. He was too good to be true; Tanveer was one hell of a lucky girl.
I reached out my hand...
... pulled back. I shouldn't.
No matter what, he is unavailable, unreachable. In any case, he would've done this for anyone he knew. But why didn't he leave?
I silently shook my head in hopes I could forget all thiss and closed my eyes. Why does it have to be him that I...
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I woke up with a startle not realizing where I was. Then slowly, I adjusted to everything. Mr. Khan was setting the table with tons of food with the aroma spreading in the whole suite.
"You are up? I already ordered food, come on, eat something." He announced.
I straightened up as his jacket fell off reminding me of my embarrassing state. Then I noticed my stuff in front of me: my purse, jacket and phone.
"You already got these back?" I asked him as I wore my own jacket and neat folded his.
"Yeah." He didn't elaborate much. Well, Arhan probably didn't spend the whole night in my room... how did Mr. Kahn get in? I had so many questions but the enticing food was distracting my hungry self.
I sat down to join him and realized he had a bandage on his hand. I asked concerned, "What happened? That looks like it hurt."
He dismissed it looking at my worried face. "Broke a mug."
"So, I was right! You, the rich guy, didn't know how to work in a kitchen. I was so surprised that you seemed to have no trouble last night." I started teasing him.
"Right, because our houses don't have kitchens, we always order others," he replied sarcastically. "You should quit your reputation minded thinking. Everything doesn't revolve around reputation."
I sighed, he was partially right. That track of mind got me where I was.
"It's because for people like us, our reputation and pride are the most valuable asset." I answered honestly. From his reaction, I guessed he hadn't thought of it that way.
I had another question in mind, "Why did you come back? I thought you left Goa."
He didn't reply immediately, probably because of the food in his mouth. "The plane was delayed and I was too tired to wait in the airport."
"Oh..." I went to back to concentrating on my food.
After breakfast (a late breakfast) and shower, both of us went to the conference room for the meeting. I was slightly paranoid of others' eyes but they were mostly surprised that Mr. Khan was still there.
One guy from my team stood up and cleared his throat, "Arhan Sir was leaving due to a personal matter late last night and got into an accident."
Everyone gasped. I was suspicious... pretty sure he was alright when I saw him last night. May be, he left right after? Was he in Goa's hospital?
"You look worried; Want to visit him with some flowers?" Mr. Khan leaned towards the table to say in a low voice. Everyone was busy gossiping to pay attention to us.
"Yeah, and while I'm at it, I should also buy a get well soon' card and a fruit basket, what do you think?" I asked back sarcastically. He was just trying to annoy me. How can I be worried about that guy! I was only a bit curious at the turn of the events.
Before he could reply, Ms. Arohi came in to find him. Before leaving, he asked us to follow schedule and try our best without him. He also expressed how sorry he was at what had happened.
Everyone was making plans to visit him but no one knew which hospital he was in. And so I quietly slipped out. They were not going to work...
While I was passing by, Mr. Khan's suite's door was slightly ajar and I could hear Ms. Arohi. Against my better judgment, I eavesdropped.
"...really? That's all you can say! Everything is on camera, Asad!" She shouted at him.
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Let me know, what you liked or didn't like... Comment! 😊 Also, I've been thinking, I want to change the name since unreachable sounds like a phone lol I didn't think of it before. Feel free to suggest a name!
Edited by --Evon-- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Woohoo, I'm first! 🥳

Great update! 👏 👏 👏 That was SO cute-tastic! 😳 Totally ADORABLE! I loved how Asad said a SRK line, because if there's anyone I love, it's my Shahrukh! ❤️ Awesome! 👍🏼 And that cliffy?! Omg! 😲
Continue soon! 😉
-Fari 😳 ❤️
Edited by -LiveLoveLaugh- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome finally she saw what your eyes see and ears hear isn't always right and she saw the result of not trusting asad I hope he comes back and somehow she escapes
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome please continue soon 😊

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