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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

😊

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Oh my goodness! 😲

As tomorrow is Ganesh Chaturthi.. I won't be online in the morning... 🤔

But Updates will surely come in the evening! 😃

Thanks for waiting! 🤗

today evening is perfect 😊

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
😊

today evening is perfect 😊

I need 2 spams after this! 😳

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Please update soon 😭
Please update soon 😭
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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Something is different...

I was sure that the teaser I had read had some different words

So I went back to teaser but it was not wat I had read

I was damn sure that something is fishy

so i compared the editing timings

and yah i had commented before you changed it

don't mind the change though but how come you didn't tell me 😲

and yah 100+ pages.. as if u don't know that Mahima is a regular reader of urs

comming to the update

i totally loved it

awesome work

brilliant it was

pizza cake... oyye hoyeee

fairy lights... drooling

so many kisses... i was counting them but lost track in middle

😆

so kisses for you too

my fav dialogues now

Asad entered the room with a box in hand. He put it aside on the bed and went over to the side table and lit a candle. He held Zoya's hand and guided her to the bed.

"OMG!!!!!!! Chintu... This is the best birthday gift... Pizza instead of cake and fairy lights all over my room! Oh.. I love you so much!", she squealed and threw her arms around his neck. He pulled apart.

She stuffed it into Asad's mouth and then he held her hand and guided the same piece to her mouth. The pizza was completely relished. She threw herself on him and hugged him tight as though he were her most priced possession. Well.. He was.. That's for sure!

"Don't worry Bunty.. I'll take what I want!", shouted Asad as he followed her out.

"Ye sab sirf tumhare birthday ka hi nahi.. Kal engagement ke liye bhi hai!", replied Nikhat with a wink.

Zoya rolled him to come on top of him and replied, "Oh no honey! I'll take what I want!", she winked.

"Hmmm", came her reply still kissing his neck. She gently sneaked her hand under his tshirt.

"Did I tell you not to?", she questioned looking at him and raised her brows.

She gently moved her hand on his shirt and started unbuttoning it. She bent down to his neck and showered kisses there and went down to his chest trailing wet kisses. Asad on the other hand was getting extremely restless coz Zoya had pinned him and over that she was arousing him to such an extent and he was not able to take lead.

He plunged his tongue into her mouth, the kiss becoming even more passionate with every passing moment.. Her nails were digging into his bare back and his hands slid under her tshirt caressing her bare waist.

luv u Mina Di

eagerly waiting for page 120+ (cause 100+ par teaser and 120+ par update) 😉

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Res

Unres

😳😳

I love Zoya as the Junglee Billi😳😳..This was such a naughty update😳😳

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago

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lasya13

@lasya13

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Thats one wild zoya out there..😆

watch out Mr. Jahapana...☺️

loved the update..👏

Edited by lasya13 - 12 years ago

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

awsm part.
Super cute.
Luvd it.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

I am Honored ... Thank you..

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#450

I think I've read one of your one shots... but I certainty do regret not reading your other works!!
You write simply but with such perfection n accuracy... it's amazing to read something simple yet so beautiful... I think simple is beautiful...
I really love this ss... in this story they are best friends first n then lovers... that almost immediately gives a different tone n setting to the entire story, right? I love the easiness between Asad n Zoya... something I see among many of my friends n believe should be between couples...