New Ayra OS: Woh Kuch Lamhe

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey all! I wrote a short OS on Ayaan's thoughts during the last half of the episode. I am unsure if I should leave it an OS or make it a TS, continuing after tomorrows episode. It is my first time writing on AyRa, so forgive me if I didn't hit all the points. 😳 Other than that, please do let me know what you think whether it is good or bad! I really will take all criticism 😃 Aside from that Enjoy! 😊

AyRa OS: Woh Kuch Lamhe

"She would have left", Ayaan kept thinking as he walked into his room. He had just thought of a way to keep Humaira in the house. "That man would have taken her! She would have left us! She would have left me!" The words stabbed him in his heart as he stood there. "Kuan hai yeh! Kahan se aaya hai? Kyun aaya hai?" Ayaan's mind was off end, his feelings were getting the best of him. He stood there, a defeated face, a shabby look that displayed how drained he felt, no energy, no brain power just feelings, a bunch of jammed up emotions that surged their way through his eyes, as they took the form of tears. He was so frustrated, exerting so much force within him that he began to sweat. One look at him and anyone can notice that he hasn't slept in days. Ayaan felt cold, it was the air plus his body's energy, he wasn't able to control himself! His eyes spoke a thousand words from within his soul. Ayaan was shaking profusely, as he paced his room, as he stood in one place thinking.

He sat down for a second, "she thinks she is someone else, what if she is? Reason with yourself Ayaan. But what is she isn't? what if she is my Humaira! Someone else if here to say that she is supposed to spend her life with him! But the picture! How can she look just like Humaira? Why is this so damn confusing!" He stood up and picked up the first thing he felt in front of him. He juggled it for a while, remembering the way Vikram touched her shoulder, the way they hugged. Ayaan cringed at that scene, Humaira, the one girl who stood by him always, even if it meant going against her parents. She always wanted the best for him, always wanted his love. "Mohabaat! Usse sirf mera pyaar chaiye tha! Agar uss din mein who sab nahin kehta toh aaj….meri galati hai! Aaj yeh jo sab ho raha hai woh meri galati hai. Humaira humse door hai, meri wajah se; woh uss din ghar se gayi, meri wajah se; khud ko koi aur maanti hai, meri wajah se ; kisi aur ko woh apna shohar maanti hai, meri wajah se." He lifted the item in his hand and threw it with full force against the floor. Just then Nikhat walked in. Ayaan talked with her for a while as he did he thought "how? How do I explain to her that she can be Humaira! Why doesn't anyone understand?" "All she wanted was your love, for you to long for her. Today when we have that, we don't have our Humaira" she said crying. Ayaan stood there listening to every word his sister said, each word registered not in his brain but in his heart. "she didn't want anything else, choti si cheez, sirf meri mohabaat. Wait a second, if they all believe she is Rajni than….Ya Allah where is she now?"

Ayaan took Nikhat by the shoulders "kahan hai woh, Nikhat mujhe batao kahan hai who?" Nikhat was all choked up with tears "please don't say it! Please don't say what I think you are about to say!" he pleaded silently. "Woh Vikramji ke saath, guest room mein" she said crying and walked off. "No, No! This can't be! How can she! How can she go in there with him?!" Ayaan began to tear, the tears came slow but each one had a different sensation that made his cheeks sting as they trailed down his face to his chin. Ayaan paced his room, the thought of Humaira behind closed doors with another man, made his blood boil. He paced, back and forth, he thought. Humaira's face kept coming in front of his eyes, Ayaan thought of her words, he became from Ayaan to Ayaanji. Her sweet, innocent smile. She was his Humaira! She had to be! He thought of all the moments they spent together, like a life review all within these few moments. "Nahin! Nahin! Mein usse kisi aur ke saath nahin rehne de sakta!" he rushed out of his room, towards the guest room "Chahiye sab lok maan gaye! Mujhe koi parvah nahin! Koi kuch bhi kahe, woh Humaira hai, meri Humaira" he turned the corner and saw the door closed, as if on instinct his hands leapt forward and he pushed the door opened. Ayaan stood there, he saw how both have just separated from a hug, and they both seemed shy. Ayaan stood there frozen, trying to process what he just may stopped from happening.

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mochhug thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES!

At school, but will come back to unres later tonight

UGH. This was sooo good. His desperation, guilt and helplessness were all so beautifully and painfully portrayed. LOVED IT.

And you should DEFINITELY continue. Wouldn't it be nice, if his confession, his realization of how much he loves her is what brought her out of this state of partial amnesia?

Sigh.

LOVED IT! Please please please continue it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow

Beautifully written

Well described wat Ayaan had felt

Just loved the entire piece of work

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really well written. Ayaan is one confused soul just like Asad was a while back. I love their current track.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice oa..wel exprsd...thnks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am left stunned, that was simple mind blowing!!! Loved every feeling and emotion you depicted! Especially the jealousy! PLEASE turn this to a TS! And please pm me if possible! Awesome job 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it!!!!
It was just gawjuss!
Its my first time reading an Ayra OS.
This was just superb yaar.
I loved how u described Ayaans emotions so well!!!
Oh and Continue! Thanks for the PM.

Love Andy XOXO
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG this was awesome! You described Ayaan's restlessness and turmoil so well!

I want Ayaan to punch that creepy Vikram in the face 🤢 He was touching Humzie like a creep with his creepy hands and creepy expressions 🤢

Great OS! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great OS...very touching...i loved the way how you described ayaan's feeling...i could feel his pain..
very nicely written...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey tis is superb...
wow luv all the emotion u potray for ayaan...
beautifully written...
thx fr the pm...

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