New Ayra OS: Woh Kuch Lamhe

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Great Shot! 👍🏼

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nikki.171

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Loved it ! FInally a piece on the situation AyRa is going through.

Deifintely continue this !

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madhvi4gurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

just loved the wat u described Ayaan's state of mind n his feelings!!!

perfect!👏

i feel so bad for him...poor Ayaan! if only he knew that Humeira left becoz her mother insisted upon it!!!! he wud have felt less guilter bt the love wud not have decreased!😉

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Asya_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: _Annie_
Great Shot! 👍🏼

Thank you! 😃

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: nikki.171
Loved it ! FInally a piece on the situation AyRa is going through.

Deifintely continue this !

Thank you! Will do 😃

By the way love your signature! 👍🏼

Edited by Asya_Maaneet - 12 years ago

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Asya_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti
just loved the wat u described Ayaan's state of mind n his feelings!!!
perfect!👏
i feel so bad for him...poor Ayaan! if only he knew that Humeira left becoz her mother insisted upon it!!!! he wud have felt less guilter bt the love wud not have decreased!😉

Thanks so much! 😊 And yeah even I feel bad for him, damn Razia! 😡

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simisworld

@simisworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Ahhh I loved it. Great job! I had scanned the forum for other ArYa stories and had found none which really surprised me. I actually ended up writing an OS on this very scene as well because like you, I loved it. If you are interested, check out mine.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3685174

but getting back to yours, I love how vulnerable you made Ayaan. Especially when he walks into the room and finds them jumpting apart. I hope you continue and make this a longer story!

Simran

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: princess555
Nice os

thank you! 😃

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: simisworld
Ahhh I loved it. Great job! I had scanned the forum for other ArYa stories and had found none which really surprised me. I actually ended up writing an OS on this very scene as well because like you, I loved it. If you are interested, check out mine.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3685174

but getting back to yours, I love how vulnerable you made Ayaan. Especially when he walks into the room and finds them jumpting apart. I hope you continue and make this a longer story!

Simran

Thank you! 😊 I am glad you liked it! 😃 I will def get around to reading it, Thanks for the link! 😊 and I will continue, once I feel that AyRa have received more screen space than Razia 😆

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Asya0910

@Asya0910

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

loved it! and sorry for the late comment!

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