AsYa OS: Boliye, Mr. Khan

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janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

This was such a beautiful Os. Exactly what I wanted after the walima:)

Made my day

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet
This was so nice! Really loved reading it! 😊 Brilliant idea! 👏

Haha thanks! But I can't take all the credit, as it was Kiran's idea to make him confess in an angsty situation 😆

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ABI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

I loved how Zoya convinced Asad that he is not like Rashid and finally making him confess his feelings for her. This was really a deep OS !!

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: mochhug

Haha thanks! But I can't take all the credit, as it was Kiran's idea to make him confess in an angsty situation 😆

Well than brilliant, amazing idea by Kiran!😊 And brilliant se bhi outstanding writing by Monica! 😊

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

oomph!!!!! Lov ya Mo!!
perfect scenes!!
perfectto dialogues!!
p.S lovd the first embrace.
thnx 4 the PM

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rads73937

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Awww.

Beautiful.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

absolutely beautiful, I just loved it. how I wish the show would have gone ahead on this track, we wouldn't have had to bear so much pain along with AsYa. Fantastic job.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

That was so so so beautiful...Amazing...wah...!!!! 😊

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Errm..

Res? 😳

Gonna comment in a bit.. I gotta get a big boy munch 😃

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This OS made me cry 😭

The way I would have loved to see this happen in the show itself.. Would have been great ..

Your choice of words was beautiful as usual 😃

My favourite part in this obviously has to be when he flung the door open and just hugged her when she threatened him to go to new York 😳 I could imagine everything.. It felt more like the scene when he imagined her after she had left the house 😳

When Zoya started talking about his pain.. It was so emotional. I felt like everything was real That's how sad it was.. Your choice of words just makes everything seem so real.. Just imagining Asad crying makes my heart shatter

Again when he hugs her and tells her why he's scared I swear it's like you're hell bent on making me cry even though this OS has a happy ending.. It still has a crying Asad all the way through.. But the star of the OS has to be Zoya and the way she compelled him to confess.. It was just amazing .. Why couldn't we av a confession like this in the show

Edited by x_Mishti_x - 12 years ago