FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1 - Page 78

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

OMG!!!imagine my happiness and excitement when i wake up in the morning and see that you updated and dedicated this update to me...thanku so much...i am so happy😳now i will have to do justice to your update and this dedication and give you another long comment...don't worry i will keep doing that...

Oh they are in mood to stop are they...damn you thunder you disturb them again😡thunder is never a good news is it?

"Miss Farooqui, Ayaan yahan aa gaya hai bina bataye. Aap please do minute bathroom mein chup jayegi? I'll send him packing in a short while,"...OMG our loving brother mr.akdu ahmed khan whose's world revolves around his little brother just wants to send him packing so that he can carry on his making out session..well zoya twirling her hair around her finger would have made thinking about anything else but her very difficult...zoya what the hell did you do to him😆and asking to hide her in the bathroom...he doesn't want to give zoya any chance to change his mind does he?

Such a rookha sookha welcome to his little brother...man and now he remembers he has OCD...bechare ayan to hug bhi nahi karne diya...

So ayaan knows the news about asad and zoya getting married...so mr.khan finally gave in to ayaan emotional blackmail...

There was nothing more real to him than getting married to Zoya. But he had to lie for now, just to make peace with Ayaan.Omg this is the first time that asad actually accepted that everything that was happening indeed meant something for him and wasn't just spur of the moment...so self doubts,no second thoughts just knowing what you feel good for you Mr.Khan..but lying to Ayaan like that must ahve been so diificult

Aww poor zoya her heart must have broken hearing that😭damn you ayaan couldn't you have come some otehr time...do i see another misunderstanding?well our cliffhanger queen is back so i guess we will have to wait and watch...please i know we are in for drama but zyada der tak door mat rakhna asya ko...

wonderful update...and thanku once again...m eagerly waiting for the next one😊

Originally posted by: mochhug

RES!

Ok seriously, you can't do this. You can't stop there. Pretty please? I beg you.. make it a double update... please please please please please please please please please!!!!!

Now on to the update at hand.

First of all, lemme recap for the other one, because I couldn't recover until now.

DAMN! Not only was it incredibly sexy and hot, but you managed to keep it flirty, light-hearted and funny. That's what I love about your writing. And excuse me... but who the hell said you don't describe enough!? Not that I'm complaining. It was one of your BEST romantic updates yet! But still. To me you ARE the queen of romantic comedy for Asad and Zoya .

The way they were casually kissing and Zoya was removing articles of clothing from Asad, was so adorably hot. His mock anger, and shock, Zoya's moans and the neck kissing session, literally had me reaching for my own neck. ☺️ I was actually shifting in my seat, taking in every little bit of their kissing heaven glory.

And their dialogues! Don't even get me started! My favourite was this one: "Aap kitne kapre pente ho." Hayeee Who knew Zoya was so naughty haha. But she's so cute. Ahh it was literally adorable, sexy and sweet and of course funny. The whole package!

OK. NOW on to THIS update.

HOW CAN YOU STOP THERE!? UGH!

Honestly I did miss you cliffy's but pretty please please please please please make it a double update. I BEG OF YOU! 😃

Asad's reluctance at stopping their make out session was so funny. And Zoya's position on his bed endearing. Their interactions before Ayaan climbed in the window were such perfection I wanted to be Zoya with my own Asad Ahmed Khan

But then he goes and ruins it!!! 😡😡😡 How can he still say it's nakli!?!?!?!?! He knew! He knew Zoya was in the bathroom!!! Well then Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan. Good luck explaining that one to your Ms. Farooqui. If you can still call her yours.

Once again, my plea for you to update NOW, if possible and if not, then in the next hour or so! 😃

Originally posted by: mysticlover

That was an interesting part... actually I should say parts... I always end up reading too many parts together... n I don't mind it!!
Everything was perfect... the way Asad teased on the breakfast table n how he finally made her confess her desire to kiss him... I can't believe why I still want to call him emotionally challenged!! May be your last update's last part showed it... but still I don't take it as his emotionally challenged mechanism rather I would take it as his brotherly love for Ayaan whose heart he didn't wanna break by letting him know that Asad hid something from Ayaan!!
The kiss was amazing... I found it intriguing that Asad could come out of his comfort zone for Zoya... n not just that he's totally out of his character when around Zoe... may be this is the famed love everyone talks about!! :)
I'm just waiting for the drama... I love emotional outbursts!! ;)

Originally posted by: -ARLover-

I am getting more and more addicted to this story.
How much i wish to read more. I want this story to go on and on... So hooked to it.

Such an amazing writer you are
We dont mind 2 updates in a day either. Lol :P

You are actually the queen of cliff hangers
:P

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Oops!! Looks like Mr.Asad Ahmed Khan has managed to get himself into trouble with Zoya now..Looking forward to Zoya's outburst and let the drama begin!!!😃

p.s - At work, so the short comment🤔

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

i was expecting this only

been your reader for a long time

i know you always put some drama between romance and confessions

totally love your style though

Originally posted by: Enchantress

I am all ready for the drama. And, I know Asad just to get rid of Ayaan said all this. But, still it hurts because a man truly loves you if he has the guts to except his love for his girl. If he introduces his love as the only lady love of his life to the world. I think every girl excepts it from a man. This is the least he could gives her. I don't know how zoya will react after this, may be bash him or else will avoid him completely or anything. He may try to explain himself may be she won't listen and people may say she is not being practical. But, I feel she has full rights to react in any ways. So I am waiting for the drama!!!

Continue soon.

Dee

Originally posted by: webuser7

Thank you Monica! I love you too! 🤗 Read your TS, will comment later! Hope you sort out your issues (or rather your friend's) soon. Hang in there.

BTW, you missed a few nicknames! Check out the underlined! Purre nau hai! 😃