AsYa FF: Unreachable || Note (p.58)

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Hi everyone! I'm not sure if anyone here knows me 🤔. I've been in an on again off again relationship with IF for more than 5 years now 😆. I very picky about the serials I follow daily, so there are very few shows I end up watching. I started watching Qubool Hai a few months back but when I caught up with the story (Tanveer's track -ugh-), nothing interesting was going on.

Anyways, back to topic, I had this story in mind, this type of forbidden love story. Because I'm not sure if this story will actually interest other people, I've decided to post this to see if it interests others and if the story is worth doing at all.. So let me know! 😊

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Short Summary: Asad agrees to marry the girl his mother chose because he believes love is an illusion that he can conjure up with any girl that meets his criteria. On the other side, we have Zoya who comes to India for a year and learns that her cousin, Tanveer, is soon getting married to her long time friend turned boyfriend. And this guy is someone Zoya knows...

Zoya Farooqui

Zoya is a twenty-two year old simple girl who stayed abroad for almost 10 years. Despite being abroad, she loves India and it's uniqueness. While she is innocent in matters of love, she isn't idealistic. She is introverted and but round her close friends, she is more talkative and fun-loving. She loves her family and considers them the most important part of her life. Love, according to her, is something precious that she would like to experience one day with the right guy. Because she knows that in this world, there is someone made just for you who will love you more than life itself...

But exactly how special does it have to be for her to defy her family and rules?

Asad Ahmed Khan

Asad is a twenty-five year old charming, friendly guy who recently finished his studies and joined his father's business. He respects his family but follows his own logic to achieve what he wants. He is stubborn and usually knows how to get things done. Love, according to him, is nothing special - a fleeting emotion that is also very weak, changing all the time. He decides to get married when his mother won't stop nagging him about it. And because it's Tanveer, his good friend, he thinks loving her shouldn't be a problem.

However, why is it that when everything was right - in fact, picture perfect - his heart refuses to play the part?

So they met,

...when he was her cousin's fiance.

...when she didn't know who he was.

And this is their story.

Updated: Thank you for the likes! Please comment as well! 😊



Chapter 1: Page 1 Life before I met you

Chapter 2: Page 3 I see truth in your lies

Chapter 3: Page 4 A strong impression

Chapter 4: Page 6 If you walk with purpose,

...you'll collide with destiny

Chapter 5.1 & 5.2: Page 8 Everywhere I look,

...you're all I see

Chapter 6: Page 11 Quietly Beautiful

Chapter 7: Page 13 Rude Awakening

Chapter 8: Page 17 We are all islands shouting lies to each other,

...across seas of misunderstanding

Chapter 9: Page 20 One Mistake

Chapter 10: Page 24 Why is it you?

Chapter 11: Page 29 Love and Infatuation

Chapter 12: Page 33 Me Pareshan

Chapter 13: Page 37 Kaisa yeh ishq hai,

...Ajab sa confusion hai

Chapter 14: Page 43 It's hard to say that I love you

Chapter 15: Page 46 Khuda jaane ke mein fida hu, khuda jaane mein mitt gaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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U got my attention... would love to read further😊
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Cheers...for your new SS..
hope to enjoy reading it..
as much as you will enjoy penning it..
I am hooked..
looking forward to read more. .
love to have a pm
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Thank You for the likes and the comments. I actually thought I already posted this. And I'm sorry, I'm really bad at all the formatting..

