FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1 - Page 77

Originally posted by: -Aswini-

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hillarious comment😆 I think next update ll be dedicated to yo😆

Nahiii.

oh no cliffy. plz update soon

I am all ready for the drama. And, I know Asad just to get rid of Ayaan said all this. But, still it hurts because a man truly loves you if he has the guts to except his love for his girl. If he introduces his love as the only lady love of his life to the world. I think every girl excepts it from a man. This is the least he could gives her. I don't know how zoya will react after this, may be bash him or else will avoid him completely or anything. He may try to explain himself may be she won't listen and people may say she is not being practical. But, I feel she has full rights to react in any ways. So I am waiting for the drama!!!

Awww ASYA!! *Sigh* I really love this FF keep it up xx

Originally posted by: love_kash

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so i was hoping for a lot more romance and you give us this cliffhanger.but i am not complaining.being the emotionally challenged person asad is we can't really expect asad to speak out his feelings even if his actions does so.waiting eaherly to read the next part.pls update soon.

Haha itna romance toh de diya pichle do-teen updates mein :p Yeah we'll see if Asad even figures that there's sthg wrong :p

Originally posted by: Asya-Rm

Hawww! It was so cliffy again 😛
I loved it when Asad was chupaying Zoya in bathroom 😆


Update soon you know you can update even twice a day we wont mind 😆

Haha twice a day is a bit much! I just try to write an update before sleeping every night, if I'm not too tired. Din bhar bohut aur bhi kaam hota hai haha. But anyway, glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: webuser7

I hate cliffys! 😡 How could you break my Zoya's heart? 😭 Yeah, yeah Asad is lying to appease Ayaan. Damn Ayaan! Yahaan bhi aagaya kebab mein haddi. Like we weren't already tormented with what will or will not happen next week!! 😭 😭 A small but dhamakedar episode. 👍🏼 Zoya better develop a stronger backbone now and give Mr. "I wanna Kiss Miss Farooqui" Ahmed Khan a run for his money. Taking her for granted, isn't he? Humph!! 😒 Mr. Akdu Ahmed Khan!

Kidding aside, oye hoye! What's up with Mr. Chuppa Rustom Ahmed Khan? He isn't done yet with Zoya but wants her to hide in the bathroom instead of sending her back to her room!! 😳 Iraada kaafi nek hai, Mr. "I am hormonal" Ahmed Khan! 😆

When he was "busy" with Zoya, he was fine being Mr. Mess Ahmed Khan. Ayaan shows up and Mr. OCD Ahmed Khan is back!! Then he turns to Mr. Impatient Ahmed Khan and then finally to Mr. Jhoota Ahmed Khan.

Oh, wait till he faces the sherni in the next chapter, I bet we'll see "Mr. Bheegi Billi Ahmed Khan. 😉

Mr. Khan ke kitne personalities hai? Shaayad Humeira se tip le rahe hain.

Great writing, once again Dear!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Hahaha shit this has to be the funniest review of any part that I've ever seen hahahahaha. Thank you so much for bothering (: And really glad you liked it!! (:

Originally posted by: mochhug

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Ok seriously, you can't do this. You can't stop there. Pretty please? I beg you.. make it a double update... please please please please please please please please please!!!!!

Now on to the update at hand.

First of all, lemme recap for the other one, because I couldn't recover until now.

DAMN! Not only was it incredibly sexy and hot, but you managed to keep it flirty, light-hearted and funny. That's what I love about your writing. And excuse me... but who the hell said you don't describe enough!? Not that I'm complaining. It was one of your BEST romantic updates yet! But still. To me you ARE the queen of romantic comedy for Asad and Zoya .

The way they were casually kissing and Zoya was removing articles of clothing from Asad, was so adorably hot. His mock anger, and shock, Zoya's moans and the neck kissing session, literally had me reaching for my own neck. ☺️ I was actually shifting in my seat, taking in every little bit of their kissing heaven glory.

And their dialogues! Don't even get me started! My favourite was this one: "Aap kitne kapre pente ho." Hayeee Who knew Zoya was so naughty haha. But she's so cute. Ahh it was literally adorable, sexy and sweet and of course funny. The whole package!

OK. NOW on to THIS update.

HOW CAN YOU STOP THERE!? UGH!

Honestly I did miss you cliffy's but pretty please please please please please make it a double update. I BEG OF YOU! 😃

Asad's reluctance at stopping their make out session was so funny. And Zoya's position on his bed endearing. Their interactions before Ayaan climbed in the window were such perfection I wanted to be Zoya with my own Asad Ahmed Khan

But then he goes and ruins it!!! 😡😡😡 How can he still say it's nakli!?!?!?!?! He knew! He knew Zoya was in the bathroom!!! Well then Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan. Good luck explaining that one to your Ms. Farooqui. If you can still call her yours.

Once again, my plea for you to update NOW, if possible and if not, then in the next hour or so! 😃

Haha yay a long comment from you!! Hope you're feeling better (: And I'm really glad you enjoyed both parts haha, I try to keep the comedy so that it never gets too serious. Life's short, why so serious?? Hehe. Sorry I didn't update, didn't have the time haha was out the whole day. Anyway, really happy to read this (: