SS:Reminiscing mangalpur. updated! ch5. pg29.(23/09)

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Read the whole thing in a go! ❤️

Loved the story! 😃

Please PM me! 😊

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ALISHA ZEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

how come I left such a wonderful story!!!!

this was amaaazing!!!
specifically ths recent last part wa worth applauding!!!!

a beautiful n my favourite part!!!

wonderful job !!!

continue soon!!

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

it was so so so so so so so Like AsYa. ❤️

brilliant.

when will you update next?

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Nai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Read the whole thing in a go! ❤️

Loved the story! 😃

Please PM me! 😊

hey!!! thank you so much!!

glad that you liked it! 😳

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Nai

@zoas91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa
how come I left such a wonderful story!!!!

this was amaaazing!!!
specifically ths recent last part wa worth applauding!!!!

a beautiful n my favourite part!!!

wonderful job !!!

continue soon!!

heyy! better late than never right???

so there! you read it and liked it and i am so so glad for that!!❤️

and a big thank you 😃

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Nai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
it was so so so so so so so Like AsYa. ❤️

brilliant.

when will you update next?

hahhaa thanks i try my level best to keep them in character (when my mind wants to go all guttery on them . tch tch)

😃

will update soon! 😊

and thank you so much!

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anushreemishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Wow this was so beautful...i liked that this was written as Dilshad's POV...it was different and it showed how zoya nd asad were feeling and behaving...

I loved asad's concern for zoya...zoya will be zoya always loved how she cracked jokes to lighten the mood...i am glad that dilshad sees and understands the growing bond between the two...

I loved how asad got up the end but still wouldn't leave her hand and their eyes were donig all the talking..beautiful last line

Awesome update...loved it😃

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

wow

it was amazing

but short

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Nai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
Wow this was so beautful...i liked that this was written as Dilshad's POV...it was different and it showed how zoya nd asad were feeling and behaving...
I loved asad's concern for zoya...zoya will be zoya always loved how she cracked jokes to lighten the mood...i am glad that dilshad sees and understands the growing bond between the two...
I loved how asad got up the end but still wouldn't leave her hand and their eyes were donig all the talking..beautiful last line
Awesome update...loved it😃

awww thank you so much anushree! well to say i love dilshad and wanted to include her views and fears about her children in this , glad that you too liked it!

they are asya! bound to be beautiful , nai?

:D once again thanks a mill!!