AsYa SS : Azal se Abad Tak !! PART 4 UPDT page 27

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Hey all you lovely people🤗
I am back from the BREAK, it's been a crazy break (phew thank Lord i decided to cut it short)
Anyways I have brought another SS with me, keeping my bakwas short - scroll down n read.
I LOVE MY READERS, it's because of you all that I have come back.




Short Story : Azal se Abad tak



His insistent eyes peered through the glass, he smiled watching the small babies twitch and curl their toes. But one baby held his gaze longer than others, he tried to see more of that angel but the glass barred his way into that room. He tried to see the name card dangling by the side of her cot and could only read Z and O, in process of figuring out more words he toppled off from the bench he was standing on. Zahoor ran to catch him, and nursed his scratch "are you alright Asad?, he inquired.
"Yes mamu i am totally fine"
"How many times have I told you to keep away from children ward, why do you always end up here?", zahoor questioned him for the umpteenth time.
"But the babies are so cute", Asad retorted with a pout.
"Come on run along, I have to drop you home, it's getting late" zahoor mamu said, tugging his hand. But Asad eyes were stuck to the ward in which babies were kept. His mind only registered the Z and O. On his next visit he will find more about her, and he smiled at his thought.

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"But she was right here last week"Asad was harassing his mamu.
"She has gone home, she can't live here forever", zahoor scratched his head, because a little boy of seven was throwing tantrums because his angel was no longer in hospital. He was quite surprised how vividly Asad had described the baby girl, black eyes which twinkled, cute and chubby face with sprinkled black hair. Asad called that baby His Angel. Zahoor didn't pay much attention to his tantrums and tried to divert his mind from the baby named Zo... Well he could have found all info about Zo in a moment but he didnt want Asad obsessed with something like that. He bribed Asad with ice cream and chocolate but Asad sulked and cribbed only.


To be continued...


Azal se abad tak means from beginning till the end. This for those who don't know it's meaning.


Rocks and criticism 🤗
Anyways if you liked it hit LIKE
And DO LET me KOWN how it was.

Ps - it's a work of fiction, and I guess that allows me some creative liberty.


Anyways this part is dedicated to ankiewaa, my little Ayaan because she turned pink and I got to know it last night, although I should be Naraz, but keeping away the nautanki, this is her surprise.


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Linsie thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for explanation about the meaning of the tittle..

continue
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Because i HATE pink. 😵 Read - Rants of the I hate P.I.N.K. 🥱 was actually for this 🤣 😆 😆

Asad is 7? 😳

Z O 😃 - ZOYA 😳

When do they meet next? a Little bigger? 😃 😊 or a LOT Biggy together? 😃 😆

Awwhhlee mellaa cutto Asad - Chaaddiee wala Asad 😳 😳 🤗

What a RETURN 😎 🤗

Be ACTIVE will you please now 😕


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Wow so cute I lovd it pls do cont soon nd do pm me
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Saba 🤗

Where have you been? Its been so long.

And this was so adorable. 😃 Update soon
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Beautiful yr. Plz updt soon and PM me. Plz plz
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Seriously bolu? The start was very adorable, with the visual of a seven year old Asad sticking his cute pointed nose to the glass and peering inside to see those babies. And wow! One has already caught his eye huh? So, like everyone, even I have concluded the girl to be Zoya! (ZO!!!!!) 😆

Upload the next soon, Blue!!
And I missed you and Ankie and Sammu a lot, buddy! I haven't been online for quite some time you see, with college keeping me busy!

Annie
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AWHHH, It's so cute to imagine a little Asad obsessing over baby Zoya and calling her his Angel. Do update soon !!
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Awww sooo sweet...plz dii update soon

BTwn I jst love da title...sumthng really different...thnx fr pm dii
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Originally posted by: Linsie

Thanks for explanation about the meaning of the tittle..

continue


You're welcome.
Hope it was worth your time.
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