Asya ff:mohabbat si ho gai thi part 2 updated,page 1

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 1

"I love u ANNY,mai tumse bahut mohabbat karta hu,mujhe chod kar mat jao,mai tumhare bina nahi reh sakta"

wah ghutno ke sahare uske samne baitha gidgida raha tha,20 saal ka wah ladka phut phut kar ro raha tha uske liye jo use chod kar humesha ke liye ja rahi thi

wah bahut beyakini ki halat me jaise patthar ban gai thi

"please mat jao,mai mar jaunga,mat jao,wah janta tha wah har hal me use chod kar jane wali hai magar wah use rokne ke liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar tha"

"bakwaas band karo Asad! tum",
gusse ke mare uski awaj phat si gai,kuch kehne ko sujha hi nahi


usne aaage jhuk kar apne hath uske pairo par rakh diye,wah tadap kar piche hati

"i love u really aur mai..."
aaaj wah mauke ko hath se jane nai dena chahta tha ,kisi halat me yakin dilana chahta tha jo wah usse karta tha,magar wah itne gusse me aaa jaegi yah Asad ne socha bhi na tha.



Anny ne Asad ke balo ko mutthi me jakda aur do teen thappad mar diye use,phir chillai-
"kal jab kisi khubsurat ladki ke sath sadi karoge tab yah bewakufi soch kar hasoge,khud apna majak udaoge,phir yah alfad kehna jra mujhse"

wah chali gai humesha ke liye magar asad ko aurto ke liye ya aurto ko asad ke liye ek masla(ISSUE) bna kar...

To be continue soon

Aryaan
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmm interesting, a little confusing but I guess that will go once the story stars flowing. Good start though. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: B3ll321

Hmm interesting, a little confusing but I guess that will go once the story stars flowing. Good start though.👏

thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm confused, but sounds interesting
Continue?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar sab itne confuse kyu hai is story pe

part 2

wah computer ke samne baitha tha,uske kamre ke darvaje par dastak hui phir koi andar aaa gaya

"hello",ZOYA ki khanakti awaj sunai di

"papa ghar par nahi hai",wah uski taraf dekhe bina,hath mouse par rakhe hue bola

wah wapas palatne ki bajae kursi par baith gai, "to kya hua,papa ka beta to hai,hum usi se kaam chala lenge"

"shutup Zoya",Wah nagawari(rude accent) se bola

"ufff",zoya ne jaise maja liya,"kitne ache lagte ho gusse me,bas dil jane kya chahne lagta hai" wah shararat se boli.

"mere pass tumhari bakwas sunne ka waqt nahi hai,agar tum papa se milne aai ho mai bata chuka hu wah ghar par nahi hai",
wah rukhe pan se bola tha


lekin wah bhi to zoya zaman thi,usse tut kar mohabbat karne wali,uski mohabbat me gehrai tak dubi hui,uski berukhi ke bavajud yu uski taraf lapakti jaise parvana bar bar shama ki taraf lapakta hai,
usne kaha ki "aur maine bhi tumhe bataya ki mai manu jaan se milne nahi tumse milne aaai hu",wah badi masumiyat se boli

"aab mil li,now get out" wah bola

"jalim insaan! Ise tum milna kehte ho,do bate ki hai,wah bhi jaise lath(stick) marna jaise ,itni dur se mai yah sunne nai aaai" wah shikwa kar baithi

"are mere pas tumhare liye wahi kuch hai zoya zaman! Isi liye kehta hu is daldal me mat utro,dhans kar reh jaogi" wah berahmi se bola

uske sard lehje ki thandak zoya ko kampkapa gai magar wah humesha ki tarah muskurane lagi,"ab to is daldal me dhans chuki hu Asad!,tumhare pyar me gehrai tak dubi hui"


"pyar ka naam mat lo mere samne" wah chillaya

"ufff...ASU!(nick name of asad) tumhe mohabbat se itni allergy kyu hai?" wah jhunjhulai.


Asad ki aankho me lali utar aaai,10 saal pehle apne galo par padne wale thappad use yaad aaa gae the,uski dil chaha isi tarah ka thappad wah Zoya ke muh par bhi mare,PHIR USNE YAHI KIYA
uske do teen thappad kha kar Zoya ladkhada gai


"aisa hi saluk kiya tha usne mere sath,maine usse yahi kaha tha ki mai usse bahut mohabbat karta hu,aise hi thappad mare the usne mere mohabbat ke muh par" wah chilla raha tha

aur Zoya thappado ka dard bhul kar beyakini se use dekhne lagi thi

to be continue soon

Arya

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