SS:Reminiscing mangalpur. updated! ch5. pg29.(23/09) - Page 23

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"Zoya spoke almost in a whisper "phuppi? peas?? Dinner's on me huh??? Managing to give out a soft smile

Asad choked out a strangled laugh, he could not believe this woman-girl. Cracking jokes at her own expense. Trust zoya to lighten the mood even when she is suffering. How he wished he could take her suffering away. Envelop her in a hug and comfort her. He gently placed a hand on her throat ,jolting at her burning skin.

"You are too hot zoya!" he exclaimed.

"Why thank you Mr.khan . I try my best! " Zoya said with a dopey grin.

Shaking his head at her dismissal of her ill state."


Loved these two bits of conversation. the update was sooo cute.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Enduring and sweet. The update was really cute. Nice one.
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"Someday her son would no longer live in the shadow of the past. He will never be his father's son but his mother's pride .

Because she was sure, Zoya's Asad may not follow her, but Ms.Farooqui's , Mr.khan will never let her out of his sight."


Lovely update! So interesting, and super cute!

Dilshaad's perspective was nice to read! 👏 😃

Update soon! 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
ur an amazing writer! it was beautiful and I just loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zoas91


hey! thanks!!! i am glad that the update made you happy!
just a correction , umm my name is urja, 😳 not pari .
no offence!!😆

love
urja

So so sorry Urja,
See what lame ass tracks of QH do to my thought process, I can't even get a name right.'😡
My sincere Apologies Urja, now I am digging a pit to hide into that dark hole.Embarrassed
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Posted: 12 years ago
dilshad pov...very refreshing..
she knows asad is her pride..
and that zoya will detour him from his past..
lovely update. .
thanxs for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update, loved dat u wrote story from dilshad's pov as well.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
pm me when u next update
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wow amazing! loved it! you describe the scene to a t ! amazing! just started reading!

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awesome! very nice, loved it

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