New Ayra OS: Woh Kuch Lamhe - Page 2

Originally posted by: mochhug

RES!

At school, but will come back to unres later tonight

UGH. This was sooo good. His desperation, guilt and helplessness were all so beautifully and painfully portrayed. LOVED IT.

And you should DEFINITELY continue. Wouldn't it be nice, if his confession, his realization of how much he loves her is what brought her out of this state of partial amnesia?

Sigh.

LOVED IT! Please please please continue it!

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Wow

Beautifully written

Well described wat Ayaan had felt

Just loved the entire piece of work

Thumbs up

Originally posted by: Curiousmind

Really well written. Ayaan is one confused soul just like Asad was a while back. I love their current track.

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Nice oa..wel exprsd...thnks for pm..

Originally posted by: salekh1

I am left stunned, that was simple mind blowing!!! Loved every feeling and emotion you depicted! Especially the jealousy! PLEASE turn this to a TS! And please pm me if possible! Awesome job 😆

Originally posted by: Andy_Loves_ASYA

I loved it!!!!

It was just gawjuss!

Its my first time reading an Ayra OS.

This was just superb yaar.

I loved how u described Ayaans emotions so well!!!

Oh and Continue! Thanks for the PM.

Love Andy XOXO

Originally posted by: KulfiBai

OMG this was awesome! You described Ayaan's restlessness and turmoil so well!

I want Ayaan to punch that creepy Vikram in the face 🤢 He was touching Humzie like a creep with his creepy hands and creepy expressions 🤢

Great OS! 😃

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Great OS...very touching...i loved the way how you described ayaan's feeling...i could feel his pain..

very nicely written...😊

Originally posted by: veenisha

superb

loved it

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is superb...

wow luv all the emotion u potray for ayaan...

beautifully written...

thx fr the pm...