Chapter 1

Life before I met you



Zoya's POV
There was a phone ringing in the background blasting the childish song "Butterfly" in the room. I shuffled around in the messing bed trying to find that said phone. Finally I found it under the pile of clothes.
"Hello!" It was my mother on the other line.
"Hi Ammi, how are you?"
"How's your finals?" I settled down on the bed to talk comfortably. She calls me every other day to talk about her day and mine. We often talk about random things about our day like what happened in a serial or what happened to her friend or my friend. There is also a reason behind this call - she worries too much. She would have high blood pressure worrying about everything if I didn't call to let her know I'm safe, alive and eating well. But because my exams were around, I didn't call for a week. My schedule was study till 3, sleep till 12 and eat when needed.
"Good." As good as it can be.
"So were you cleaning?" How does she know that?
"Yes, yes, I was." I replied. My room becomes disorganized when I'm studying. And then right after I finish, I can't sleep without cleaning up everything and having it in tip-top shape.
"Did you know Tanveer is getting married in a few months? She has someone she likes. Isn't it surprising that nobody knew?" But before I could reply she started talking again..
"Her personality does feel like she would have someone though.." She chuckled. I did too. Okay, so I'm not being a hypocrite but Tanveer had a reputation. While some of it was simply because she was outgoing and fashionable, there was some truth to it. While I was never particularly close to her, I found out through my other cousins.
"I'm not saying it's bad. It's good and she also chose a very good guy. He passed from a good university and is running his dad's business alongside him. Isn't it impressive?"
"Ammi.. " I shook my head even though she can't see it.
"No seriously! I wish you would find someone like him..." She trailed off wistfully. I heard my dad say something to her.
"...what do you know, may be she already has?"
"No she doesn't.. if she did, she would've told me!" was my mother's reply.
"Right, Zoya?"
"Right, you'll be the first person to know." Err.. the second, because I would have to tell him first once I'm lucky enough to find him.
We talked a few more minutes about how impressive the guy was and how wonderful the wedding would be. Apparently, the whole extended family has already met him and the wedding is set for December. He already has been invited to everyone's house, my house included. I don't know.. my ammi seems especially fond of him.
A guy who joined his father's business - how is he impressive?! Even without the degree from the great university, he would've joined the company anyways. I clearly said that to my mother and she said I was jealous. She was funny. But from the whole 15 minutes conversation solely dedicated to him, the only thing I could gather was he was charming and easily flattered everyone in my family. The type I hate the most. I was thankful when the conversation finally stirred towards something else.
"When is you flight?"
"This Sunday."
"Good thing you will be here for the wedding." Of course! So she can temp to have one myself. Too bad she doesn't understand I need a groom first to get married.
"Not in a hurry to get married.." I answered. I want to marry someone I love. I'm not fooling enough to expect a legendary love like in the movies - I'm not that idealistic - I just wish to find a person who understand me. My parents, my cousins, my friends have found it, so why can't I? It's not impossible. Look, even Tanveer - the vanity queen personified - found someone who understands her enough to marry her.. without being threatened. Why can't I? But jokes aside, more power to her for her success, I'm happy for her.
"Zoyaaa!!!" I snapped out from my inner monologue. I have a tendency to that about things I'm passionate about.
"Yea, I'm here. I'm getting sleepy. I call you before my flight okay?" I yawned and started cleaning everything.
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Asad's POV
"I'll pick something up. There should be lots of shops in the airport." Asad looked around the airport trying to locate a jewelry shop.
"You didn't buy it before? I reminded you more than once!! You boys are so irresponsible! She is your fianc and you're getting her something from those airport shops? " His mother was getting exasperated on the other side.
"I didn't come to Hong Kong to buy her stuff. And these shops are sell expensive stuff. So, don't worry I'll get something good." He smiled. It's no big deal.
"Give some thought? Don't just buy whatever.." She entreated again.
"Ok, Ammi. Can I hang up now? My flight is in an hour and half."
"Allah Hafez"
I don't know what kind of thought to give? I'll just get something since I have to.
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Zoya's POV
"Hello, Ammi? I am in Hong Kong airport and I am waiting for my flight. I don't know if I can call after I check in, so I'm leaving the voice mail. Why didn't you pick up? I'll be there in about 6 hours! Bye!"
I checked in and an announcement came:
We have a technical issue with Flight no. 1354. We apologize for the inconvenience but please wait at the gate and we'll keep you updated on the situation.
I sighed. Something had to go wrong.
There was a bustling about in the waiting section as some passengers went to the airport authorities to check whatever was going on and how long it will take. Thankfully I was sitting with a bunch of university students on a trip who didn't seem affected by it. In fact, they got back to whatever they were discussing as soon as the announcement was over. Suddenly one of them exclaimed, "We need more opinions!"
I looked at them and suddenly the whole group was staring at me. "Indian?" I smiled and nodded.
"Are you single?" I frowned at the unusual question but nodded. Before, I could process what they wanted, they turned their attention to the someone on the row behind ours.
"And you? Indian right? Are you in love currently?" I reflexively turned to look at him as well.
He laughed in response and said no.
"Can we ask you a favor? We need outside perspective." The representative of the group, a girl in early twenties looked at us with pleading eyes.
"Ah.. sure!" I said without thinking what I was agreeing to.
Edited by --Evon-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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can you pm me




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awesome!! Do PM me when you update 😊
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your story definitely has good potential.please continue and PM me when you update .
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Thanks! I will!
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Originally posted by: asyamitwalover

awesome!! Do PM me when you update 😊



Thank you! I will pm soon! 😊
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Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..

your story definitely has good potential.please continue and PM me when you update .



Thanks! I'm glad you think so.. 😊

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