AsYa SS : Azal se Abad Tak !! PART 4 UPDT page 27 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Superb start!!!
Awww chhotu wala Asad!!
Pleeejjj continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Hey people m back again to post the second part of this SS.
I have got fantastic feedback for it. Love you all for such positive response.


Part 2

3 years later.

"Can we go to meet ammi and Najma now? " Asad repeated the question for 15th time in past one hour.
"Visiting hours are from 6-7pm, there is still time, you finish homework in the meanwhile". Zahoor replied with patience that was scarcely on his sleeves.
"I did homework in school itself, and that you already know" Asad left his mamu's side disappointed again. He wasn't liking living here with his mamu, his mamu was always busy, Akdu and way to disciplined. He wanted to go back home and be his naughty self, he couldn't always be a good boy, but since his ammi was in hospital and Abu out of country he was ordered to stay here. All his wait and patience will be sweet, because now he would have a younger sister to play with, he would be her knight and her batman. She would be his Tamatar, as she was all red in colour when he saw her for the first time two days back.

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"I love her ammi, she is so sweet Naa" Asad was overjoyed to hold his baby sister in his arms.
"Yes she is a little angel"dilshad replied.
Asad eyes turned dark at the word angel, Najma was not his angel Zo, she is only sweet tamatar. He handed her over to his mother and excused himself for washroom. He wondered through the corridors, as he had done numerous times since his mamu started to bring him here when he was six, because mamu was always busy and couldn't babysit Asad, so he bought him to hospital and here Asad was looked over by nurses in shifts and Asad always managed to sneak away. He was sad today, ammi had reminded him of angel again, he didnt know what it was but His Angel was special for him, for two days he had stood on the bench adoring her, and then she had vanished. Nobody talked about her, hospital was a place where hundreds of people flocked in and nobody remembered them when they left.


To be continued...


Common now start throwing chappals people, I know it sucks.
Do let me know how bad this is going 😉


Edited by blueflames - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Loved to plzz PM me once u update and update soon :D:D:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Ahh!! I was reading it again, and i want an update already!!I am so greedy you know😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
that was lovely...
update a longer part soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Beautiful di. I loved it. Plz updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
There is something so sweet about this story :') Gah! I love it 😳

Update soon! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ahh, can't wait for Asad to meet his angel
Awesome update
Continue soon and thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey that was really sweet and innocent update I mean he fell in love with her when he was 7 aweee that's really cute and I wish he meets her again and please do a favour give me pm for this ss loved it it would be really sweet of you if you drop a pm

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