FS: AsYa - 36 Weeks - Part 4 Updated pg 29 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Noce start continue soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Sheer Brilliance! ❤️

Loved the entire thing! 😃

Please continue soon.. Do PM me! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Res! On my phone!

This was amazing! I love your writing style! LMAO Asad and a pregnant Zoya will be an interesting combination to watch. Especially now that they're adding two more to the mix 🤣 Bechara will have to deal with her hormonal behaviour.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE how you showed their fears and their reassurance of each other. Both by Dilshad and themselves. It was really sweet and a treat to read.

AND 🤣 The doctor's office scene was by far my favourite. How they were so in sync, that ever their stuttering was in tune.

Too good! Can't wait for the next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow! thank you everyone for ur kind words. they mean so much to me thank you. i live in the us so the timing is off. no im not a doctor by profession but i applied to medical school and hoping i get an acceptance soon. yo guys are way too kind. buddy me if you want a pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome !!!! Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing I always wanted to read a zoya pregnant story and finally got one
Please continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my god this is sheer brilliance you are such a talented writer...i loved it...it had everything romance,fun,teasing,etc...i loved the way zoya kissed asad senseless😳and the way you described their feelings wen they first saw their baby was so sweet😳i literally had tears in my eyes...OMG they are gonna have twins...i loved this chintu and bunty ki jodi and their talks especially in the clinic..
can't wait for the next part...update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsm yr
N I really lykd dis longg ch
Plz snd me pm regarding d other 2 updates
I hv snt u a buddy request
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Thank you everyone! Since everyone took the time to compliment me, I want to take the time to express my dearest thank yous!

@Ziya111

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it J

@akaswan

Thank you! I'll be continuing tonight!

@s120

Thank you so much for your inspiration. If you hadn't told me to rite my first OS, I wouldn't have been able to write at all. Thank you so much!

@Curiousmind

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked the story. And I'm sorry to scare you!

@Grad2011

Thank you so much! Definitely will update tonight haha!

@mizzundaztud

HAHA thank you so much! Stalk away. I kind of stalk other's people writings tho so it is nice to hear it is reciprocated. Thank you so much!

@Asyamaniac

Thank you sweetie! And no problem for the PM, I will PM to those who want it. Unless it becomes a chore after a while. But it hasn't yet so… J

@MizHumptyDumpty

YOU want me to pm YOU? That's a really high compliment considering how much i love your works. Practically everything on anticedy I have read twice. Thank you so so so so much! I will definitely pm you!

@AsyaRM. Thank you so much for your kind words. Will definitely PM you, just buddy me!

@chocopie

Thank you so much!

@life4me

thank you so much! Will definitely update tonight

@Xarina

Thank you so much! But i'm not really that romantic kind of person. At least not coming up with ideas on my own or anything. Which is why part 2 and 3 took a long time to write because romance meri zindagi mein ab kuch kam hai. But thank you for the really nice comments.

B3ll321

Thank you so much for the compliment! Means a lot J

@Jasminerose

Thank you so much. I think it would be cute to have a week of the pregnancy highlighted until delievery! Got the idea from the novel One Day J

@luvuasya1

Thank you so much for yor high complements! I truly just ran with an idea that was given to me. I will continue tonight and will definitely PM you!

@Ap3h7u

Definitely will continue tonight and will PM you if you buddy me! Thank you again!

@Divc

Hahaha 2 is definitely better than one. My foi had twins and ever since then i have been obsessed with having twins of my own in the future! I will pm you as long as we are friends, that way it is easier to pm everyone. And yeah I applied to medical school so why not live out my dream on paper!

@sheilasandhu

Thank you so much! Definitely will pm you J

@Shonajain

Thank you so much! Will definitely update soon

@Maha2012

thank you! Glad you liked it!

@kritzforever

Thank you so much. I kind of read online what parents fear when they are expecting haha. I'm only 21 so i don't know. I will definitely pm you. Thank you again!

@pheonixRadar

Please yaar call me Zarna! I'm way to young for the ji next to my name haha. I'm sorry that it was long. But dear – the second and third part are longer. So I think that you should buckle down.

Thank you so much for your high praize.

I am not a doctor by profession. I am a 4th year student at a University and I studied Cell Biology and Neuroscience. I applied for admission into medical school starting next year in 2014. So hopefully, I will get to be a doctor by profession. And Annie, you don't need permission to ask me a question. Ask Away!

@kurup

Thank you so much! Hopefully I will not disappoint

@braich_gal

Thank you so much for your high omplements! I will definitely PM you when I update. Hopefully they will not disappoint!

@princeegoyal

Thank you so much! That is such a high complement coming from you. Your writings have been amazing! And definitely pm you! And yeah the second part will be about coping with twins now that they are settled with being parents. Also now Zoya will start to show. So far the hormones have been kind of mum but now they will start to speak out!

@Venma

HAhah thank you so much but I doubt this would ever happen in real life!

@Webuser7

thank you so much for your compliments. Coming from a parent it is nice to hear that i caputured all the fears correctly. I was unsure of this part the most (considering I'm not married or anything) but thank you so much for your complements and I will most definitely Pm you J

@mehvish_fatima

I just think that it's cute that the real life kabhi have a nickname and thus think its cute that my AsYa have private names for each other too. I can't imagine Asad colling ZOya baby or Jaan or anything like that. So haha yeah thank you so much!

@Princess555

For sure! Thank you!

@-Mrinalini-

Thak you so much! Will definitely PM you pease just buddy me!

@Asyaarshilover

thank you so much! J

@mochhug

KYA?! Am i reading this right? The infamous mouchhug reserved a post on my TS. Thank you so much for the high compliments. They mean a lot coming from you, and i truly mean that. Thank you so sosososososososoos much. Thank you so much!! EPPP J

And yah you are right. The meat of the story is the second and third trimesters. HAHA the first one was just a set up. Now that the have overcome their fears of parenthood lets see them deal with the good the bad and the ugly of kids and twins. Hehehehehe

@tsering2013

Thank you so much and will definitely continue soon.

@Mariya_a

Thank you so much! But the idea belongs to –PreetK- no doubt because they too wanted to see a preggo zoya. Thank you so much for the compliment. Just buddy me and i will definitely PM you!

@anushreemishra

Thank you so much! Your words are really too kind. They made me smile. I was a little worried about portraying their feelings accordingly but I'm glad they translated well. Thank you so much! Will definitely update tonight! Thank you once again, your words meant a lot!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reyansh23

Awsm yr
N I really lykd dis longg ch
Plz snd me pm regarding d other 2 updates
I hv snt u a buddy request


thank you so much! will definately update soon. this is the shortest one out of the three =S hopefully the other two are just as good!

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